MAANEET IF - KAISA YE PYAAR HAI - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
NICE UPDATE N D TRUSTY WAS MRS SAVITRI DEVI KHURANA...HAHHAHAHA...N PLZZZ MAAN KO JALDI THIK KARDO N BACK HIM N WITH ROMANCE ATMOSPHERE...MISSING IT A LOTTT...WAITING..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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so Maan is in the hospital...hmm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
hey all of you
guys sorry for no update
mein ytry krungi aaj dene ki
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
part 19


Part 20

Kaisa ye pyaar hai

person : sorry wo galti se mera foot slip ho gya

geet: its ok

mein bhi kitni pagal thi mere sath jo bhi hotausse aapse jod deti, shayad maan us waqt babaji yhi chahte the

pr babaji kya chahte hai, mujhe ye smjh nhi aa rha hai

maan aap hr jagah ho mere sath

fir bhi hm sath nhi hai

kyunnn

avinash: kya hua geet, tum yha kyun khdi ho

Principal Sir Se kuch kaam tha

geet: nhi

rubina:to chl class mein chal te hai

Lecture bs start hone wala hai

geet : hmmm

At other side

In hospital

Room no: 101

Nurse: doctor, inki pulses low ho rhi hai

Doctor: urgently give him injection

Outside the room

Doctor: inki halat mein koi sudhar nhi ho rha hai

Unknown: please keep try

Doctor: I will try doing my best

Please understand,kuch response hi nhi kr rhe hai

Hosla rkhiye

Unknown: hmmm

After the lecture

In canteen

Avinash: u remember geet tumhara phla din college ka, aur tumhara trusty se hi ldai kr li

Aur hamari mulaqat

Sb kuch kitna alag tha

Geet: ha sb kuch bhut hi alag tha

Chahe tumse milna ho ya unse

Rubina: aur baad mein tum kitna gbra gyi thi

Geet: hmmm, kaise bhul skti ho, ek pal ke liye mein kafi drr gyi thi, jb tum dono mujhe btaya

Flashback

Next day

In college

Time 8:45 am

geet(self talk): hey babaji aaj mein jldi puch gyi hu, please kuch gdbd mt karna

At other side

In corridor

Avinash: rubina, sorry yaar , mein janta hu, meri laprwahi se hamara project complete nhi ho paya

Fir bhi hamara project 80% tk to complete hai na

Rubina : wow

Ye to kamal ho gya

Avi: thanks

And placed her hand on her shoulder

Mujhe pta tha tum smjh jayungi

Rubina give a stare look and removed his hand

Avi: sorry kh to rha hu, heena tu hi isse smjha

Heena: mein kya smjhayu

Mein khud tujhse naraz hu

Rubina: bilkul shi kr rhi hai, tbhi isse smjh ayenga

Aaj iske wajah se hume kitni daat khani padegi

Geet stand near the group of friends and hear all chat

Geet come near the group and say

Excuse me

Rubina: yes

Geet: Can I help you?

Rubina: kya aapko pta hai hmari problem kya hai

Geet say sorry

Wo maine aap sbki baatein sun li

Avi: it's ok

Heena: aap hamari mdad kaise kr skti hai

Geet: aap sbse phle ye bataiye aapko project kb abmit karna hai

After 1 hour

Geet: itne me to kaam ho jayenga

Mujhe bhut acha lagta hai project krna

Heena: really

Geet: ha

Rubina: dekhte hai

Avinash: guys files to ready hai tum dono ki siway mei chodke, please tbtk tum dono likh do, mein aur tum cd tyaar kr denge

Sorry humsbka to introduction nhi huya hai

After completion the introduction, he will busy in project work.

Flashback out

In canteen

Rubina: geet us din tumne to kamal kr diya,

Half an hour mein hi project complete kr diya

Geet: maine to kuch nhi kiya tha, avi ne sb kuch tyaar kr rkha tha,

Bs ek trh se kdiyon ko jodna tha

Rubina: aaj kl tum phliyo mein bhut baatein krti ho

Geet: nhi asa nhi hai

Avi: it's ok

Aur tum kitna jealous feel kr rhi thi geet meri help kr rhi thi to

Rubina: avi

Avi:ok

Rubina : aur uske baad

Flashback

Outside the principal office

Time 9:52 am

Geet: hey babaji aaj sb kuch thik ho jaye

Babaji help krna

Trusty maan jaye bs

Time 9:54 am

Hey babaji ye yha bi puch gya

Babaji ye kya hai mein jha jati hu , ye whi puch jate hai

Ye mere piche kyun pade hai, maine inka kya bigada hai

Geet came diagonally in front of to the person, but

Her foot slips and falls in his strong arms

No precap

Guess it

part 21

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Woww.. gr8 update.. luved it
OMG.. ye trusty maan hai kyaa!!!!
Geet falls in his arms.. wink wink 😉😉
😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Awesome n thnks 4 pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#77
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78

Part 21

Kaisa ye pyaar hai



Outside the principal office

Time 9:52 am

Geet: hey babaji aaj sb kuch thik ho jaye

Babaji help krna

Trusty maan jaye bs

Time 9:54 am

Hey babaji ye yha bi puch gya

Babaji ye kya hai mein jha jati hu , ye whi puch jate hai

Ye mere piche kyun pade hai, maine inka kya bigada hai😲

Geet came diagonally in front of to the person, but

Her foot slips and falls in his strong arms

Maahi mein maahi ve'''''''''''

''''''''''''''''😊


Both will lost in eyes

All near people were gathered exactly what happen

Geet stand in proper manner and looks towards maan


maan(shouted on the people): what happen?

Why are you staring?


People left alone the both

Maan: aur tum dhyan se nhi chl skti , jb dekho

He paused

Geet: what do you mean?

Aap khehna kya chahte hai.

Maan moves forward

Geet: dekhiye aap yhi ruk jaiye, nhi to'''.

Maan: nhi to

He looks in her eyes

Nhi to kya?

Geet: nhi to mein watchmen se khke aapko bahar nikl va dungi

Maan stop at this movement

She mummer's lagta hai drr gya

Maan; really

Geet: hmmm

Maan: mein bhi dekhta hu , tum asa kaise krti ho

Geet: aap nhi jante , meri is college mein kafi jaan pehchan hai.

Maan: hmmm

Acha kisse janti ho

I guess it

Watchmen ko, ya yha ke sweeper ko

Geet: aap khud ko smjhte kya hai

Mein is college ke trusty ko janti hu, unhe pta chla, aap mujhe pareshan kr rhe hai, to wo aapko 1 minute bhi yha khde rhne nhi denge

He laughs😆

Geet: lagta hai aapko sdma lag gya hai

Maan: what?

Geet: aapko sunana bhi bnd ho gya kya

He babaji inhe sunana bi bnd ho gya hai, inki mdad krna

Ydi dusman bhi takleef mein ho to uski mdad krni bnti hai na

Maan: shut up

Bs karo😡


Acha, to tum yha ke trusty ko janti ho

She spoke with confidence

Geet: obviously, mein janti hu.

Maan: interesting,😊

To ek kaam karo ,chlo mujhe unka naam hi bta do

geet(stammer): naam😲

maan: ha, naam tum to janti ho na, so tell

geet take few steps for not facing the maan

hey babaji , ye kha fs gyi, ab mein kya batau,

geet relax

kuch bi bta de , usse kha pta chalega

maan came near behind and say in her ear

kya hua ,bhul gyi mein bta deta hu

Principal came from out of his cabin and see maan stand outside

Geet turn for facing his face

Wo mein

She paused

Good morning sir

Maan thinking isse achanak kya hua

He turns back and see principal stand there

Principal: geet , u till wait

Geet: yes sir

Maan: goodmorning sir

Principal: goodmoring

Maan: can we start meeting

Principal: of course

Maan and principal go in cabin

Geet: kya principal sir is khadus ko jante hai

Avinash rubina and heena stand near the pillar and saw the all act

Flashback out

Rubina: geet tujhe to kuch pta hi nhi chla tha uss waqt hua kyat ha

Avinash: rubina, issse pta bi kaise hota

Ye kha janti thi college ke baare mein ab kuch

Rubina: aur fir humne btaya

Ek pal ke liye tu kitna darr gyi thi

Geet: aakhir mere future ka sawal tha

Drr lgna to bnta tha na

Rubina: geet

Geet: hmmm

Rubina: jiju se abhi bhi utna hi darr lgta hai kya jitna uss time darr gyi thi😛

Geet slap her hand

Geet: rubina😳

Rubina: mein to mjak kr rhi hu yaar😊

Precap: flashback scenes

And

Hospital mein kaun hai

part 22

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Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
woww.. nice update..
yaar mujhe jaldi se janana hai maan ko kyaa hua hai & who is in the hospital..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
awesome ... but short ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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