Maaneet.. Deja Vu Last part page 73 - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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CONCEPT:

Hi

You all have been wondering what this story is about so I wanted to tell that Dj vu is a feeling of knowing that this has happened before. This story is about how they change that fate with their love.. will they be able to? Or fate will win it's game

The story is not at all the depressing or sad type. U just have to wait to see the real action

So enjoy reading

I am not giving a charactersketch as such

Maan and Geet are same as in show . They are married for 4 yrs now and live all alone in their huge mansion

Rest of the characters will be introduced as the story goes.

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PART 1:

Doctors and nurses were shouting ordering commands but he did not want to listen he did not want to see anyone he wanted to go to his mishti his love

Ohh why cant I move…

He tried harder this time..

Look doctor he is moving .may be he is gaining conscious.

Doctor immediately checked his vitals

yes he was gaining consiousness..

Mr. khurrana can you hear me???

But Maan was not listening to all of that he opened his eyes.

Where is she?

I said where is she?? He demanded holding the docs collar

3rd floor room 303

Maan just moved out of the room .doctor nurses tried to hold him back but could not do much afterall it was Maan singh khurrana .a business tycoon..infact major share holder of this hospital too

He went to the room where Geet was lying lifeless breathing with the help of ventilator.

He sat there holding her hands

Tears were flowing on their own accord..he did not care he no longer cared for his status

All that mattered was how he could not save her

Maan hame babaji ne apne ghar me milwaya tha to aise thori bichar jae ge

A sudden spark came into his eyes

Yes I will go there geet ko un pe yaqeen tha wohi wapis hame milae ge

He went to the gurdawara

He sat there lost in his world not knowing anyting

After a while a babaji came and sat next to him

Kia hua bacha… me kabse daikh ra ho kaha khoe hue ho.. koi pareshani hai

Maan just nodded with tears flowing

Dil ki baat btane se dil ka bojh halka hojata hai .. mujhe btao shaid me tumhare kuch kaam asko

Ab kuch baqi nahi bacha hai

Koshish to karo

Is aik hafte me mere zindagi mujhse chin gai or me kuch nahi kar saka

Aisa kia hua tha bacha

LAST WEEK

MONDAY

Maan .maan tum thk to ho na

Geet omg he hugged her . it was 4 in morning he had seen a bad dream that he lost Geet

In an accident

Ufuu maan stop beng stupid . me bilkul thk ho daikho it was just a dream nothing else

Nai geet that was not just a dream.

AT BREAKFAST TABLE

Maan was still jittery.

Geet was observing him from corner of her eyes.while making brkfast

She added oil in the pan and it caught fire

Geet… maan screamed

Maan honestly stop scaring me that's a normal procedure so stop being obsessed.

PRECAP:

so what happened in past😲

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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
nice concept
congrats for new ff
plz continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congo shongo
new FF
interesting concept
amazing start
love it
waiting next part
thanks 4 pm
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wow continue soon
waiting for next part
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nice part...cont soon...thanks 4 pm..
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nice concept..
plz dd me to ur pm list
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awsome yaar ...loved it !!! do continue soon
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Amazing update. plsss update soon.
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great start waiting for next part

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