Maneet FF - Journey called life (OLD THR 1 - 2011-12) IMP NOTE PG 126 - Page 76

Hi dear,
jus read dis ff in one go.
Superbly writtn.
Awesome concept.
I cud easily imagine each scene.Really nice.
Wud lov to read ur othr ff too,soon.
Plz continue
One Request: Plz continue writing maaneet ffs,even new

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👏👏 nice update... so MAANEET is coming close yeppee... cont soon

Awesome update..

is ahana ki tou main ek rapchik chamat par isay maan k hatho

Awesome update. Now waiting for the next part

Here goes Part 20. Please leave your long comments. Will do spell chek and editing chek later.

PART 20:

They slowly break out of the hug...he lifts her and brings her out of the pool...Both are locked into each other's eyes till time they are out of pool and he slowly help her stand on the ground.

AACCHHHU...Geet is shivering and sneazing...Maan searches for a towel...and by then the good friend of Ahana comes to help Geet...

Please take this towel...Geet and Maan look at her in amusement...Ahana having a friend like this who stands out of group. Come with me...I have a salwar kameez set. It will fit you for sure...She takes Geet to one of the changing rooms and gets back to the pool

Ahana is standing with her friends...Maan gives a fuming look at her...HOW DARE YOU?

Ahana and her friends get scared with his high pitch voice...but Ahana composes her self..still stammering...I...I have to ask you this question...Dont forget you are standing in my place and here only I have the right to ask questions...

Maan looks at her folding his hand with a smirk in his face...

Dont forget you have been called here for a business and you have to listen to me if you...

Ahana's good friend stop her...Ahana, you are not realising what you are talking...please stop it...

Stop it will you?...I need to teach these people a lesson... By the way, you supporting these people? You are no longer a friend of mine...just get lost! And she looks at Maan. And Maan Singh Khurana...I am not interested to sign the farm house deal with you...

You B... Vicky is fuming and about to spit all abusive words when Maan stops him...

Vicky lets listen what all she has to say...

Just leave from here all of you...

We will leave from here but before that I have to make a call...

Maan takes his mobile and calls Mr. Chopra

MR CHOPRA,

Ahana and friends look at each other...as Maan starting to talk with Mr. Chopra keeping his mobile on a loud speaker

Ahana comes forward...hey why are you calling my Pa...she stopped instantly when Maan showed her his hand in a guesture to stop with his toughest of looks.

Hello Mr. Khurana ...how are...He was not allowed to speak another word

Where ever you are on this earth...I give you next one hour to reach your farmhouse...He spoke in the toughest of the tones

And you know very well about the consequences if I happen to leave from here without meeting you

Mr...Khurana...Mr. Chopra stammers and shivers...I am on the way and will be there very much on time but please tell me what's the matter

I just met your daughter and at this point of time just tell your daughter to SHUT UP!

Mr. Chopra remains quite due to confusion

Mr. Chopra, do what I say...he talks in a demanding manner...Mr. Chopra is extremely scared now. He has never seen Maan so angry and demanding

AAHAAANA Beti...I dont know what's the matter but please keep quite.

PAAPA...

Maan stops her...He cuts the call...Didnt you listen? Your papa said you keep quite

In meantime, Geet immediately changes into a nice white salwar suit and comes out of the changing room

Vicky welcomes her...

HELLO GEET

HEY VICKY...What a Pleasant Surprise

Even I was with Bhai... but you didnt see me as your eyes were filled with my bhai

What?

I mean, you were so angry at him that you could see no body else but only him...

Geet making a baby face...well...I didnt expect boss to be like this...Chee chee babaji

OH...OK...He gives a serious smirk... On one hand he's enjoying this jealousy in her and on the other hand he was worried anticipating her reaction if she comes to know that Bhai is having an affair with a girl by name Komal...Then what are your expectations out of Bhai?

She gives a Killing look at him...You are making fun of me?

No Geet...I am just trying to explain you...Bhai really didnt know about this party...

Haan Haan...if he was dancing this way as he didnt know people here...then how will he behave in a party where he knows people very well...When I think about all this I feel like...chee chee babaji

Vicky is literally scratching his head...GEET...Believe me...Bhai doesnt like to go partying...here he came only to plan out some interiors for this farm house again he's doing it as a help for Chopra Uncle...

Chopra Uncle?

Ahana's Father...whom Bhai is helping in designing this farmhouse. Bhai has asked him to come over here. He is expected to be here anytime now.

In meantime, Mr. Chopra comes there panting as if he will loose his life if he's not here.

H...Hello Mr. Khurana

Hello Mr. Chopra...Firstly, I want to clear few misunderstandings that your daughter has about me...To begin with...

With whom are you associated for your major projects?

What is this question beta?

First answer my question!

All my major projects are with KC

Now what will happen to you if I cancel all those projects?

Mr. Chopra literally fell on his feet...Mr. Khurana, please dont even mention that...I will be dragged to the streets...please dont do that.

I have many other people willing to do these projects for me...

Please...Please dont take away those projects from me...

Ahana and her friends were going aughters to see Mr. Chopra being so helpless in front of Maan

And Do I do individual projects?

No...not atall

Then why did I agree to redo your farmhouse?

It was just a friendly favour from you.

Ahana was just embarrassed to the core looking here and there...

Now repeat it once again in your daughter's ears...She thinks SHE is doing a favour on me

Mr chopra tries to cover up his daughter's mistake...I am sorry on behalf of her...actually, I didnt tell her much about this farmhouse project

The problem is not with the project, its her individual behaviour...Kehne ko tho yeh videsh main padi hain par tameez naam ki koi cheez nahin (She is educated abroad but doesnt know how to behave herself)

Mr Chopra bows down his head with a shame and Ahana is not able to take it..

I have bared with her since morning just because she's your daughter and she crossed all the limits by misbehaved with Geet...he turned to point out at Geet...He stopped instantly looking at her dressed in a simple white dress now with her long hair left open to get dry...He got lost in her at that brief moment that he lost track of what to say further...extremly confused about what's happening in and around him...yeh mujhe kya horaha hain?😕

Maan composes himself...now, Ahana should apologize to geet...and you know very well about the consequences if she failed to do so

Mr. Chopra guestures Ahana to say sorry...She is not willing to with a true heart but she is forced to do so with the kind of situation...

She looks away and tells...SORRY...

Hello...I expected you to tell Sorry by atleast looking at Geet...but you again failed to do so...

Now fall on her feet and tell sorry...Otherwise I will makesure that your career life is destroyed even before its getting started.

By now Ahana understood that what her good friend was telling was correct. She should have listened to her before playing with fire. She instantly falls on Geet's feet

Arre...Arre...its ok...You told me sorry and that's more than enough!

Mr. Chopra speaks...I am really sorry for all what happened Mr. Khurana.

Let this be first and last time I have seen your daughter's face...You need to ensure this for the smooth running of our business.

Maan leaves from there without even turning back or even say bye before leaving. Geet was amused with the way Maan handled the situation. Maan drives the jeep back to Delhi with Geet sitting in the front and Vicky and Pandeji taking the back seats...Maan and Geet invariably steal glances without even their own realisation. Maan stops his Jeep when he sees there's a massive crowd gathered outside a huge Shopping Mall and Police controlling the crowd. He checks with one of the passer by...

Bhaisab Kya hua?

Saab ji...A highly explosive bomb is traced in the first floor of the Shopping Complex which will damage this as well as many other surrounding building if it explodes. The bomb squad team has just arrived but they are not able to deactivate the bomb...

Maan didnt think twice. He immediately rushed to reach the danger spot in Shopping Complex...

Bhai...Please come back...Vicky screams...

Maan Sir...Maan Sir... Geet is screaming on top of her voice...Maan Sir...She remembered the very minute when she got to see Dev for the last time in the Airport where Dev was bidding her good bye and he never turned back...she is surrounded with a same feeling and she kneels down on the ground helplessly...

Precap: Is it Love or a fear of loosing the person you love?

awesome update loved it

Wow, that was amazing the way Maan took care of Ahana and her attitude...showed the business man MSK and making her apologize to Geet like that was a bonus.

Precap looks very interesting, waiting to see if this relationship moves further ahead.

Fabulous update.