***Bad Couple*** (sk ff) (pg67 prt10) - Page 42

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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey
Its great to see that you are going to continue with the story.
update was very good.
Kashish and sujal are trying to lead a normal life. Kashish is touched by the small things which Sujal does for her like making maggie, trying to cut vegetables just to help her.
Sujal is shocked to see all his friends at his home to wish him on his b'day. All the while he is worried about Kashish, because he knows that she is feel uncomfortable. But too his surprise Kashish had baked him a chocolate cake for his b'day. And he enjoys eating this much more that the levish cake which his friends had brought for him.
please continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 25
wow u updated this...
nice part...
Sujal is trying to make her feel comfortable with him...
wow its Sujal's b'day and Kashish did bake a cake for him...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazng prt ...chana eating was tooo cute ...
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part nice to see both coming back to normal and start living trying to be helping each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part
Its good to see Kashish and Sujal trying to lead a normal life. He is still very protective about her and so tries to take as much care as possible.
Sujal's friends want him to move on and stop focusing his life only on Kashish. He is surprised to see that Kashish has baked a b'day cake for him
please continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
good to have bad couple back after long time 😊😊...

aww sujal saved kashish from cutting her finger... good he stopped her at right time 😊

😆 😆 poor him cant handle a tomato 😆😆 ... hope now he learnt 😆...

haila he is the birthday boy 😳😳... Happy birthday sujal 🤗...
so kashish remembered it 😃 good 👏...

continue soon 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update yaar, . sweet adoreble update and sujal bithday awesome, its so cute yaar , sujal understand in too good, kashish ko uska bithday yaad tha, i mean kharab situation se gujarane ke bavjund usne uske liye cake bhi bake kiya, how sweet
Edited by pratiksha2009 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Nyc yaar...Continue soon...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part
luvd it
thnx 4 d pm
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 26

Both of them cleaned the mess that his friends had caused, and were again going to hit the bed.

s-emm..wo...

Kashish looks over her shoulder, directly at Sujal, and he looks back at her

s-wo...cake [he looks at the cake she had baked]...cake...kal office mein tiffin mein de dogi? Emm...bohot achcha tha...office mein sab ko khilaunga

A small smile creeps his lips

She nods a little and keeps the cake in the fridge

s-emm..aur...wo..saara mat dena...adha rakh lena...mere liye

She looks at him, and a little smile comes on her lips

+++++++++++++++++++++

In the morning, Sujal was about to leave for his office

k-Sujal

Her soft voice calls his name, making him to turn around

s-haan?

She walks to him

k-tiffin

She hands over the box to him

He looks at the box and smiles

s-thanks...bye

k-emm...wo...kuch kahun?

He looks at her

s-kaho

k-wo...tum..wo...[she looks down]...tum apne doston ke saath..party..yaa kahin...jaa sakte ho...wo..I'll take care of myself

She says without lifting her eyelids

He gazes at her for a whole minute

s-Kashish

k-hmm?

She looks up at him

s-apna bayaan dene police ke paas chalogi, mere saath?

Her brows crinkle a little and she runs into the bedroom, shutting the door behind her

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In the evening,

Kashish was sitting in the bedroom, on the bed all curled up and hugging her knees to her chest

Sujal was watching TV...She hated the voice of TV...everytime the sound of TV would bring back her memories of the news about her being shown on it

'Kashish!'

She hers Sujal's voice...She looks up at the door to see him standing there

s-Jaldi chalo Kashish, dekho tumhara favorite dance show aa raha hai

She looks at him blankly

s-come on, Kashish get up...miss ho jayega

She keeps gazing at him, and runs into the washroom. Locking herself.

She opens all the taps to nullify the sound of the TV

Sujal keeps looking at the door...his another attempt of bringing her closer to normalcy gone into drain

+++++++++++++++++++=

Kashish comes out of the bathroom after a while, after she hears the that the Tv has been switched off

She walks into the kitchen to make the dinner.

But witnesses Sujal there...his eyes red and face soaked in tears

She is stunned for a moment...then she looks down to find that he is cutting onions

She briefly shakes her head and goes to snatch the knife from him

k-let me do...

s-no...I am doing it...kitne kaat ne hain?

k-but...you...

s-i am fine...It happens to everyone

She takes the uncut onions and washes them properly under the tap water, and gives it to Sujal

k-ab kumm jalega...always wash it properly

He nods wiping his tears...she cant help a smile seeing him, he looked so cute

Sujal again starts cutting the onion...but she guesses he is extra sensitive to onion

As his face and eyes became red and his tears were flowing non stop hazing his vision too

Kashish couldn't concentrate on her work seeing him that pitiful state...but he was stubborn to, he won't allow her to do it even

k-wait

Kashish goes out of the kitchen, while Sujal again starts struggling with his tears and onion

k-Sujal, turn

s-huh?

He turns, and Kashish puts a helmet on his head

s-ye..wha..?

She smiles

She shuts the transparent lid of the helmet

k-ab pakka nahi jalega. Kato

s-huh?

k-try it

He does as instructed, and actually it didn't burn...it was so better

But Kashish couldn't control her giggles seeing him cutting onions wearing a helmet

He looked sooo cute...she thought

Kashish bursts into laughter after being unable to control it despite of her sincere try


Note-because of many of my fics being updated...and many diff reader's thrs a confusion of who reads what fic...and who wants to read what...and whom to pm what...bcoz of tht...I have decied that...the members who comment may be like on the prev part will get the pm for the next part...isnt tht right nad fair guys?...and this thing is applicable on all my fics...thnks...keep enjoying and commentin on my fics...love ya

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago

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