Maneet FF - Journey called life (OLD THR 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 126 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
loved both the parts...

amazing...

komal is so cute...

loves her when she called him papa...

wow...maan making a request...lovely...

waiting to know what geet will answer to the head;s request..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
awesome ...

loved both parts 1 n 2 ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
hay yar you said that geet is newly weeded to geet kisa ma bani i am so confused please solve this confusion yar and both part nice. i hope maan hi komal ki real papa ho i know that i am talk like a fool. but i realy wish this. update next part soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Hey lakshmi.. I really like the font u r using for this update. So beautiful.Oh yah and I must say that u writing skills seems to be very different for this FF. Not the very long long one. I like dis.Okei dear back to updates. Its really nice that Maan started to think about litle angel Komal and wants to spent some time with her. Probably he need some company to ease his painful soul. I hope Geet will accept Maan's request to meet Komal. At least HM should made it clear to Geet that Maan doesnt have any bad intention on Komal...
Thx for this update... Cont soon...



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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
lovely part
will read geetika some other time
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
just read both the parts!
awesome start!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Lakshmi 🤗...thank u for the wonderful updates and PM...unique story...looks like Maaneet have been thru a lot of pain...as usual so much suspense...loved the way u described Komal...sooo cute...no wonder Maan wants to spend time with her...hope Geet agrees...plz continue...TC 😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
res
detailed comment after i read😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89

hey

the story is nice..


continue soon

and plzzz add me to the pmlist..

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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Hello Everyone..Thanks a million for liking "Journey Called Life".
Before getting into Part 3, would like to answer few common questions
How come Geet has a daughter?
Who all has raised this question shows that you have read my FF with a great interest and thanks for the same...I am really delighted. 🤗
All I would like to say is...you will get to know the answer in next couple of updates. Till then...please read my FF patiently...I promise not to disappoint anyone.
How old is Komal?
She is around 3.5 years old.
I know there are lot of editing and spelling mistakes...will correct them later
PART 3:

Nandini was shocked...Maan has a point. Maan takes her leave and she calls the security guy on duty immediately after Maan leaves..she blasts him and warns him that such mistakes should not be repeated again.

After some time, she calls on Geet's mobile number

Hello

Hello...Am I talking to Komal's Mom

Yes

Hie..I am Nandini...Head mistress of "Kinder Garden Starters".

Geet gets up from her chair as if Nandini is standing right in front of her...Oh Hello Maa'm...Good Morning...I mean Good Afternoon...What a surprise..I was about to call you just now.

Oh...real co-incidence. ..Anyways...Need to discuss something with you. Can you meet me today before picking up Komal?

Sure Maam...but...hope everything is fine

Nothing to worry my dear...just a casual discussion...anyways, you too wanted to meet me right? So, lets meet.

Maan had to meet the same client near Komal's school and then on his way to meet another client.

Geet gets down from the taxi and going to cross the road to reach the school. She is an hour early as she has been called by the principal.

There is a marriage procession with band baja (Loud Music used in North Indian weddings) passing on the road where the school is located...Maan and Geet are standing on the either side of the road watching the procession. Four ladies lead the procession by throwing red rose petals on the road and either side of the road making a path filled with rose petals. These petals falls on Geet and Maan. Both are actually looking at each other...but completely lost in their own past incidents that had happened.

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Geet: Dev...Look at that Dulha...and giggles😆

Dev: Geet...Comeon why are you laughing at him? Bechare ki khushiyon ka anth hone wala hain aur tumhen hasin aarahi hain (Poor guy's happiness in life is going to come to an end and you are laughing at him?)

Geet: Arre Dev...I am not laughing at him...I just imagined how you will look in that "Dulha" attire covering your face with flowers and you sitting on that poor horse putting all your weight on it.😆

Dev: Udao aur mazak udao mera (Hmm...make more fun of me). But I am not like you...Looking at that Dulhan, I imagine how you'll look in that attire... "Dev ki hone wali Dulhan". (Dev's would be wife)... Dev takes her face in his hands and covers her face with her duppatta... "SO BEAUTIFUL" 😊

Geet blushes and not able to continue looking at his dreamy eyes filled with passion...but still continues to pull his leg

Geet: Oh yah...No wonder you'll not laugh at me...Dulhan thodi na Gode main bethkar aathi hain? (The bride never comes to the wedding by sitting on a horse). Accept the fact...you will look funny and I will look beautiful during our wedding 😛

Dev: Ruk...Abhi batata hoon...Dev chasing Geet and Geet laughing louder at his plight.

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Maan: Jaan...I have been observing for a long time...Why are you staring at that Dulha? I am feeling jealous now.

Neha: Jaanu... I was imagining how you will look in that "Dulha" Attire and your royal look when you'll come sitting on that horse...Sooo Dreamy

Maan: Sacchi.

Neha: Hmm

Maan: Even I was imagining how my Jaan will look in Dulhan's attire... "Maan ki hone wali Dulhan" (Maan's would be wife)...Maan holds her face in his hands and covers her face with her duppatta... "SO BEAUTIFUL"
Neha blushes and not able to look into his dreamy eyes filled with passion as she is really shy

Neha: Hamara yeh sapna poora hoga na? (This dream will come true right?)

Maan: Kaise nahin hoga...Aakir hum Mr & Mrs Maan Singh Khurana jo banne wale hain (Ofcourse...After all we are going to be Mr & Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana)

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Maan and Geet snap out of their past incident and turn to leave to their respective destinations...

Geet has tears in her eyes thinking what she and Dev dreamt and what life choose for them.

Even though Maan doesnt want to be reminded of...some or the other incident drags him again and again about his past...yet he thinks about his promise to Neha of getting into Mr. & Mrs. Khurana which he failed to what life choose for them

Geet reaches Komal's school and meets Nandini

Namasthe ma'm

Namasthe Geet...Have your seat First.

Geet...to begin with, I am sorry for the carelessness of the security guy yesterday.

Geet was shocked...Ma'm how did you know I came to discuss this as one of the issue.

I know it dear thro another person.

Thro another person?
Yeah...Komal happen to Bang on someone yesterday and that person came to see me today. He explained me what ever happened.
Geet is restless. ...Oh no...this person has met the Headmistress today!

Firstly, he was really upset with this fact that a student of that age was left unattended. I have warned the security guy today. Secondly, he told me that Komal has been calling him "Daddy"

Ma'm Komal told me everything what had happened yesterday. I know this person must be upset on this issue...Komal ke taraf se main maafi maangthi hoon (I apologize on behalf of Komal)

Not At all dear...He was not upset with her in-fact he liked her very much...he told me that Komal is an Angel.

Geet has all surprises written on her face.
Geet...I wouldn't tell you complete details about this person...but would like to tell you few basic informations about him...he belongs to a very well to do family...but doesnt have happiness in his life. He had seen a lot in his life...he had even forgotton to smile but today when I got to see him..I could see he was happy and is desperate to have this happiness in his life...And this happiness he got thro Komal. Hence he requested something from me.
Headmistress remains quite for sometime..
Ma'm please continue with what he is requesting.

He wants to spend some time with Komal daily.

Geet is rolling her eyes with shock not able to understand what to comment

Geet...He wants to meet her during school break timing...May be half an hour a day/2-3 days in a week. I told him that I need to check with Komal's mother, i.e's you.

Tell me dear...what's your opinion?

Geet is not able to answer.

Geet beta...komal is also missing that father figure in her life. She misses her papa when other children gets dropped and picked up by their father...its natural for any child to feel that dear.

Tears roll down Geet's eyes

Geet...I am sorry for this...its ok...I will tell NO to this person.

Ma'm...No Ma'm ...I mean please tell him that its an YES from my side.

Nandini feels very happy after listening to this.

Ma'm Komal was at all praise for this person yesterday. I had my doubt about this person's intentions...but I really appreciate his gentleness in requesting my permission thro you and moreover, he had the same issue with the school security what I had...I have absolutely no problem in him spending some time with Komal.

Geet has tears in her eyes again...Ma'm I wanted to be Komal's Mom as well as her Dad...I never wanted her to miss her dad...but I failed...I cannot bring her dad back...but at least I dont want to stop her to meet a person in whom she see's her father-figure...especially when even that person is equally desperate to spend some time with my daughter.

Nadini gets up to console her...no dear...its not your fault...By nature, its a challenging role be both mother and a father to a child... Please Don't blame yourself . I really appreciate your decision and the reason behind it.

Nandini hugs Geet and assures her that everything will be fine.

Geet picks Komal and both get back to Indian Paints

Later Nandini calls Maan and gives him the good news...Nandiniji..I just finished with a meeting in an office near your school. Shall I come and see you now?

Sure

Precap: Maan Meets Komal and gives a Greeting card for her mummy.

NOT ABLE TO UPLOAD PICTURES...was uploading 3 pics...but not happening..😕 Wonder what's the problem...Will try again later
Edited by Vaidhumom - 14 years ago

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