Maaneet.. Deja Vu Last part page 73 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
congratzzz on new ff...
nice concept...
interesting...
plz do cont soon...
tanx 4r pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
awesome ... interesting ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
hi
thankyou for your support
PLZ COMMENT

PART 2;

Beta tum kuch nahi karsakte they is sb me

Nahi me kar sakta tha

Pura hafta me aik pal k liye bhi us se alaida nahi hua per Saturday ko mujhe shehar se bahir jana para

Or

Waha Geet called me and I just at that moment applied breaks cuz a little girl came infront of my car I ran out to see what happened and my cell dropped on the road

I completely forgot that geet wd have heard the brakes and then another accident happened right beside my car

I rushed the guy towards the hospital

Geet thought that it was my accident she kept on calling me and then once she went through a man picked up my cell and informed her that her husband had an accident assuming me to be the other guy

Geet rushed towards my site work crying badly.

I had just returned from hospital I was coming to the construction site when I saw her standing at the roadside .i immediately stopped the car I was on the other side and I came out and saw her she was standing there dejected her sindoor was flowing down with rain and then she did something I could not gather why she took of her magalsutra and screamed maan with so much pain and threw that in the air and then she started walking in the middle of the road I shouted and ran after her but I could not save her a car came and hit me I flew and fell on the road loosing my conscious but not before I witnessed her being runned over by a car and her painfull shriek saying Maan'

Hors later I woke up in the hospital I demanded t know where my wife was but they informed me that she wpnt make it and I have to decide when to pull the plug

I lost it baba

I lost it

I knew that she wd have an accident but I could not save her she commited suicide thinking I had died baba sab mere waja se hua

He cried and cried

Onlooking ppl just stopped to give him sympathetic looks and pats

Kash aik bar me use bata pata

Kash mujhe aik or moqa mil jae usko bachane ka

Kash ye aik hafta wapis ajae

Bacha tere pyar ne mera dil bhi dukha diya per bata taqdeer se khailna bohat mehnga pare ga

somewhere distant the song started
Main toh jiya na mara
Hai ve das main ki kara

Dil jude bina hi tut gaye hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne
Baar baar rod akhiyan tainu jo na vekh sakiyan
Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne
Kataan main ki ve din teri soth tere bin
Main toh jiya na mara

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage
Jag suna suna

Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage reee

Suna Lage Reee

Roothi rothi sari raatein
Fikhe fikhe sare din
Virani si Virani hai
Tanhai si tanhai hai
Aur ek hum hai pyaar ke bin
Har Palchin

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Patharo ki is nagari mein
Pathar chehre Pathar dil
Phirta hai mara mara
Kyun rahon mein tu awara
Yahan na hoga Kuch hasil mere dil


Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage


Hai to yeh kyun hota hai
Jab yeh dil rota hai
Roye sisak sisak ki hawayein
Jag suna lage

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage reee
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=W4HviVSY9Ls ( if you want to listen to it.)
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8w7uCO8VO5I=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]
Baba mujhe bus aik bar he could not continue any more..
He lie down in his lap and cried until he fell asleep

PRECAP:

MAAN😳

did he get the chance???
plz plz plz REPLY
Edited by ssch - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Nice part😊
.loved it👏
.waiting for next part.
.thanx 4 PM.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Wonderfull update. I hope geet comes back to life. plsss update soon and want a longggupdate as this was a short one.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
great part
love it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
woww awesomeee
oh it was tragiccc
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
great part hope she come back to her life soon awesome part but so short
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
hi
here is the update hope you like it
plz plz plz comment
PART 3:

Maan lied there tired and shaken slowly drifting to sleep. But sleep was not helping either. All his moments with Geet was revolving around his eyes.. her accident, her smile, their wedding ,their happy moments, her pranks her ' he was bleeding, he was injured both physically and emotionally but all he could wonder was about Geet . His physical injuries all forgotten.. Any other man in his place would not even be able to stay conscious let alone get up from bed and cry for others..but for him the pain of loosing, the fear of loosing her was way to much to loose conscious.

This vm is made by our dear roopali . especially for this update . plz watch it to see what was going on in his mind..thanx.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L0fv0VRmDxU=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

He woke up with a start . Geet he shouted

Kia hua baita?

Geet

Baita sab theek hai' tum ne bura sapna daikha hoga wo to hospital me hai

Nahi baba mujhe us k pass jana hai use hospitals se dar lagta hai

Usne mujhe kaha tha .. mujhe jana hoga me usse akele nahi chor sakta

Baita . tumhari tabiat thk nai hai . me tumhare sath chalo ga

Maan drived rashly towards the hospital . by now all his bandages were full of blood.infact blood was staining his clothes and face.

Media had gathered near the icu. Afterall it was Maan singh khurrana's

Matter.ppl were curious to see if he is gonna survive this or not every body thought that he was inside icu.but then he entered the hall of hospital injured.cameras rotated to take in the site .. he rushed madly towards the icu baba coming behind him. Tears rolling down his eyes. He went inside .Glass walls were making it visible to all the ppl around icu.

Sir you are bleeding again . u need a dressing change

How is she

Sir we need to pull the plug .. there is no hope . her brain is long dead it's only her heart that is beating and that too because of artificial breathing .sir there is no survival for her

Maan could not control it any more he took a step back lost his balance and to maintain that he holded a glass on the table

Sir there is nothing left you have to make the decision.

He could not hold it anymore he shouted GEEET

Everyone silenced seeing his agony

He crushed the glass in his hand

And a sigh escaped her mouth

Monitor showed increased heart rate.every one stood there glued to their positions looking at Geet. How did she respond.

And then a tear escaped her eyes

Just leave us alone..she will come back

He shooed away the doctors after they had done the checkup of geet and had bandaged his hand

He sat there holding her hand ,weeping

Baita jo hua wo kismet me likha tha magar jo horaha hai use badla ja sakta hai

Maan looked at him confused

Tu usko wapis la sakta hai

Kaise

Ye bohat mushkil hai kismet se khailna bohat mehnga par sakta hai tujhe

Me sab bardasht karlo ga per ye hoga kaise ye waqt tujhe batae ga magar phir tujhe kismet se jang larni pare ge wo tujhe aik pal bhi sakoon se bathne nahi de ge.

Mujhe sab manzoor hai

He stood up but lost balance and fell down unconscious

PRECAP:

Maan utho na kitni dair lagao ge. Office nahi jana?

Edited by ssch - 14 years ago

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