SURROGATE RELATIONS ...part 11 on pg 142

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#291

oh ur mom is alright now...good good...take care of her...

part 4
nice part...
Geet's mom...oh no...
poor Geet...
who else does she have?
Dadi is very caring and attached to Geet...
Maan does care for her...
cont soon...

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537048

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#292

hey i like ur story and geet is so frighten of him do update soon

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#293

Originally posted by: ursrithika
i really really liked the concept... Something very very different... its very sad.. after taking such a step, for her mother... which no unmarried girls do..still, her mother could not be saved...

All in vain... maan has taken a gud decision, to shift her to Mansion... Daadimma, can give her all the love and care she needed now... and our Knight in Armour, Maan Singh Khurana is always there to help her rt... and who cannot fall in love with such a sweet heart, like out Geet... Gonna be a very tough time for MSK, to cntrl his own feelings...its goin to be a thrilling exp...

Update sooon...

sometimes a persons life is full of misfortunes...yet there may come a time when these misfortunes lead them to a saviour, heralds the arrival of a Knight in Shining Armour, a person who wud turn the tide of fortunes, a protector who wud becomes the light at the end of the tunnel. sometimes what was started as a duty turns to be a habit nd then ur need, right😉

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#294

Hiya...when r u planning to update next?

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: ritzy09
Hiya...when r u planning to update next?

haven't typed the next part in word doc... will be too busy for a couple of days...sorry...

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Mrs.MSKForever

@Mrs.MSKForever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#296

loved your story's gentle progress ... there isnt that love at first sight, yet the protectiveness is kicking in for Maan... for Geet, it seems she has a thing about men touching her... am I wrong? also, Maan seems to have seen her somewhere before he met her as the surrogate mother through the doctor... do disclose that soon...
would love to see how the story unfolds... its just that I am an impatient soul... n want to know the whole length n breadth of it at one go.. I am bad at having to wait for "what next" ... but then the forum has some great writers who dish out great updates which makes it worth the wait... will be eagerly awaiting your update!

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 14 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever
loved your story's gentle progress ... there isnt that love at first sight, yet the protectiveness is kicking in for Maan... for Geet, it seems she has a thing about men touching her... am I wrong? also, Maan seems to have seen her somewhere before he met her as the surrogate mother through the doctor... do disclose that soon...
would love to see how the story unfolds... its just that I am an impatient soul... n want to know the whole length n breadth of it at one go.. I am bad at having to wait for "what next" ... but then the forum has some great writers who dish out great updates which makes it worth the wait... will be eagerly awaiting your update!

good to knw that someone did notice...i was wondering abt it, though the hint was subtle ...abt maan having met Geet before, u'll knw abt it in the next update...

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: bangalores

the only blood bond that Geet has now is her baby...nd taking care of Geet has now started to become Maan's priority too...but how much will he let his life be changed for a stranger?

change is seldom planned

it comes about, just like luv happens ...no one can predict or control the event or the outcome 😍