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Posted: 14 years ago

FF:Revenge from the lover

Last Part

Geet looked at maan's body covered with blood.She remembered about her nightmare.She ran towards maan and put his head in her lap.

Geet:Maan!

Maan slowly opened his eyes.Geet could see pain in his eyes.He put his hand on her cheek.

Maan(Tears fell from his eyes):I ...love you too much.I...can't live without you.

Then his hand fall down.Geet shouted.

Geet(Crying);Maannn!!!!!! Koi hai yahan pleaseee mere madad karo!!

She saw headlights of a car.She tried to stop the car.Adi came out of the car.

Adi(Confused):Geet tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Pinky also came out of the car.

Geet(Pleading while pointing at maan):Pleasee meray maan ko bacha lo.

Adi shockingly looked at maan's body and put him in the car.They took maan to the hospital.Doctor told them that this was an accident case so they had to wait for the police.Doctor's heart melted while seeing geet's tears and hearing her pleading.They took maan to the emergency ward.Geet sat on the couch,She started to remember the time when she met maan on adi and pinky's wedding and maan was not leaving her hand and when she accidently put mehndi on his kurta,he just smiled.

Rang hi rang tha nigahon main

Jaise sat rangiyan hoon rahun main

She remembered when he gave her bangles and just few hours ago when he lovingly asked her to come to the dinner.

Husn tha noor ki panahoon main

Ishq tha bekhudi ke bahon main

While remembering the time when he filled her maang for saving her from harsh world her tears started to flow.

Tum ko haar aan meherban paya

Zindagi dhoop tum ghana saya

Zindagi dhoop tum ghana saya

Doctor came out.Geet quickly went to him.

Geet(Worriedly):Doctor maan kaise hain?

Doctor(Sadly):I'm really sorry,we have tried our best but we couldnot save him.

Pinky looked at adi who was controlling his tears and then she looked at geet who was in shock.

Kya khabir thi ka saath thora hai

Meri taqdeer main wachora hai

Geet started to cry while running towards maan's hospital room.

Jis dorahay pe tumne chora hai

Iss ne bandhan lagan ka thora hai

She came to maan and hugged him while crying.

Geet(Tears were falling from her eyes):Aap mujhe akela chor kar nahi ja sakte.I know i don't deserve you but you deserve to live.Pleaseee wapis aa jao.Main aap ka bina zinda nahi rah pao ge.I promise main aap ko chor kar nahi jao ge...aap ne kaha tha na aap mere ankion main aansoo nahi dekh sakte tu pleasee mujhe chor kar mat jao.

chal diye tum ka jab yaqeen aaya

zindagi dhoop tum ghana saya

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WugF1cleIu8&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]


(Vm on the song.Credit goes to the vm maker)

Suddenly maan's heart started to beat.

Doctor(Shocked):Unbelievable! His heart started to beat.

Nurse took geet,adi and pinky out of the room.After 30 minutes,Doctor came to geet.

Doctor(Smiled):Congratulations! aap ke husband ab theek hain.Per inhe one week tak hospital main admit rakna ho ga.Ab aap main se koi 1 inse mil sakta hai.

Geet was about to go but then she stopped.She insisted adi to go by giving him an excuse that she wanted to go to washroom.She came to the washroom.

Geet(Sadly thinking):I'm sorry maan yeh sab kuch mere waja se hua hai.Kahan mere aap ka samne aane se aap ko takleef na ho.Iss liye main abhi aap ka samne nahi aao ge.

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After a week,Maan was discharged.Adi insisted him that he would give him lift but maan told him that he wanted to drive his car.Atlast adi agreed and told him that geet had a key of car and she was waiting for him near the main door of the hospital.Maan quickly went to the main door and saw geet.

Maan(Sadly thinking):Geet maine tumhara kitna intezar kiya per tum mujh se aik dafa bhi milne nahi aaye...Shayad mere hi galati hai jo main tumhi yakeen nahi dila paya ka main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon.Per mujhe samijh nahi aata ka main tumhi kis tara yakeen dilao.

Kaise batayein

Kyun tujhko chahe

Yaara batha na paayein

Baatein dil o ki,Dekho jo baki

Aake tujhe samjhaein

Tu jaane na aaa

Maan asked for the key.Geet worriedly told him not to drive the car in this condition.Maan assured her that he would be alright.He started to drive a car while stealing glances of geet who was looking out of the window.He remembered how he married her and sadly looked at her.

Hmm milke bhi, hum na mile

Tumse na jaane kyun, milo ke,

Hai phasle tumse na jaane kyun

Anjaane, hai silsile

Tum se na jaane kyun, sapne hai

Palko tale tum se na jaane kyun'


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2I4mIa4G75U&feature=player_detailpage[/YOUTUBE]

(Vm on the song credit goes to the vm maker)

They came back to home.Maan went to the studyroom while geet went to the room.Geet started to pack her bag.

Geet(Thinking):Main abhi guest room main shift ho jate hoon.Kal tak main inse maafi mang loon ge.Phir woh jo saza dein ge.Main woh chup chap le loon ge.

Geet was about to go out of the room when maan entered in the room..He was shocked to see her holding a bag.She was about to take a step forward when maan angrily gripped her wrist and throw away her bag.

Maan(Angrily):Tum yahan se kahan nahi ja sakte.Samijhe tum?

Geet(Slowly):Maan main ...

Maan(Put his finger on her lips):Chup bilkul chup.Maine kha diya na tum yahan se kahin nahi jao ge tu bas tum kahin nahi jao ge.

He was going out of the room but then he slightly turned and looked at her.She was looking down with teary eyes.His heart was hurt.He couldnot see her like this.He was controlling himself but then he gave up and hugged her.

Maan(Feeling bad):I'm sorry! Maine tum se wada kiya tha ka main tumhi humashe khush rakoon ga.Per main tumhi kabhi khush nahi rak saka (He put his hand on her cheek) Agar tum mere saath nahi rahna chahte tu theek hai tum jahan jana chahte ho wahan chale jao main tumhi nahi rokoon ga...Main tumse..

Geet put her hand on his lips.

Geet(Tears were rolling down from her eyes):Bas kijiye,Kyu karte hain aap mujh se itna pyaar?I don't deserve your love...(She made him sit on the bed) Mere bachpan main maine jis se bhi pyar kiya woh mujhe chor kar chala gaya.Jab aap mujhe pinky ke shadi main mile tha tab mujhe aap bohat ache lagne lage tha.Baad main mere shadi dev se ho gaye.Main iss se iss liye pyar karte thi ka woh mere maa ko koi problem hone nahi deta tha.Per ab mujhe pata chala hai ka jin kaamo ke waja se main dev se pyaar karte thi woh aap karte tha.Aap ke aur mere bech kabhi trust build nahi hua kyuki aap ko mere samne iss tara present kiya jata tha ka mujhe lagta tha aap bohat selfish ho.Aap ke aur mere shadi ka baad rahul mujh se mila iss ne mujhe bataya ka aap ne dev ko maara hai maine iss per trust kar liya.Per ab mujhe pata chala ka dev,rahul aur sameera aap se badla le rahe tha.Aur kahin na kahin maine inke help ke hai aap ko destroy karne main.I'm really regretting it.Pleasee mujhe maaf kar dejiye...Haan..woh rahul aur sameera behen bhai hain.

Maan(Calmly):Main bohat pehle se janta hoon ka rahul aur sameera behen bhai hain...(Painfully)Actually main jana chahta tha ka dad mujh se kyu pyar nahi karte.Tab mujhe pata chala ka dad rahul ke mother se pyar karte tha.Maine rahul ke mother ko bachane ke bohat koshish ke thi per main inhe bacha nahi saka.Tab maine inse wada kiya tha ka main rahul aur sameera ko paise diya karoon ga taike woh apne studies pori kar sakein.

Geet:Per woh dono aap ko marna chahte hain..

Maan(Sadly):Do dino pehle rahul ke death ho gaye hai.Aik chor se larte hua isse goli lag gaye thi...Aur sameera drug case ke waja se jail main hai...(He remembered something) ...Main aata hoon.

Geet was sitting there for two hours.She was worried for maan.

Geet(Worriedly):Ye maan kahan chale gaye?Abhi tak wapis nahi aaye.

Suddenly her phone started to ring.She picked up the call.

Geet:Hello!

Maan(Lovingly):Hello geet! Tumhare liye aik surprise hai.Abhi jo parcel aaye ga iss main jo dress hai isse pehan kar tum outhouse main aa jana.Ok?

Geet(Smiled):Ok!

The bell was rang.Geet got the parcel.She quickly got ready and went to outhouse.She saw that the room was decorated beautifully.

There were her pictures too on the wall.Maan indicated her to sit on the chair.She sat on the dinner and saw her favourite dishes on the table.


(Maan and geet were wearing these clothes)

Geet(Questioningly):Ye dishes aapne banaye hain?...(confused)..Ye pictures kab ke hain?

Maan(Embrassed):Kuch dishes maine banaye hain aur kuch market se le kar aaya hoon...Aur ye pictures adi aur pinky ke mehndi ke hain woh mujhe tum iss waqt itne ache lag rahe thi iss liye maine secretly tumhare pics lein thi...Chalo ab khana thanda ho raha hai kha lete hain.

Geet smiled and they both started to eat.After dinner,maan hold her hand and put a ring in her finger.

Maan(Sweetly):Jab maine tumhi pehle propose kiya tha tu ye hi woh ring thi jise main tumhare finger main dekhna chahta tha baad main jab maine tumhi dinner per bolaya tha tab bhi main tumhi ye hi ring dena chahta tha per ye ring dono dafa reject ho gaye.I hope tum iss dafa ye ring accept kar lo ge.

Geet smiled and assured him that she loved the ring and she would takecare of it.Suddenly rain started,Geet got excited and pulled maan with her outside of the outhouse.Maan looked at her passionately while she was playing in the rain.She opened her arms.

yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si

yeh saajish hain boondon ki koi khwaahish hain chup chup si

dekho na dekho na

dekho na dekho na

Maan came close to her and hugged her from the back.He brought her hand close to him and kissed it.Then he kissed her shoulder.

hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole

kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan

dekho na dekho na

dekho na dekho na

Then he turned her around and kissed her on forehead,eyes and then lips.She kissed him back passionately.Then he bent her down and kissed her throat.

phir na hawayen hogi itani besharam

phir na dag mag dag mag honge yeh kadam

haa saawan yeh seedha nahi khufia bada

kuchh toh baraste hue keh raha

samjho na samjho na

samjho na samjho na

He picked her up and went to the room and put her on the bed.

hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole

kyon duuri hain ab darmayaan

dekho na dekho na

dekho na dekho na

Maan(Softly):I love you geet.

Geet(Lovingly):I love you too maan.

jugnu jaise chahat dekho jale mujhe

meethi si mushkil hain koi kya kare

hmm hothon ki arzi aaise thukraaon na

saanson ki marzi ko jhuthlaaon na

chhuu lo na chhu lo na

chhuu lo na chhu lo

hawa kuchh haule haule zubaan se kya kuchh bole

na duuri hain ab darmayaan

dekho na dekho na...

dekho na hmm hmm hmm

hmm hmm hmm dekho

Revenge from the lover ended way before two bodies become one soul...



THE END

Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOTE:

(Vm on the last song.Credit goes to the vm maker)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=CEeSxuClxLA[/YOUTUBE]

Sorry for the late update!

Actually my sister had to do something important on the computer yesterday and today because of electricity i couldnot update!

U guys requested for happy ending so i have decided to give you happy ending!

I hope u guys like the part!

I know i suck at writing romantic sequences.

I was thinking of starting season 2 of revenge from the lover with the same theme but kinda different character sketch!

But i have dropped the idea!

Because now i have to start writing eternity!

Anyways thank you sooo much for ur support!

Loveee you all!


Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago

Updated😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant part!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

Beautifully written down Maan's pain ...loved Geet confessing everthing.

Beautiful end.

Can we expect epilogue???
Edited by -dia- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey great update. plz ab epilogue dedo plzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
finally geet told him her feelings and also the guilt she was having is cleared...
well maan jaisa koi lover nahin...
loved reading ur ff...
if u write any more maaneet ff pl do pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing ending
Luvd it x
Gunna miss this FF
Glad dat they both cleared ther MU an finally became one
That was such a nice surprise...
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM
Hope to see you bak wiv another FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the end...

so happy that u gave us happy ending n not a sad one...😃

finally all the mu r cleared n both said what is in their hearts...

loved this ff n enjoyed reading it...

i do hope we get an epilogue n another wonderful ff from u...

will be waiting for both...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part.
loved it.

pls give us an epilogue
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Posted: 14 years ago
superb endinggg!!!!...
finally maneet became one!=)
plzzz I want an epilogue!

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