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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
nice update... n hw abt (sweetu)...?????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome...continue soon n thanks 4 PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey awesome update...please PM me too

And ermmm il get back to you on the name :-)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely part...wat about sexy or sweetie or coochie poo...lol...tthese gonna b funny...hihih...thnx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice FF...please add me tour PMlist.

As for nickname, how about 'Coffee"...it is like Maan...hot and sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
great part
love it
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
Hey there once again u prooved that u r damn fit to be a director. Thanks 4 d pm. it's awe... Wait 4 it ... Some.awesome.
Okai jokes apart.
According to my perception reg the name I will suggest u Cadbury (Cadu). Since maan turns his attention towards geet as she finds him sweet.
Reply me if u like it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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HEY ALL WONDERFUL SUGESTION OF NAME...

THANK YOU
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hyy its awsum ff add me 2 ya pm list
maan pet nam cn b nariyal cocont lol
baharh se sakt andhar naram lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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PART 7
They were driving.Both were very tired.suddenly there was a jerk and the car stopped.Geet caught maan's hand.That was the first time ever they touched.Then in rapid movements her hand was wrapped by his.she felt safe by his touch.
MAAN :tum teek hona?
Geet didn't answer she was looking at his hand.maan snapped out and removed his hand.
GEET : haan... i m ok
Maan got out to check the engine.geet asked him sitting inside the car.
GEET : kya hua?
MAAN : patta nahi shayad mechanic ko bolana padega.
Maan some how managed to get a mechanic and he was checking the car for past 30 min.and occasionally he was checking at geet as well maan hated it.
MAAN (in angry voice) : aur kitna time lagega?
MECHANIC : sir ji bus aada gante.
MAAN : pichle aada gante se yahi keharahe ho.
GEET : arre usse kyun daatrahe ho koshish kar raha haina.
MECHANIC ( in flirty voice) : madam correct baat bolti hai .
maan gave him angry glare . Geet turned to hide her smile.
GEET : Mr. Khuranna gussa chodiye na. i m hungry.
MAAN TO MECHANIC : yahan koi restaurant hai?
MECHANIC : ji tode door mein ek dhaba hain
MAAN : dhaba!!
GEET : acha we ll go.
MAAN : geet ! dhaba!!!
GEET : we don't have an option as well.
Geet didn't have to try hard to convince him he easily gave in. anyways he hated the way mechanic looked at geet so wanted to go away.They started walking.
GEET : dev aisa kyu kehata hain ki aap acha baat nahi karte?
MAAN : kya?
GEET : mujse toh acha hi baat karte hain na . not too much talking but good company.
maan heard it for first time that he is a good company.
MAAN : so i m good company?
Geet didn't answercoz both the ways it ll sound awkward . she changed the topic.
GEET : aap hamesha aise kapade kyun pehante hai... i mean formal.
MAAN :woh... max time main office mein hi rehata hoon na.
GEET : how sad!! aap itne kaam karte hain aur aapka chota bai bus aayashi karta hain
Maan was surprised no one has ever given his work such definition.
MAAN : aise nahi i luv my work.
GEET : you sound like my papa.
MAAN : really!!
They reached the daba and sat in corner chair to get more light.Though maan was initially uncomfortable Geet's presence made him comfortable.She ordered for food and started talking again.
GEET : bahut hogaya Mr.Khuranna, main kabse bak-bak karke jaarahi hoon aap kuch boliye na.
MAAN (sponaneously) : tum muje Mr.Khuranna kyun bolati ho?
GEET : BREAKING NEWS kyun ki woh aap ka naam hai.
MAAN : Lekin dev ko toh dev hi bolati ho.
GEET : you have a point
After a few seconds
GEET : Dev mera dost hain.
MAAN : toh main koun hoon?
GEET : have a point again.
MAAN : see i always have a point.
Geet clapped for him in air and maan gave her his cute smile in return.
GEET : lekin koi aapko aapke naam se nahi pukarta.
MAAN : kyun ki iske pehale mera koi friend nahi ta na.
GEET: toh main aapki friend hoon?
MAAN : i feel so.
GEET : Thats good. toh main aapkeliye ek naam sochti hoon.
MAAN : kyun maan mein kya karabi hain?
GEET : nahi bahut sweet hai.
Though maan has heard it many times every time the word 'sweet' sounded special.
MAAN : phir
GEET : maine suna hain nickname se pukarne se dosti badta hain
MAAN : really?
GEET : patta nahi. try kare ?
MAAN : teek hai phir main bhi tumareliye ek naam sochta hoon.
Geet started thinking while maan interrupted.
MAAN : mera doo conditions hain. pehala main khud apna naan ka approval doonga aur doosra tum muje sabke saamne maan hi bulavoge.
GEET : truely businessman types ha.
MAAN : can't help it.
They both started thinking and that continued till they reached delhi and throughout the night.

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PRECAP : NAAM KYA HOGA?

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A.N. : THANK YOU ALL FOR ACTIVE SUGGESTIONS OF NAME. SUGGESTIONS ARE WELCOME UNTIL NEXT UPDATE.

Edited by RATII - 14 years ago

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