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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey all!!!! bada wala hi from my side!!!!!

Thank you for all your love and support... me is overwhelmed!!! keep encouraging me!!!!

Guess what??? due to your love me is updating!!!!

All the credit for this update goes to two lovely people,,,,, Aash di i love you so so so so so much... she is the one who is responsible to make it that much special coz i could not even write 1% of it... she wrote it beautifully

and ofcourse Reni for her continous dhamkis and love... i love you alot too...

so here u go!!!!


Part 15:-


He was about to kiss her again when she instantly got up and ran.. He ran behind her'. She ran towards the lane of pillars and hid herself behind the pillar' Maan was looking for her' she was walking on one side hiding herself from him and enjoying his restlessness' Suddenly she found him nowhere' She was worried so she started to move in the direction when she felt an arm encircling her waist ' she stood there rooted' a shiver went down her spine' She knew it was none other than him ' she closed her eyes' he smirked observing the extent of his impact on her.. He increased his closeness and put his chin on her shoulder and spoke

Maan:- so Mrs. Khurana u r caught'

Realizing her defeat Geet was back to herself and frowned' she walked away and made a kid face who has just lost his race' Maan fell for her again..

Geet:- no!! you did cheating!!!!

He laughed..

Maan:- Cheating huh??? For which act???

She remembered his closeness and bit her tongue' She was red in shyness' then to ignore she turned about and continued

Geet:- how did you find me???

He went close to her and held her in his arms.. she was more shy'

Maan:- do you still think I need to plan anything to find you??? I can feel your mere presence'.

She was touched by the sweetest words of her husband as if she was in dreamland.. she turned to look in his coffee brown eyes and found a person who was immensely in love with her.. she kept looking at him when he suddenly spoke'

Maan:- waise I think for our relation hiding anything from each other is dangerous so frankly speaking (bending down to touch her ankle) my favourite music player told me ur whereabouts'

She looked at him all confused' he smiled and said

Maan:- your payal'

She then realized that while following his gaze she was walking beside the pillars and her payal was making sound.. She smiled at her husband's intelligence but suddenly remembered his words "waise I think for our relation hiding anything from each other is dangerous".. she felt guilty for hiding about his diary. Looking at her that expression he took her hands in his and asked

Maan:- geet what happened suddenly??? You were happy a moment back'

She looked at him and and spoke

Geet:- you are right!! Hiding anything from each other is hazardous for our relation' so I want to confess something to you..

Maan felt something was wrong and was about to speak when she spoke

Geet:plz don't get me wrong.. Actually one day I was cleaning your room and I found ur diary.. I was unaware of it to be a personal diary (she held her throat) babaji ki kasam and thought it to be something related to office and I opened it .. I read it and was unable stop myself from reading it' because it was the only path for me to your heart.. you being youself never opened yourself and I was desperate to know about you so I committed the mistake and believe me this is the only thing I hid from you' I am really sorry' I was''''..

Suddenly Maan came close to her and pecked her lips.. she was shocked coz she was expecting an opposite reaction from him'. He finally spoke looking at her lovingly'

Maan:- shhh!!!!! Chup bilkul chup !!! kitna bolti ho tum!!! Waise you keep on blabbering like this coz I loved to shut you up like this'

She was crimson red at his statement and to avoid him seeing her that much shy and even to clear her confusion she spoke

Geet:- you are not angry???

Maan nodded a "NO"'.

Geet:- Why ??? I mean'

Maan:- you want me to be angry at you???

She instantly spoke

Geet:- never!!!

Maan smiled at her sudden reaction and thought how much innocent and childish his ladylove is' he held her hand and spoke..

Maan:- Jaan!! You read that diary without my permission.. I should be angry but first of all that was past and now you have full right to be aware of my feelings for you and for everything in life coz my life cannot stay away from my feelings and last thing I love you more now coz you accepted it in front of me and I appreciate your honesty' I know how much you love me so I am aware of the distraction you went for the diary so for past things I am not at all going to spoil my anniversary and our future life which I have planned to be just perfect.. you me and of course our family..

he winked at her'.

She was lost in his word completely that she almost missed the naughtiness in his last sentence' she got him and shied at the thought' she spoke'

Geet:- itni pyari pyari meethi meethi baatein kab se seekh gye aap???

Maan:- (picking her up in his arms..) jabse meri mishity meri life me aayi'

Geet:- Mishty???

Maan:- yes mishty!!! My sweet si sweetheart'..


Geet smiled at him' and kept on looking at him till she felt his lips on hers and that turned to a passionate one' she was still in his arms and both were lost in each other... She wanted him and he wanted her' they wanted to show how much they loved each other' they parted and looked at each other with desire filled eyes... He was enjoying her shyness and she was totally embarrassed to deal with the situation'

He lovingly touched her cheeks which were a bright and fiery red.

Maan:-"Geet tumhe pata hai, jab tum aise sharmati ho na to meri saanse hi le leti ho."

He whispered seductively, making her blush redder if possible and lowered her lashes to hide the passion shining in her eyes.


Maan:-"Jab tumhare ye aankhen aise sharm se jhukti hai na, to mere dil ki dhadkane ruk jaati hai, pata nahi tum inme kya chupa rahi ho."

Saying so he lovingly placed a kiss on each eye making Geet breathe harder.

Her heaving chest and labored breathing made Maan smile.

He went a little back to admire the beautiful angel in his arms.

Her flushed face enhanced by the red mark on her forehead, proclaiming her to be his and only his.

Her alluring parted lips, which were trying to gasp in oxygen, made all the more swollen due to his kisses, inviting him to taste the honeyed nectar they offered.

Her eyes, which were hidden behind her lids, which had the power to make him forget the world.

Her lush curves, barely hidden by the thin saree she wore, driving him wild with the need to posses her and mark her his forever.

His wife. His mishty!

Maan:-"Geet apni aankhen kholo na please'."

He whispered in her ear, biting the earlobe teasingly causing her to shudder in his arms. She nodded her head shyly in refusal, closing them more tightly, hiding her face in the crook of his neck.

His hands went around her waist, bringing her body flush against him. They were tightly pressed from chest to hips, not a mm of space between them. He slid his hand below her saree, caressing her naked waist and back. His fingers trailed over her spine, dipping his head to her neck to tease her nape, placing soft wet kisses there, making her arch her body moaning out aloud "Maaannn"

He smiled at her reaction against her skin, the softest and sweetest ever tasted by any man he thought! Having gained better access to her neck, he continued his kisses along the border of her blouse till he reached the top of her breasts.

Growling in irritation at the barrier presented to his exploration, he reached behind her back to the dori of her blouse.

The giving away of the dori got Geet back to her senses, waking her from the seductive slumber Maan had induced her into. She stepped back scandalized


Geet:-"Maan ye aap kya kar rahe ho!"

she looked around, as if expecting someone to come and catch them red-handed!


Geet:-"Koi aa jayega to?

Maan:-"Koi aaya to? Mai apni biwi ko hi pyaar kar rah ahu, kisi aur ko thodi!"


he said arrogantly.

Geet:-"Chi chi babji! Aapne mujhe itne besharam pati kaise de diye"


she muttered in an appalled voice, making Maan glare at her threateningly.

Maan:-"What did you call me?"


he asked in his best Khaddoos Singh Khurrana voice making her take a step back.


Geet:-"Errr...kuch nahi...mai aapko kya bol sakti hu..."


she replied meekly, putting onn her best innocent puppy dog face.

Maan:-"Ye tumhare nautanki kisi aur ke saamne chalti hogi, mere saamne nahi! Abhi besharam bulaya hi hai, to bhugto! Let me prove to you what it really means!"


he smirked at her. She looked at him to see the mischief in his eyes making her regret her choice of words.

She looked around him, trying to find a route to escape, but he grabbed her and scooped her up in his arms and started walking towards the balcony.

She tried to free herself, cursing her errant tongue and looking at him pleadingly. But ye to MSK tha..Use bach ke kidhar jaati! He whispered mischievously,


Maan:-"abh tumhare bolti kyu bandh ho gayee?? Haan Geet?"

He brought her to the terrace and started walking towards a corner. She looked there suspiciously, never having been this far inside. To her surprise, there was a hidden alcove there and in the middle was a breathtaking site. A scrumptious dewan was placed there, covered with rose petals. Not an inch of the floor was visible. The entire alcove was lit with small twinkling magic lights, with a few scattered candles, burning lazily, added their aroma to the blissful serenity of the environment. The moon shone brightly down while the wind blew indolently. She looked at him questioningly. He smiled at her innocent blush and laid her on the bed.

Maan:-"Geet I wanted to make this moment special for u. I know I have given you a lot of tears, but I promise, from this day onwards, I will fill your life with happiness as long as it is in my ability to do say."

Hearing his heartfelt words, her eyes became teary and love shone through for the whole world to see.

She cupped his face in her hand and looked into his eyes, asking him wordlessly to claim her. Forever. Make her his. In every way possible.

Man kept his hand over hers on his cheek and taking it to his mouth kissed her palm lovingly, all the time looking into her eyes. Not leaving her gaze, he placed soft kisses along her wrist, forearm and nibbled along till he reached her shoulder. She arched her neck, encouraging him to continue while her other hand found its way into his hair. Holding on to him to bring him closer.

He bit her on the neck making her wince, before blowing on it lightly sending chills down her spine. Finally he made his way to her lips, capturing them with his. His tongue seeked permission to enter hers, which she granted. The kiss became hot and passionate both of them lost in it.

His hands went to her back, caressing it and untying her dori.

He unsnapped the single hook holding her blouse rendering her almost naked. The saree was such that she hadn't worn a b**, the enticing expanse of skin beckoned him further. Leaving her lips he traced a warm kiss filled path to her shoulder, where he met her shoulder strap. Using his teeth he pulled it away feasting on the milky white skin exposed to him.

Geet was lost in the pleasure and magic that Maan was weaving on her body. Her hands roamed his chest, dying to feel his naked skin but too shy to do anything about it.

He loved her shyness. It added to the enchanting glow to her eyes and cheeks. Sensing her hesitation, He took her hands and moved it under his shirt to place it above his heart, making her feel the loud and erratic beat.


Maan:-"This heart beats for you and only u. ispe sirf tumhare haq hai. Tumhe pata hai na Geet?"


he said in an attempt to dispel her shyness.

She nodded and clasped her hands behind his neck possessively!


Geet:-"Haan is par! Aur aap par. Sirf Geet Singh Khurrana ka haq hai!"


she added with attitude.


Maan:-"To haq jatao na Geet"


he added seductively flustering her with the hot and passionate look in his eyes!

Holding her eyes captive, his hands went to the pleats of her saree loosening them from her skirt, and tossing it aside. He gently bent down and made her lie down on the bed following her down crushing her soft body beneath his.

Her fingers hesitantly went to the buttons of his shirt, undoing them one at a time till all of them were off. Seeing her adorable shyness Maan shrugged it off himself swiftly before coming back to her, their upper bodies almost naked, touching each other, skin to skin for the first time. Their breathing hitched at the sudden contact. Geet closed her eyes in ecstasy. Her hands roamed the naked skin of his chest and back, lightly tracing each muscle, making him shiver in pleasure.

"Geeet" he moaned out aloud and caught her hands to hold them on either side while he dipped his head to give attention to the rosy peaks calling out to him. He lavishly explored each of them making her writhe under him, making guttural sounds deep in her throat.

Not satisfied, he bent lower to kiss her navel making her suck in her tummy in sheer delight.

The blood pounded in his veins and made it difficult for him to wait any further to make her his. He quickly got off and got rid of his clothing coming back to divest her of hers. She closed her eyes in fear at what was to come. Her nails dug into his shoulders, pleading for fulfillment yet afraid of the unknown. Maan looked at her, eyes closed, lips open gasping for air, the frown lines showing her trepidation. He nudged her slowly with his feet. "Geet'." She closed her eyes more tightly making him to palm her face with his hand.


Maan:-"Geet jaan open your eyes. Trust me."


Her eyes snapped open


Geet:-"I do Maan. Khud se bhi zyaada."


She whispered, hiding her face in his chest. After that only actions spoke' words were not required for their immense love' they were finally one from heart from body from soul'.


Next morning Maan woke up first and was looking at his wife who was sleeping peacefully holding his hand and was smiling even in her sleep.. he softly pecked her forehead and removed thr hair strands distracting him from the world's most beautiful sight..

He smiled to himself at her innocence and her love for him which she showed last night' he spoke to himself

Maan:- I know she has forgotten the pain I gave to her but I can never forget it and to heal all your wounds I promise you my love this is only the starting' I will make your (he stopped) no OUR life no more than a heaven for my princess'

While he was drooling over his life, she woke up and looked at him lovingly still explaining to her brain to accept the fact this is not the dream' Then she suddenly realized

Geet:- time????

Maan suddenly came out of a trance and looked at her all confused.

Geet:- batatiye na whats the time???

Maan searched for his watch but was unable to find and there was no wall clock so he looked for his phone and found it lying on the floor' he picked it up and found 22 missed calls from KM and 30 from Asmita's phn' he now understood geet's reaction and looked at the time and find it to be 9:30.. he was hell shocked he never woke up that much late in many years'

Maan:- Saade nau baj gaye???

Geet: kya??? Its nine thirty' hey babaji' pata nahi dadima hasa taken her morning tablets or not'. Doctor told me to take care how irresponsible I am'.

Maan looked at her amused and thought I was wondering an excuse and she is worried for dadima's tablet' how much she thinks about others' She was lost in her blabbering and cursing herself when he took her in his arms and pecked her lips once again' she looked at him shocked'

Maan:- don't give me such looks mishty'. I told you last night that I love to hear ur blabbering coz I love to shut u up you like this '. Rahi baat dadima ki to she can take the medicine before lunch and its only for BP which she can have even now.. so if she has forgotten and you want to remind her now then you have to get dressed up urself'.



He looked at her'. She was blushing hard' she hugged him tight and then hurriedly went to washroom'.


At washroom she found a new pair of clothes for her with a note.

I am perfect. Prepared for everything'. Happy Anniversary Mrs. Khurana..

She was totally perplexed and was still wondering but seeing the love and care of her husband she shrugged off her thoughts and got ready'.

After an hour or so they reached the mansion.. it was decorated completely for the party but both of them were sure that the people inside will be going to fire them for their such irresponsible behaviour'.


Precap:-


Family????



plz plz comment and like...
Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update ... cont soon ... aash gud job dear ...

Edited by dewdropred - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ aashu.. ab aa rahi hai tu...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry sakshi i wanted to unres and comment but edit button doesn't work.. Aash what did u write.. I told sakshi don't give a thanda sr take aash ka help she will do a great job.. Thanks for this wonderful maaneet union.. I loved how maan arranged everything special for geet.. The room sari.. I liked how maan likes to stop geet from speaking non stop.. Loved how geet was worried abt everyone when she got up in morning..geet being shy how sweet.. Why did u tell abt ma dhamki..it was between us no.. U updated for ma sake now i will give u daily updates like b4 lol i would do it even if u didn't update this one..pls take care of urself no fainting again.. Ur studies..tests and all..love u..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome work aashu and bachi...
aashu is super good yaar..
iusliye./.. apna crash courses start karo.. asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
ITS SUPERB DEAR
thanx alot for ur hardwprk to give us an update hope to get more soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG I LOVEEED IT SOOO MUCH
can i expect more frequent updates now!?
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
@deepu di- aash di ke crash course me mera naam bhi add karo!!!! me want to learn the amazing way she writes... not ahem ahem ahem but emotions she brought...

@reni- me will not faint now ... and i loved your dhamki... i had written it so bakwaas and aash di manipulated it to great one... me wondering how???

@erumzaheer- thanx alot.. will try my best...

@lil.mizz.smexii- thanks alot.. cant promise coz my problem is still there but will try my best...
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Posted: 13 years ago
fantastic upd.
loved it.
plz give us next upd sooner
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
hope we can get more updates in this vacation only dear
after that ur collge u cant
so hope
we can get more
ossum parts dear
no owrds
adorable

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