SURROGATE RELATIONS ...part 11 on pg 142 - Page 50

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Me fall into the category of hopelessly emotional types 😭. My heart felt heavy for Geet 😭 She has lost everything practically

She needs hope , care & a lot of Love .

Maan took care of her so lovingly & tenderly as if she was a delicate flower 😳 ; scared of hurting her .

The scene was Beautifully written

Well , Brij did something extreme 😡 which is why the girl has an aversion to male touch , or for that matter , male species .

Geet & her mom's last convo was heart wrenching 😭

Even though it was quite sad ; I could still smile coz Geet is where she belongs 😛

within Maan's warm embrace 😳

Such lovey dovey inputs are 👏👏👏 simply wonderful .

Fab update

Thanks for pm ...

aren't u happy that when she did break down it was before Maan...this will sure strengthen their awareness of each other...she fell asleep on him...hw will she react when she wakes up...😉

and Brij u will get to Meet him in person...something that will bring abt a change in Maaneet's relation (as of how i imagine the story to proceed, for now)

very emotional part

That was superbly written. All the feelings were so beautifully expressed that I could Imagine it being enacted by Maneet allover again. u have a wonderful way of writing. Believe me u should take it up professionally. As for becoming emotional, how could anyone not get emotional after reading such a wonderful piece? Btw thanx for the pm. Makes it easier to follow ur updates.

hats off dear... first u gave this unique idea of ff... n now this emotional part. that was sooo touchy😭😭😭
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feeling bad 4 geet. now she is all alone... n all her sacrifices went in vein...
hope dadi n maan will b there 4 her...
good 2 see maan's feelings 4 her... i wish sam is just a frnd n is a good charecter... plz dont make her vamp...

do cont sooonnn n reveal the fact about brij😊

awesome ...

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