FF M&G'KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI' pt24@120 31/1/2013 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly




<font size="7">waiting for update</font>



Thanks dear thanks for ur love
I will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
love to read ur ff .. n wait 4 d updates eagerly ...

i just maan to know d truth abt geet asap ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

update soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

"KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI"
" PART 9"


Geet free herself and run towards vicky's room ,

Maan is so happy today he took a step to make her trust on him to feel comfortable with him he did want to loose her no not now his day start with her and he close his eyes in night after seeing her ... he always wonder about geet sometime he see her full of life playing with vicky doing something naughty and some time in a deep thought just she is drowning in immense pain ,,,,,, pain written all over her face he did not understand her but what she is he loves her, Her deep hazle eyes that she keep lower all time hide her pain but maan can clearly see what she is hiding from all of them . Maan look at her back her black long hair coverd her back ,,,,,

Geet inter in vicky's room who was relaxing after his first paper he is in no mood start study again

vicky ye kya kr rahy ho tum next exam k preparation nahi krni kya hmmm Geet say while her hand oh her hips

Oh di just chill preparation b kr leingy vicky said relaxing himself more and put his legs on table

abi btati hun tm chill k kuch lagty utho or preparation start kro meri maan se bet lagi he she said and held his ear twisting it vicky yelped in pain Oye di please leave it ok ok i am starting please esy chordo bohat dard ho rahi he Geet leave his ear sit on bed crossing her legs hmm thats better now open ur book and start reading

vicky touch his ear its paining but he cant say anything to geet Di wesy app ne bro se bet kya lgai he

ye hi k tum iss bar top kro gy geet said in normal voice while vicky jump in shock he got a mini heart attack WHAT he jump and set infront of geet on his knees his face most terrible at that time vicky hide his face in his hand and set on floor Di ye kya kr ai ho app esy nahi ho sakta Oh GOD ap ko pta he mn ne kabhi 70% se above marks nahi liye or app keh rahi k mn top karun ga no way or bhai phir se mujhy tease krein gy as always no man vicky said annoyingly geet looking at him as he is talking in some other language she is smiling oye mera cuteee kuch nahi hoga mn keh rahi hun na k u will top then u will ok geet said it bit firmly vicky just node his head as he did not want to let her down so he promise her that he will give his 100%


Days have passed and maan and geet come more close to each other geet is feeling more comfortable with maan she start to take care of his things they spend more time with each other some time geet want to stop herself falling for maan but it seem this is not in her control as much as she try to keep distence from him ... he come more close to her and her heart start beating for him whenever geet with maan she feels no one can harm her she want to tell him but same time she is scared to loosing him and now this is impossible for her to live without seeing him ,,,,,, her day not complete when she cant talk to him

vicky exam has finish he is so happy he want to salebrate it he is behind geet to ask daadi for permission but she want to tease him little more maan in hall seeing all this and keep smiling he love their bond and how vicky keep geet happy all time ,,,, vicky got angry on geet contineously deniel he come and sit with maan with a grumpy frown on his face maan look at him he had a hard time to control his laughter after some composing himself he ask vicky why he is angry but before vicky answer him they heard geet sacream from kitchen both run to ward kitchen and see geet standing like a statue her eye fix on blood stains that is from nakul finger maan indicate vicky to took nakul out frome kitchen and he slowly slowly took step towards geet ...


geet eyes just look like gliud on blood she took some step backward soon her back touch wall there is no life in her eyes it seems lifeless ...




ok guys this a part but its not complete i promise i complete this part today ok

please forgive me as i said i am little busy


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love u all
Edited by love4all - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

loved d convo between vicky n geet ...

thnx 4 d update ...


continue soon ...
Edited by maaneetsangel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...i love geet n vicky's bond...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update, continue soon dear.
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice ff...

plz do add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
i really love tr ff..lovely part?
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful updates. finally maan n geet bcame friends
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Posted: 14 years ago


"KHOOBSOORAT HAI ZINDAGI"
" PART 10"



geet eyes just look like gliud on blood she took some step backward soon her back touch wall there is no life in her eyes it seems lifeless ...



in this blood she only can see her papa ji's body covering with blood ,,,blood oozing out from his chest his strugle for life his last breath his plight and that moron's laughter she is not able to do anything its just like that some some one riped her soul shatter he she want to scream , scream loud but her voice got struck in her throat ,,,, maan look at her he cant see geet his geet like this there is no colour of life on her face there is deathly whiteness ,,,,,,, she is numb maan come close to her he held her from shoulder try to turn her toward him but she is freez at that spot ... maan try again but in vain he shook her but there is nothing it seem she is not there at that time maan loosing himself he feel some snaching his life he cant see her like this he shook her again bit firmly to bring her back its looking like she going far away when he see no sign of her return maan slap her on face but there is no move maan's eyes fill to see red marks on her face but geet ... geet please ider dekho please geet look at me please come back to but she is no listening she is deaf at that moment maan slap her again this time more tightly geet move her head little and look at maan with blank eyes as she regaining her sense trying to understand what maan saying geet kya huwa he tmko btao to geet look at maan she move her hand towards the blood stains maan to look that side where she is indicating him there some blood drop on shelf its not a big deal its just few drop not that much to scare anyone wo ... wo kh--- khoon he ... maan dekho na khoon nikal raha he ussy roko na please kuch karo na please kuch to karo bohat khoon beh raha he will die please maan bcha lo unhein please geet going panic no where to listening she held maan's arm and continuesly screaming about blood

daadi and vicky hear her scream they come running in kitchen maan stood there confuse and worried not ableto understand geet condition first she is standing like a statue and now screaming like a mad daadi understood her situation she come forward to calm geet but she did not let her touch her she just held maan tight he hug he not letting her to go maan cressed her head to calm her geet feel like she is save now nothing going to happen she is calm now a little but she contineusly screaming suddenly her scream stop and she loose her wait in maan ambrassed she is unconciouse maan feel her wait he petted her cheeks but no use he is panic now everything happen so sudden he took her in his arms maan shout at vicky to start car daadi and maan set back seat while geet's head on maan's lap daadi cressing her hand maan going panic seeing geet in this condition her skin pale no colour of life maan shout couple of time at vicky to drive fast they reach hospital doctor took geet in I.C.U


Daadi , maan and vicky out side the I.C.U waiting for dr Maan walking he is restless panic terrified first time he feeling to loosing someone very important in this short time he realize that he cant live without geet she is his life now this time he only want to see geet his geet his every minute seem like ages for him de come out from I.C.U
dr geet kesi he please tell me meri geet kesi he she is fine na maan going more panic now

yes mr khurana geet ab theek bss thora shock mn he but she is fine now

maan took a relief breath daadi and vicky first got shock at maan sudden out brust then they turn their face to hide smile now maan got caught he cant deny nor he want to deny but he is worried about geet what will her answer he look at daadi and vicky they have a naughty smile on their faces

dr - mn ne app se pehly b keha tha k keep her happy stress is not good for her agr esa dobara huwa to uska nerves breakdown b ho sakta he please keep her happy

maan node his head dr leave and maan turn to daadi with a strin face

daadi i want to know geet's past daadi keep silent she want to tell maan but she cant daadi lowed her eyes bety humein nahi pta app geet se hi pooch lena maan held daadi's shoulder daadi i know u know everything so tell me why geet act like this why she is so scared daadi free herself and turn round to hide her tears maan bety hum ne kehaa na humein nahi pta to app zid kio kr rahy hn khud hi pooch lijiye ga


maan thinking yes now he will ask her there must b somthing in her past that make her so frightend from blood ... maan set on bench he is in deep thought he recall all incident when she met him first time after that her compose behaveior always a slight pain in her big brown eyes some wet lashes as she cry ... but now he think its his responsbilty to make her happy give her happiness it does not matter to him what she think about him yes he is there for her

geet is conciouse now daadi come and kiss her forhead kesy hn bety app ,,,, mn thhek huun daadi geet said in a low voice vicky com forward and said kya di app ne to mujhy dra hi diya tha mujhy lga tha k app bohat brave mujhy bro se bchao gi lakin app to every smile at his childish talk Dont worry vicky mery hoty huwy tmko koi kuch nahi keh sakta geet said smiling ye huwi na meri di love u he come and kiss her cheeks maan who stood behind come acha ji vicky itna khush hony ki zaroorat nahi he vicky made a baby face and look geet maan app chup hi rahein to acha ok or koi zaroorat nahi mery bhai ko kuch kehny ki geet said controling her smile ok ji theek mn ab kya keh sakta hun they look at him and brust into a laughter they all set there talking dr said that to night they want to observe geet condition so she will go home tomorrow ... Maan ask daadi and vicky to go home as he is staying with geet they both did not argue with him as they know its best for both to spend time alone

PRECAP - MAANEET MOMENT 😳

SORRY GUYS I SAID THAT I WILL COMPLETE PART 9 BUT I MAID AN OTHERE PART SO PLEASE DO COMENET AND LIKE LOVE U ALL


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