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Posted: 14 years ago
dear...😊
1stly ...4 PM me hunn...
u really done n
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4 that to u..👍🏼.
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4 donn't comment regular but also late n short.becouse of my exam.....
4 ur update tons of n ..🤗.
again 4 ur update..😃..
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Posted: 14 years ago
U made me cry again...But I feel the love that u wanted us to feel.
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Posted: 14 years ago
I have no words to describe your os. This is the first time ever i had tears in my eyes when reading something. It was so beautifully written. I could actually feel maan's fear and geet's pain. I was a bit apprehensive when i read ur first part but at the end of it, i must give a standing ovation to you. Not because it was a good story, of course it was wonderful, but because it managed to capture my heart and i'm sure many others. You have brought out so well, that lover just doesnt exist when the other person exists, it lasts much more than that and if u love a person, you dont need the person with you to feel his presence. It is also sad how people suffer for no fault of thiers. Here is one example you have given. We should consider ourselves blessed and stop complaining. Last but not the least KUDOS to you and sorry for the long post but i couldn help myself. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
i dn knw what to say...jus that it was heartwrenching...<am still in tears>
beautiful story...and hats off to you👏👏
p.s though i would still ask you to let maan and geet be together in your other stories...living or dead...doesn't matter...jus them😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesummm work maanddy... i jus loved it to the core!!!!


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Posted: 14 years ago
very well written...I was in tears while reading it...I loved it n enjoyed it very much...keep writing...👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: princess163

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For this last part, kudos to you Khurani!
A lump in my throat refuses to go down,
as the love here has me blown!
Love never dies, they say...
love always manages to find its way!
throughthick, through thin, even through death,
Love holds you, not the tears you shed!
With your love by your side,
Happiness and joy fills each stride!
together on the endless journey they glide,
Love breaks all rules there are to abide...
People are bound by what they feel,
Even though relations of blood may lose their zeal,
Those bound by the intricasies of life,
Stay by you in joy, peace and strife!
its love that soothes, love that binds,
Love that heals, love that defines!
Though death won, life didn't lose,
together lived the artist and his muse!
The faith, the dedication never fails to shock,
Yet, LOVE is the answer to all the blocks!
I would now want to go my views about all the three parts!
Frankly speaking, I was not too fond of Geet's character in the first two parts!
Yes, he was a playboy, but, having been with him for such a long period of time, when she claimed to have understood him, and known him, I don't find any place for insecurity that she harboured in her heart!
She accepted the fact that he loved her, how could she even think that he intentionally ruined her life? Yes, i know it was really hard on her...it was a matter of an incurable and life-threatening disease, but such a big allegation shows lack of faith on her part!
Maan, i loved him through this OS-each moment, each part!
the third part touched me deeply...It was not about the disease taking his life;it was about their fight against the disease that they won! As i said, death won, but life didn't lose!
again, it was beyond the pain due to death...it was a celebration of life...a celebration of love...the victory of love over pain!
Chotu's character was great and his words in the end, were for me, the highlight of the OS!
thanks a lot khurani!
Loved my surprise!
Swati




OMG ! Long one ! BTW love you ! And movie " Shaitan " is completely my type ! Loved RK in that !

Okay, coming to the track !

Yes, I know Armaan was the highlight and last surprise of the OS and thats why I said it was different coz, you know in Maaneet OS I was taking risk of giving more importance to some other characters, too !

And, Personally my fav part was that last line of Armaan, I love...DAD !

Imagine...the man who was noway had dreamed for being father and yet, Life takes one turn and he is mentor, friend, teacher and a father...Isn't it beautiful ?

Personally, for me it was in third part, there was Maan and Armaan relation which is my fav and Maaneet are awesome always...!

Yeah...In Geet defense, I can say that when your BF is in public image and loved by all, you can't not escape the insecurity fear ! And, that too...in hi-fi city, live in...All factors are to be considered...

Are yr...I wanted to write more but I have to go now...gonna go for make over now...Bye..Will add and edit more tomorrow...BTW i read all comments and got that you sent PMs...Oh thats great !

Will reply to each and every one tomorrow ! Today to I'm hell busy...! 😊


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: maanddy




OMG ! Long one ! BTW love you ! And movie " Shaitan " is completely my type ! Loved RK in that !

Okay, coming to the track !

Yes, I know Armaan was the highlight and last surprise of the OS and thats why I said it was different coz, you know in Maaneet OS I was taking risk of giving more importance to some other characters, too !

And, Personally my fav part was that last line of Armaan, I love...DAD !

Imagine...the man who was noway had dreamed for being father and yet, Life takes one turn and he is mentor, friend, teacher and a father...Isn't it beautiful ?

Personally, for me it was in third part, there was Maan and Armaan relation which is my fav and Maaneet are awesome always...!

Yeah...In Geet defense, I can say that when your BF is in public image and loved by all, you can't not escape the insecurity fear ! And, that too...in hi-fi city, live in...All factors are to be considered...

Are yr...I wanted to write more but I have to go now...gonna go for make over now...Bye..Will add and edit more tomorrow...BTW i read all comments and got that you sent PMs...Oh thats great !

Will reply to each and every one tomorrow ! Today to I'm hell busy...! 😊


awww...my busy khurani! I am waiting!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

yaaar maanddy what have you written?i have never cried as much as i have sobbed after and during redaing your intensely emotional and brillainatly scipted full of understanding OS woww what a masterpiece...it has been an enlightening journey for me knowing about tow ppl in love with each other but caughtin the struggle of life and death together..wow brilliantly exposed mortality...i dont have words to describe so do forgive me...

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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭 😭 😭 😭😭 😭😭 😭 😭😭😭 😭😭 😭 😭😭 maandyyy... u did dat once again... mera maan😭
but really dear... i appreciate ur efforts n ur skills of writing... loved the character of chhotu...this is all i can say 4 nw... coz u wont believe how much i m cryin sitting in front of my lappi n my sis is watching me😲

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