SURROGATE RELATIONS ...part 11 on pg 142

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: jasraj123
very emotional update. feel sooo bad for geet. poor her she sacrifies every thing for her mother's life but she died and now she miss her so much. love the way maan try to console geet and made her calm. he is silently in love with geet i think and his vow for geet to be with her all time. i love this caring maan.

thanks for nice update. pls try to enlighten the next update. i am sooo emotional now😭

next update wont make u sad ...i promise😉

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: ritzy09
very emotional...her pain is unimaginable...her sacrifice itself is unimaginable...i hope Maan gives her every hapiness she deserves

who else but our Gold hearted Maan can make her happy?

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: kooliio
Amazing update!
Feeling bad for geet!
Who is this brij guy?
And what did he do??
She is avoiding maan become she have some feelings for him!
Can't wait till she realize that she is falling in love with him!
Hope maan will also starting falling for her!
And hope geet will be fine!
Will be waiting for the next part!
Please continue soon!

Don't u think he is already half way there? when maan is there why worry...he will take care of her nd ease the way towards trusting men

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#484

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
It was very natural of geet to shove aside her arising feelings for maan and substitue them with an easy match sameera. But the good thing is that she is aware of the feelings ;)
awww maan did everything to ease her pain... Shoo shweet.
Adorable, emotional read.
Thanx

remember our real geet's words during there first date? that he deserves someone purer than her, better than her...this Geet is also at that stage...she doesn't believe there will be a life for her, the way other girls her age dream of

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Remya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#485

gud update..
eager to noe abt geet's past..

poor geet silently suffered a lot..

and maan s ready to giv her all the happiness she lost..

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: Dilsay
Nice update yaar very well written ...I feel sorry for Geet hope Maan is able to soothe her pain out...

who better than Maan?

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
Beautifully written!! You were very successful in conveying the emotions you felt while conceiving this scene ...My heart went out for sweet lil' Geet...so young..so vulnerable..Thank God she has Maan and Daadi in her life..I love the budding beautiful relationship between Maan-Geet..The pace is just perfect..Don't make them fall for each other any soon..want to see how Maan succeeds in driving away her fears and insecurities and make her trust him enough to open up. The whole story idea is fresh and beautiful. Kudos to you!!

thank u dear ...u always have the right words to energize my confidence...🤗
it will be difficult for Get to keep aloof now that she has cried in his arms...nd Maan being the caring person he is will be her anchor whether she wants him to be or not😊

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palakchopra

@palakchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#488

Superb as well as emotional part

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bindu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever
Isnt this the original Maan we all know... n isnt it the Original Geet we all adored...
A man who is restrained yet effective when he is at his expressive best was our enigmatic Maan in the original series-GHSP... strong, powerful yet had some inexplicable protective and caring instincts towards this weak yet strong child-woman...
Geet - a girl who has had to grow up much before her age... and yet this girl wishes well for people around her and isnt full of hatred for the life and world around her for the raw deal she has been meted out at the hands of fate ...
I liked that Geet finally mourned her mother's loss and also that Maan has a hint of something that turned Geet completely against trusting men in general... restraining from investigating Geet behind her back has beeen a great decision made by him... and the way his fierced protective and loving instincts are gripping him..its wont take him long before he is badly fighting his inner desires and the social bindings and then finally accepting it and working towards claiming and pursuing Geet relentlessles!!!

Gurti has spoiled us, don't u think? whenever u sketch characters, it is their brilliant portrayals that comes to mind👏
May be it is Sympathy that Inspired him...Maan, i feel is already half in love with her...and he wants her to think him special too or else why wud he want her to share her past with him? yes she will find him there to support her in all her needs...so much so that she will start depending on him even before acknowledging it herself.

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saim

@amzu32

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Posted: 14 years ago

#490

That was Awesome yaar!!!

very emotional...That was weitten Brilliantly... poor Geet, i want the mystery to unfold..that was too much for a young girl to face in such a tender age...

I luv how maan takes care of geet :)...I hope Maan is able to soothe her pain...

just cant wait for the next part...please continues soon and thanks for pm:)