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Deeksha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

hey thats an awesome update..

continue soon

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teju

@teju2292

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

nice part yaar
but too short
want long updates dear...if possible
precape is so confusing and intresting
looking forward

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Samra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

thankyou all who commented and liked my update.here is the update

hope you like it

plz plz plz comment

PART 4:

Maan was lying there.

Ahhh my head it's hurting .but my Geet I cant see her in pain no I can't I won't wake up I 'll just die lying here like that I can never make the decision of pulling out the plug..ahhh why is my head hurting so badly strange I had not felt anything the whole day why is it hurting now my pain wil hurt Geet no I cant do that I can't give her more pain I can't

Maaan maan uthu na or kitni dair lagao ge office nahi jana. Kitni bar uthao

hmm

wait I am going mad how can she just call me she is in coma

I can't run after an illusion

Maan I am serious agar aap aik mint me na uthe to me ye thanda pani apke uper gira ri ho

No no no that's an illusion it cant be true

That's it

And a full jug of ice cold water fell on him

He sat up in a sec what th'

Geet was standing there laughing.

Geet

Hmm

Geeet he said barely a whisper coming close to her

Geet he whispered touching her face standing inches apart

Maan aap thk ho na kia hua?

Geet u are here right

Nai mera bhoot hai

Can you ever stop pulling my leg she said and was about to go when maan brought her back into his embrace hugging her as if his life depends on that

Maan aap thk ho kia hua

Kuch nahi kuch nahi

Tum kabhi mujhe chor k nahi jao ge

Kabhi nahi mar bhi gai to bhoot ban k aap k sath raho ge she said while again laughing

Shhhssshhh never say that you will never die I will never let that happen

U never know kismet k age kis ki chalti hai

Geet he shouted I said never say that again

Ok ok mela baby guhssa ho gya I shorrry

He just smiled at her antics tum yahi baitho me naha k ata ho then I will make brkfast

No maan aap naho me nashta banati ho

Geet mene kaha na plz

Ok me yahi baithi ho

Khush ab jaldi ao mujhe bohat bhook lagi hai

Hmm he gave her a kiss on forehead and left for bathroom

Omg what was that. Reality kia hai.

Wo sab sach tha ya ye jo hora hai Geet to bilkul thk hai matlab wo spna tha per us me bhi to yahi hua tha sapne k age sab kuch hua tha baba what did he say I can change the fate shaid yahi mera moqa hai . I will change it koi mujhse mere geet ko nahi cheen sakta.

He smashed the glass counter into half

Geet heard the smash and came running in

Maan kia hua ..omg... maan aap thk to ho ...aap ko to choot lagi hai ...me bandage le ke ai... aap idher ao ..yaha baitho .she brought him into the room

She bandaged him. the cut was the same as he got when he smashed that glass in geet's hospital room that was confusing him more

so the fate has started his game he will play that no I won't tell geet anything I won't make her conscious no way I will protect her .

Maan app ko kia hua subah se weird behave kar re ho or shower me jeans k sath he chale gae

Ohh so you want me without jeans

he said with a smirk bringing her into embrace

Maan bohat besharam hogae hai aaap ...kapre badal k jail niche aiye me nashta lagati ho

Gee

Chup aik dum chup... shower tak bgair tamashe k le nahi sakte nahsta banae ge

2 min me niche aiye mujhe bhook lagi hai

Maan smiled tamasha hmm let it be

Per mishti k liye kuch bhi

He got ready as fast as he can and came running down the stairs

Maan itni jaldi abhi to mene nashte k liye chezai bhi nahi nikali

Hmm I was thinking of making fry

Nai he shouted

Kia hai chilla q rahe ho

nahi aaj mera nashta bahir se karne ka mood hai to hum bahir chalte hai

Ye bhi acha hai I don't feel well either

Kia hua tumhai kuch chot lagi

Maan dor hatye or khabardar jo dubara aap chilae mera khana pakane ko dil nahi cha raha tha.

Bahir chalye ab I am hungry

PRECAP

?????

who will win the game fate or love?

the updates from now onwards will be on a happier note .. also with maan struggle to protect geet

Edited by ssch - 14 years ago

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537048

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

hey this is a unique concept i like it do update soon

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Thank god it was his dream ...hope it won't turn to reality!!!

wonderful update!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

OH OK IT WAS A DREAM THANK GOD

it seemed sooo realll yaar

awesomeee

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Divya Nair (aka Piya)

@piya-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

hey samra look my prediction was right 😛 ke ye sab sapna hai n somehow i can relate ur story with the movie rubaru usme bhi thik aisa hi situation hota hai lekin end is very tragic and exactly opposite to d dream... o i just hope ke movie ki tarah iss story ka end na ho yaha pe bahut saare ladkiyon ko heart attack aa jaayega

thanks 4 d pm😛

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Ash1991

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

awesom update...akthough no 1 can fight fate n change it but in ur ff i want lv to win...

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Very interesting iam confused.😒. is geet pregnant as she is not feeling well.

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Samra

@ssch

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: piya-
hey samra look my prediction was right 😛 ke ye sab sapna hai n somehow i can relate ur story with the movie rubaru usme bhi thik aisa hi situation hota hai lekin end is very tragic and exactly opposite to d dream... o i just hope ke movie ki tarah iss story ka end na ho yaha pe bahut saare ladkiyon ko heart attack aa jaayega

thanks 4 d pm😛

i havent watched that movie so can't tell but the orignal concept was taken from the movie if only . the end in that was also very sad dont worry it's not gonna follow that