SURROGATE RELATIONS ...part 11 on pg 142

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#851

Lovely update. And believe me was actually wondering why u had not updated since so long. Had even thought of pming u if all was ok. Lovely update. Pls update again soon. Love the way ur story is progressing.

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#852

i hope sam helps 🤔...

geet n maan are so cute!

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#853

Brilliant update dear loved it loads

love-Piya

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dystopian10

@dystopian10

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#854

Ah, so I guessed it right. Found in you a fellow M&B fan. Yes, you're absolutely right I, too, miss those late 80s and 90s M&Bs. I especially loved Carole Mortimer and have almost all of her books from 80s and 90s. And you my dear are a prolific writer. I've read some of the other FFs and sometimes I feel as if they are unable to understand the difference between romance and sleaze.

Look forward to another installment. Hope it comes soon.

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MaankigopiMadhu

@MaankigopiMadhu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#855

Oh...wonderful update.. Loved it... Can't wait for the next .. Please don't make us wait tooo looog ;)😛😆

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#856

this part was good...didn't quite expect geet and sam ka friendship...but i hope she plays the cupid after she realises how much maaneet care for each other...
PS: lovd the update...now u have to update real fast everytime as its quite interesting...

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RAJSHREE

@raj_202

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#857

speechless

as ur update is so good

don't have words to comment on it

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#858

Originally posted by: dystopian10
Ah, so I guessed it right. Found in you a fellow M&B fan. Yes, you're absolutely right I, too, miss those late 80s and 90s M&Bs. I especially loved Carole Mortimer and have almost all of her books from 80s and 90s. And you my dear are a prolific writer. I've read some of the other FFs and sometimes I feel as if they are unable to understand the difference between romance and sleaze.
Look forward to another installment. Hope it comes soon.

thank u ...u cud Say M&B was my craze during my Pre-Degree time(11 & 12 according to present time ) we friends used to hide one inside our text books and read them during boring lectures😉... have u read a Jack and Jill by Elise Ti tle? it is really fun packed. Carole Mortimer was my Favorite too...
but now i go for mystery packed ones.like Nora Roberts, Kay hooper...have u read Judith Macnaught, some of her books like 'Almost Heaven', 'Something Wonderful', 'Kingdom of Dreams' r really good...they r all historical, yet we don't think them so while we r reading...her females r such naughty, strong willed ones against the arrogant Males u just love them

abt the next installment haven't started on it yet...may be by thursday...

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CrazyMaaneetFan

@CrazyMaaneetFan

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#859

Hey jus read ur ff in one go.
Loved it.
Can i plz suggest u somthing?
U write very well but at times the scene ends very soon.The moment v go in the scene,it finishes,specially in Maaneet's scenes.So can u plz do something on this.
Hope u didnt mind.

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#860

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet
Hey jus read ur ff in one go.
Loved it.
Can i plz suggest u somthing?
U write very well but at times the scene ends very soon.The moment v go in the scene,it finishes,specially in Maaneet's scenes.So can u plz do something on this.
Hope u didnt mind.

no probs. ur suggestions r always welcome...mostly it depends on the mood i guess...sometimes i'm in a hurry to update😉...
but i guess with geet still wary of men, i thought small gestures to build her confidence ...i'll keep ur idea in mind😊