SURROGATE RELATIONS ...part 11 on pg 142

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#491

loved the update...

very emotional and the part were maan is more concerned abt her...

who is this brij..is he geet's bro or some one else...wat he did to geet..

well maan's decision is right he shudnt snoop around to know her past when she trusts him enough she will tell him for sure...

pl cont soon

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: drashsree100

Me fall into the category of hopelessly emotional types 😭. My heart felt heavy for Geet 😭 She has lost everything practically
She needs hope , care & a lot of Love .
Maan took care of her so lovingly & tenderly as if she was a delicate flower 😳 ; scared of hurting her .
The scene was Beautifully written
Well , Brij did something extreme 😡 which is why the girl has an aversion to male touch , or for that matter , male species .
Geet & her mom's last convo was heart wrenching 😭

Even though it was quite sad ; I could still smile coz Geet is where she belongs 😛
within Maan's warm embrace 😳
Such lovey dovey inputs are 👏👏👏 simply wonderful .

Fab update
Thanks for pm ...

aren't u happy that when she did break down it was before Maan...this will sure strengthen their awareness of each other...she fell asleep on him...hw will she react when she wakes up...😉

and Brij u will get to Meet him in person...something that will bring abt a change in Maaneet's relation (as of how i imagine the story to proceed, for now)

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RAJSHREE

@raj_202

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#493

very emotional part

geet is suffering so much

sacrifice her life but still could not save her mom

maan feeling for geet has started

geet is very comfortable that she sleeps in his arms

now maan will try to win her trust

will she be able to trust him coz of her past

which has not yet been revailed

con't soon eager to read more

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#494

That was superbly written. All the feelings were so beautifully expressed that I could Imagine it being enacted by Maneet allover again. u have a wonderful way of writing. Believe me u should take it up professionally. As for becoming emotional, how could anyone not get emotional after reading such a wonderful piece? Btw thanx for the pm. Makes it easier to follow ur updates.

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anisharoy1

@anisharoy1

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#495

awesome update...

thanks for pm..

count soon...

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disha

@Conqueror212

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#496

hats off dear... first u gave this unique idea of ff... n now this emotional part. that was sooo touchy😭😭😭
😭
feeling bad 4 geet. now she is all alone... n all her sacrifices went in vein...
hope dadi n maan will b there 4 her...
good 2 see maan's feelings 4 her... i wish sam is just a frnd n is a good charecter... plz dont make her vamp...

do cont sooonnn n reveal the fact about brij😊