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Posted: 14 years ago
loving the ff...
may b priya is not as negative character as she seems...
having doubt abt kunal though...
very mysterious...
pl cont soon...
can u pl add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: preethia

loving the ff...

may b priya is not as negative character as she seems...
having doubt abt kunal though...
very mysterious...
pl cont soon...
can u pl add me to ur pm list

will add u to my PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago

naz!!!!!!!!!!...welcome to the Fan Fiction Forum😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: undisclosed

naz!!!!!!!!!!...welcome to the Fan Fiction Forum😆

thanks Sylv😛😛😛😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Good going Naz👍🏼
Maan lifted Geet😍 but nothing happened
Hope they get to kiss at the party
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Maaneet-is-best

Good going Naz👍🏼
Maan lifted Geet😍 but nothing happened
Hope they get to kiss at the party

lets hope for the best misty😛😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
its very interesting
plz continuesss naz...

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nai1311_ysp

its very interesting

plz continuesss naz...

thank you
sure sure
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Posted: 14 years ago

Maan - Maan Singh Khurana - MSK

Geet - Misty
Maan Geet - Maneet
Dev - Dev Khurana - Maan's younger brother
Nandini - Nano - Dev's wife and Geet's cousin
Dadi - Maan Dev's dadi
Adi and Pinky: Geet's friends and work for Maan
Nakul - servant

In the evening, Dev, Nano, and Priya leaves for the party. Dadi is out to meet some friend. Geet is all ready in saree waiting for Maan to come as they can leave together for party. Geet is in her room all worried why Maan has not arrived yet as they are getting late. Suddenly, lights go off. Geet gets all irritated as she does not know where Nakul has put the candles. She notices something blinking near the door and walk towards it slowly avoiding hitting anything. She comes out of the room and sees rose petal pathway with blinking lights as borders. She walks through them and comes down the stairs (Maneet live upstairs...😊). She walks through the hallway with the flowers under placing her foot delicately on them. She notices the hallway is filled with balloons with a circle filled with flowers. She reaches there and starts searching for Maan and calls him out.

Geet: Maan where are you? I know its you...

Maan comes and all the lights turn on. (background music tumjo aaye zindagi mein baat bangayi...)...Maan comes close to Geet and presents her a diamond set. She takes a look at it.

Geet: Its beautiful. thank you.
Maan: People say diamonds r women's best friend. I thought u will be overjoyed.
Geet; True, but my diamond is before my eyes (looking at Maan)

Maan puts the necklace around Geet's neck. Maan gently caresses her back with his hand and brings it to her neck. He holds her from behind and kisses her back and then her neck☺️😍. Geet tries to move away all shy, but Maan holds her hand tight and pulls her back towards him. Geet turns around and touches his face with her hand. She moves closer to kiss his cheek. Door bell rings and Maneet get alert😳.

Geet checks out who is at the door to find Nakul and dadi there. Maan gets a call from Dev who informs they are almost at the party venue n will be waiting for Maneet. Dadi looks around in the hallway and asks what was happening there in her absence😛. Geet blushes and shows her the diamond necklace. Dadi gets all happy and says, u made it look more beautiful...

Dadi and Geet walk in the hallway and a balloon bursts as Geet steps on it by mistake. Dadi steps on another balloon. Geet steps on another. Both of them start playing balloon bursting game. Nakul comes and pushes balloon towards them. Dadi and Geet play it all childish when they notice Maan walking towards swiftly all seriously and stop playing. Maan comes close and he too bursts a balloon. Dadi is all tired and she sits to get her breath back. Nakul goes to get her water. Maneet continues the game and end up with equal points as Maan is quick n Geet slow because of her saree. Maan notices a balloon under table and runs towards it, Geet too follows. Maan is about to burst the balloon..

Dadi: Maaan..
Maan: Maan turns around. jee dadimaa

Geet makes use of this time and bursts the balloon. Maan understands dadi tricked him to make Geet win and smiles. Geet jumps in joy, hugs Maan, and kisses him. she goes to dadi and hugs her.

Geet; Thank you dadimaa. thank you so much..
Dadi: You are not gonna gimme that..
Geet: That???
Dadi: Which you gave to Maan...

Geet turns towards Maan all confused and realises she kissed him before dadi. Geet blushes and kisses dadi..Dadi rushes them to leave to party. Geet is all exhausted and Maan lifts her and takes her to the car😍. They both leave to the party.

Maneet reach the party. Everybody are on the dance floor in the party. Maan gets a call n goes out to attend. Everytime music changes partners change. Geet is pushed on the dance floor and she ends up before Dev. Dev asks where were they as Kunal was looking for them. Geet ignores n asks for Nano. Dev shows Nano who is dancing with an overactive partner who is giving her dizzy spells with his hyperdancing. Dev and Geet laugh. Music changes and Nano drags Dev before her as she is scared. Geet ends up before Kunal. Kunal offers his hand for a close dance. Geet is uncomfortable.

Kunal: Mrs. Khurana, I guess u didnt forgive me yet
Geet: No...actually...hmm

Kunal moves forward. Maan comes n holds Geet through her waist.

Kunal: Everybody r dancing with others
Maan: I am here with her and for us no rules matter. Geet will dance only with me.

Maan looks determined and Kunal leaves shrugging. Geet is relieved and Maneet have a close dance. Kunal, Maan, and Dev leave to sign the papers...

Nano: Wow di. all are appreciating your looks and your close moves😉. all excited...
Geet: thank you. where is Priya?
Nano: I have not seen her after coming in the party hall..

Geet goes in search for Priya and finds her outside in garden with cool drink in hand...

Geet: What are you doing here????.
Priya: Nothing...just like that.
Geet: Why you came out of the party hall????
Priya; Media...Priya stops herself...nothing...leave it..
Geet: Ok...lets go in.
Priya: Are you done with signing the contract papers???
Geet: I guess they are done till now..you come,,I will go see where is Maan
Priya: Ok

Geet leaves thinking what problem Priya had with media...Geet sees Dev Nandini talking and walks towards them to ask about Maan.

Dev: Where are Geet and Priya?
Nano: No idea. Geet di went to search for Priya.
Dev: Oh..ok
Nano: I dont understand why this Priya gets this much importance. See how she disappeared from the party.
Dev: She is here just because of you..n u know that
Nano: I didnt force her to come..
Dev: No one cares where she is and what she is doing. you are the one always behind her...
Nano: Why u blaming me..a girl came from nowhere. we dont know her name. her background. Geet di is trusting her blindly. what if she is wrong. then my di will be first one to feel bad...she is just simply impossible and irritating, hardly answers anything...Nano goes on and on...

Dev nods in disgust and moves towards his car. Nano follows. Geet hears all this and turns around to find Priya. Maan comes and the 3 walks towards the car. Priya just walks through the car and hurts herself badly. Geet opens the door for her. Maan is confused, but Geet signs as nothing. Maneet are still in the way when Dev calls,

Dev: helo
Maan: Helo Dev. tell me
Dev: Bro. we got stuck in traffic jam here as a tree feel in the middle of the road. Its really bad situation here. It seems its gonna take time..
Maan: Ohh
Geet: What happened
Maan: traffic jam
Dev: Bro. you people be there. I will inform you once it clears there is lot of pollution here because of so many vehicles.
Maan: Ok. we will wait for your call.
Dev: ok bro. bye..

Maan parks the car aside and informs Geet about the situation. Priya opens the door and gets down.

Geet: Priyaaa. its gonna rain it seems, sit back in the car.
Priya; You people leave. I am not coming
Geet: What. Priya please Nano is just concerned about me..try to understand.
Maan: whats wrong
Geet: Nano told something in anger and Priya took it to heart it seems.

Geet follows Priya. Maan locks the car and follows them. Priya just walks like dead into the jungle on the side of the road. Geet comes and holds her hands.

Geet: Priya.
Priya: Geet. please go...
Geet: No
Priya: Geet. I dont need your help. Just leave. We met few days back at a similar place and we depart here. Just forget we ever met.

Geet notices Priya's chance in voice, it is not anger. Geet holds Priya and turns her face towards her. Priya just hugs Geet and starts crying. Geet is all shocked, but she holds her comforting. Its starts drizzling. Maan comes n takes both ladies under a tree. As the rain increases so does Priya's crying. Maan notices Geet too crying. He holds her from back and puts a hand on Priya's head for comfort. Rain slowly decreases, Priya is still sobbing, all exhausted. Maan and Geet manage to take Priya back to the car and Geet sits beside her.

Priya: murmurs in her subconscious state. Why is this all happening to me. I never hurt anyone. I do not want this life. This is not me. I cant live like this. I want to go to my familyy.
Geet: Its ok Priya. everything will be alright..

Maan looks at both ladies and feels disgusting and helpless...
After sometime, Dev calls saying everything cleared and Maneet along with Priya go back home..

***Precap: Geet slaps Priya***

Ahhh what a long night for Maneet and me..I am exhausted.. Please do leave ur comments and suggestion...Thanks all...LOVE U
Edited by Naz_Angel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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1st of all thnx for the note before the part started telling who is who it really helped me lol

now the part what do i say its getting better with each day.. im loving the story and all the manmeet moments sooo cute 😳 i want more of those 😆... awesome part and i cant wait to read more soon nd interesting preview i wonder what that priya did to get a slap 😆.. lovely part di and keep up the good work 🤗🤗❤️

Edited by sejal719 - 14 years ago

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