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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

*sniff sniff* Let me wipe my tears...

That was beautiful. SO sad, but amazing. I loved it.

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

ohhh that was too emotional...
made me cry so much 😭
but ur writing always keeps me captivated 🤗

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Downhill

@Downhill

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

hiii maddy...
dont even ask whether we liked this attempt of urs...coz this is a stupid Q...we love ur works...
i loved it to the core...
i always feel...that if u r going to write a one shot, its going to change my perception about life and leave me with something to ponder over...
i dont have words to describe the sheer beauty of this OS...
u made me fall in love with each and every character os this OS, coz each character exemplified faith, love, loyalty,affection, determination, positive and optimistic attitude...
in spite of this OS having a sad ending, u r leaving ur readers on a positive note...and believe me i was smiling inspite of tears clouding my vision...
i feel so charged up after reading ur OS, that i feel i am going to look at things from a different POV,always with optimism and no complaints...

i simply loved the part of chotu/armaan's speech...it made me completely teary and inspite of me trying to control my tears, i cudnt help shedding tears...
maan- what shud i say...my real life hero...u just made this character so lovable, that i envy geet😆 for having him
i truly feel words cant do justice to comment on this masterpiece of urs...simply flawless...leaving me completely speechless

the note of urs was very inspiring and just added to the sheer beauty and magnificence of ur OS...
kudos to u for writing such a beautiful story on love and relations

simply love and adore u and ur wriitng

keep writing

love u

reva

p.s...--inspite of sad ending, i cud not bring myself to hate u...😛 i simply feel like giving u lots of jhappies and kissies for this wonderful OS

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Uthra

@Viji79

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

I dont remember when I broke into heart wrenching cries the last time I read an FF/OS. Why would anyone not like it? And loved the way you have explored all types of relationships. It was difficult to digest Maan's death but he is a mortal being and all of us are, aint we? Thank you for this awesome piece of work and yes, no thank you for making me cry so much early in the morning.

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Vibhuti Shah

@shah10

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

wow..speechless... supreb.

u are amazing writer.

keep it up.

thank u...

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

I had tears in ma eyes wen reading...u wrote lovely...

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minnie_tweetie

@minnie_tweetie

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Wow what a superb part that was!!!!
Loved it to the core...!!! Really hats off to u...!! The way u described each and every relationship was jst fab...maaneet part too good...!!!! Loved the final part so so much...the way maan has told abt geet to chottu...i mean their armaan...!!!
Everything was so gud...felt bad that MSK died but then also he was with her geet everytime na...she felt his presence around him...!!!!
Well awesome and fabulous OS...
And upon that superbly written...!!!

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sldeeps

@sldeeps

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

HATS OFF!!! 👏

hate u for making my eyes moist😡

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rockin_gal

@rockin_gal

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#119

wow that was sooo touching and yet sad 😭 i loved the new idea, the concept, and ur POV abt relations.. it was just wonderful, mindblowing, awesome, fabulous, and idk alll the synonyms tht go with it... do write more new and different OS's and plz update something called love asap cuz i cnt wait to read more.. 😊

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nazsij

@nazsij

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Posted: 14 years ago

#120

awesome...whenever i read ur ff my eyes will be swollen...did u took any pledge to cry us?armaan's discribtion abt maan was awesome...i felt one pinch in my heart...loved it...