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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
YE HMARA KAISA PYAAR H, JISME ITNI JUDAAI H, JIS SATH KO PANE KE LIYE HMNE ITNA KHUCH KIYA, AAJ BHI, FIR BHI , HM SATH NHI H,KYUN. KYUNNN
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

thats strange ... geet didn't visit dadi n maan after coming to delhi ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 18

Geet: ek to pichle itne samay se mujhe gurre jar he the aura b

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Maan see towards the driver

Aur tum

Driver: yes sir

Maan: tumne car kyun roki

Driver: sir mam ne jha kaha tha jane ke liye

Wo jgh aa gyi hai'

Maan: ye car meri hai, aur tum driver mere ho ya iske

Maine tumhe south x chalne ko kaha tha

Maan didn't notice where he laid stand

Driver: sir wo madam ne kaha

Maan : tum

Geet : us bechare pr gussa kyun ho rhe ho

Thanks driver bhaiya

Driver: welcome ji

Geet mummers and see the maan at corner her eyes

Socha tha babaji aaj is dust insaan ko bhi thanks kh dungi

Pr geet ab to bilkul nhi

Maan: ab jao yha se

Geet leave the place

Maan mummers ek to bina jaan pechan ke meri car mein aake baith gyi

Upr se thanks tk nhi kaha

Maan said to driver: ab yhi rhna hai kya?

chlo

driver: yes sir

In present

Maan aapko to pta hi nhi chla kb aapka pen mere pass aa gya

Ye wo phli cheez thi jo maine aapse li thi

Us waqt mujhe ehsaas hi nhi huya hmara baar baar yu takrana , zindagi br ka sath bn jayega

Meera: geet, pen ko asse kyun dekh rhi ho, kya hua

Geet : kuch nhi

Bolo meera koi kaam tha

Meera; oh mein to bhul hi gyi

Geet jldi se milk pee lo

Geet: meera tumhe pata hai na, mujhe psand nhi hai

Meera: geet apne liya na shi apne bache ke liya hi shi

Geet maan yha hote wo tumse khte kya jb bi tum nhi piti

Geet kuch nhi khti

Geet drink the milk

Meera leave the place

At morning


Brij: daadimaa, ab ijajat dijiye

Daadi: bte, kl hi to aaye the , aaj jane ki baat kr rhe hai

Brij: daadimaa, mein to bs geet ko dekhne aaya tha, wo kaisi hai

Aur meri gudiya bhut khush hai, aur mujhe kya chahaiye

Geet: veerji itni jaldi

Brij: gudiya mujhe kaam hai, mein chlta hu

Geet: thik hai veerji

Pr jldi aana

Brij: hmmm

Pranam daadimaa

Brij bent down and touch her feet

Daadi: jeetey rhiye bte

At afternoon

Daadi, meera, geet sit in the hall

Daadi: geet bte aapke paper aane wale hai tyaari kaisi chl rhi hai

Geet: ji daadimaa

Meera: iska mtlb geet tum bilkul dhyan nhi de rhi ho

Geet: nhi asa nhi hai

Avinash and rubina come into khurana mension

(Avinash and rubina are college friends of geet)

Avi: hey geet

Geet : hey, tum dono, what a pleasant surprise

Rubina and geet hug each other

Rubina: kya kare, tujhe to hamari yaad aati nhi, socha hm hi jake mille

Daadi: ye aap dono ne bhut acha kiya

Avi: hey meera

Meera: hey both of u

U both will sit; I will come in few minutes

Daadi: hm bi abhi aate hai

Avinash : geet , tum kuch dino se college kyun nhi aa rhi ho

Geet: I am not feeling well for some days

rubina: kya hua

geet: kuch kamjori se lg rhi hai

avi: ab kaisi hai

geet: ab thi hu, I am fine

rubina: toh fir thik hai, kl college chalet hai

geet: college

avi: ye kya geet, lagta hai maan se tumhari shikayat krni padegi

geet mummers kash tum shikayat kr pate, unse complain krne ke liye unhe yha mere pass hona bhi padega, pr wo hai ki unhe '''''..

rubina: geet kya soch rhi hai

geet: kuch nhi

rubina: sb thik to hai na

geet: ha

After few minutes

To kl college jana pakka

Aur bilkul phle ki trh sath jayenge

Avi: ok

Daadi and meera came near to the geet

Daadi: ye bilkul thik rahenga

Ye aap sbne bilkul shi socha

Meera: absolutely right daadimaa

Kyun geet

Geet: hmmm

Precap: kuch purani yaadein

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
sorry to sat cant understand ur hindi
really dear
hope u ll write in english
so that call can read
hope u do this
dont mind
i like the apst
superb
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
continue soon dear waiting for more
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

Part 19

Kaisa ye pyaar hai

geet: kuch kamjori se lg rhi hai

avi: ab kaisi hai

geet: ab thi hu, I am fine

rubina: toh fir thik hai, kl college chalet hai

geet: college

avi: ye kya geet, lagta hai maan se tumhari shikayat krni padegi

geet mummers kash tum shikayat kr pate, unse complain krne ke liye unhe yha mere pass hona

bhi padega, pr wo hai ki unhe '''''..

rubina: geet kya soch rhi hai

geet: kuch nhi

rubina: sb thik to hai na

geet: ha

After few minutes

To kl college jana pakka

Aur bilkul phle ki trh sath jayenge

Avi: ok

Daadi and meera came near to the geet

Daadi: ye bilkul thik rahenga

Ye aap sbne bilkul shi socha

Meera: absolutely right daadimaa

Kyun geet

Geet: hmmm

At night

Maaneet room

Geet take his photo in her hand

Maan jldi aa jayie aapki geet ko aapki jaroort hai

Geet maan ke bina adhuri hai

Jo tum nhi pass fir sath ho kaise, Jo tum nhi pass fir sath ho kaise

ye mere bina, kuch baat ho kaise,

ho sham ho ya savera, hr wqt h bs tera,

meri khani mein hr lvz tera h,

krna ye izhaar hein,

kaisa yea pyaar h , kaisa ye pyaar h

kaisa yea pyaar h , kaisa ye pyaar h

kaisa yea pyaar h , kaisa ye pyaar h

kaisa yea pyaar h , kaisa ye pyaar h

At next morning

Today geet look so happy, after the very long period

Jb aapne dukh mein hote hai, to ek chotta sa pal bi lmba lagta hai

Meera: daadimaa, geet kitni dino ke baad itna khush lag rhi hai

Aur college bhi ja rhi hai

Daadi: ha bte

Bs abs b kuch thik ho jaye

Maan jldi se wapas aa jaye

Meera; daadimaa

Ab kuch acha hi hoga

Aur rhi maan ki baat wo jldi aa jayenga

Dev koshish kr rhe hai na daadimaa

Daadi: hm jante hai meera

Geet came near to daadi

Geet: daadimaa, mein chlti hu

Daadi: ha bte , apna dhyan rkhna

Geet: hmm

Bye meera

Meera: bye geet, take care

At outside the khurana mension

Avinash: geet koi itna time lagata hai

Geet: sorry, wo uthne mein der ho gyi thi

Rubina: koi baat nhi, ydi hum yuhi baatein karte rhe to pakaa der ho jayengi

In college

Avi: geet tu chl hum abhi aate hai

Geet : ok

Flashback

Geet mummers he babaji phle to wo dusht danav mil gaya, pta nhi aaj aur kya kya hoga,

Bacha lena babaji

Geet to someone: excuse me,

Person: ji

Geet: In which side principal cabin be positioned

Person: straight to right

Geet: thanks

In principal office

Geet: may I coming sir

Sir: coming

Geet show her all documents related to admission or verification related to previous study

Like mark sheet, scholarship copy

Geet: sir maine phle bi aapse baat kit hi, phone pr

Sir: yes, I remember

But you late

Geet; sorry sir mein late ho gyi

Sir mein kl hi aayi hu

Sir: mere khne ka mtlb hai, ab hamare pass seat nhi hai, all seats are fulled

Geet: sir pr mujhe to scholarship mili hai, specially is college mein admission ke liye,

To ab kaise

Sir: I understand, pr hamare pass seat nhi hai

Geet: sir please

Sir: dekhiye, hm scholarship student ka ek limit tk wait krte hai, uske baad wo time pe nhi aata to hum wo seat kisi aur ko de dete hai,deserving student tha ek to usse wo seat dedi

Geet; sir, please kuch to rasta hoga

Phle to aapne confirm kiya tha

Aur ab, please sir

Sir: abhi to maine tumhe sb bataya

Mein isme kuch nhi kr sakta

Jo bhi kr skte hai wo trusty kr skte hai

Geet: sir please unse baat kra dijiye

Sir: mein unhe asse disturb nhi kr sakta

Wo jb aayengetb hi baat kr skte hai

Phone ringing

Excuse me

Trusty: hm kl hi aapse milna chahte hai, kuch issues discuss krne hai

Sir: yes madam, anytime

Trusty: ok, 10:00 am

Sir: ok madam

You are lucky geet

Trusty kl hi aa rhe hai

Pr kl time pe

No late

10:00 am

Geet : yes sir

Thank you sir

Outside the principal office

geet(self talk): thank you babaji aaj to bach gye

nhi to us dusht danav ki wajah se

Flashbacks come out

tbhi geet ko

person : sorry wo galti se mera foot slip ho gya

geet: its ok

mein bhi kitni pagal thi mere sath jo bhi hota usse aapse jod deti, shayad maan us waqt babaji yhi chahte the

pr babaji kya chahte hai, mujhe ye smjh nhi aa rha hai

maan aap hr jagah ho mere sath

fir bhi hm sath nhi hai

kyunnn

avinash: kya hua geet, tum yha kyun khdi ho

Principal Sir Se kuch kaam tha

geet: nhi

rubina:to chl class mein chal te hai

Lecture bs start hone wala hai

geet : hmmm

At other side

In hospital

Room no: 101

Nurse: doctor, inki pulses low ho rhi hai

Doctor: urgently give him injection

Outside the room

Doctor: inki halat mein koi sudhar nhi ho rha hai

Unknown: please keep try

Doctor: I will try doing my best

Please understand,kuch response hi nhi kr rhe hai

Hosla rkhiye

Unknown: hmmm

Precap: guess the trusty

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
so maan is in hospital and i think trustee is savitri devi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

obviously , its dadi ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#70
achha tha,👏 aab recent wala chipkaa jaldi😛

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