SURROGATE RELATIONS ...part 11 on pg 142

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

Beautifully written!! You were very successful in conveying the emotions you felt while conceiving this scene ...My heart went out for sweet lil' Geet...so young..so vulnerable..Thank God she has Maan and Daadi in her life..I love the budding beautiful relationship between Maan-Geet..The pace is just perfect..Don't make them fall for each other any soon..want to see how Maan succeeds in driving away her fears and insecurities and make her trust him enough to open up. The whole story idea is fresh and beautiful. Kudos to you!!

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Mrs.MSKForever

@Mrs.MSKForever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#472

Isnt this the original Maan we all know... n isnt it the Original Geet we all adored...
A man who is restrained yet effective when he is at his expressive best was our enigmatic Maan in the original series-GHSP... strong, powerful yet had some inexplicable protective and caring instincts towards this weak yet strong child-woman...
Geet - a girl who has had to grow up much before her age... and yet this girl wishes well for people around her and isnt full of hatred for the life and world around her for the raw deal she has been meted out at the hands of fate ...
I liked that Geet finally mourned her mother's loss and also that Maan has a hint of something that turned Geet completely against trusting men in general... restraining from investigating Geet behind her back has beeen a great decision made by him... and the way his fierced protective and loving instincts are gripping him..its wont take him long before he is badly fighting his inner desires and the social bindings and then finally accepting it and working towards claiming and pursuing Geet relentlessles!!!

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ammu5

@ammu5

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

feel sorry for geet. emotional update loved it

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blueopal

@blueopal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! nice di...
finally geet cried n maan comforting geet...superb...
wat brij did??????????????????looking fwd...

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

emotional and touchy update . loved it .

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ursrithika

@ursrithika

Navigator

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Posted: 14 years ago

#476

yes dear... u r successful... it was an emotional turmoil... Very nice part.. all the elements were blended together...

Update soonnn... waiting for next part...

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#477

Originally posted by: lively-piia
i m d first one to comment...u did justice in emotional scenario of the story...js't a suggestion though dn't make it to heavy in the upcomin parts otherwise it will be motonous...c is too naive n young try to build a companionship btween maan and geet and let it blosoom...luv d update..👏

yeah can't have a tragedy queen for our Maan😉

Edited by bangalores - 14 years ago

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#478

Me fall into the category of hopelessly emotional types 😭. My heart felt heavy for Geet 😭 She has lost everything practically

She needs hope , care & a lot of Love .

Maan took care of her so lovingly & tenderly as if she was a delicate flower 😳 ; scared of hurting her .

The scene was Beautifully written

Well , Brij did something extreme 😡 which is why the girl has an aversion to male touch , or for that matter , male species .

Geet & her mom's last convo was heart wrenching 😭

Even though it was quite sad ; I could still smile coz Geet is where she belongs 😛

within Maan's warm embrace 😳

Such lovey dovey inputs are 👏👏👏 simply wonderful .

Fab update Glitter Star Red

Thanks for pm ... Glitter Rose Red

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#479

very nice and emotional part...
so now Maan is slowly getting closer and attached to Geet....😊
wonderful update...continue soon...👏

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bindu

@bangalores

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: Ramhari
Beautiful emotional part.
I feel so bad for Geet.
She went through so much but couldnt save her mom.
Maan is slowly getting closer and attached to Geet.
Though Geet is getting affected too she seems to not like it.
May be because of her past she doesnt trust anybody.
Now that man has promised himself to win her trust it would be difficult for
Geet to resist.
Eager to know more about Sam whether she is good or bad.
Waiting for the next part.

the first hurdle is already over...how can u not be sure of his good heart after sharing ur sorrow within his arms?