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Posted: 13 years ago
please don't quit...
that person is stupid.
just ban that person from your pm and please continue soon.
i love your ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Neelu that is NOT fair...
u cant do this to us...
just for one u cant leave us and the fic...
u know we all have supported u at all the times and will support u and be there for u...
so be a good girl and come back and make us happy...
now this fic is getting interesting with Kashish coming back and both happy with each other after so many pains...
u better write this fic and keep writing as always...
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Posted: 13 years ago
heeyyy dear plsss con't ur fics...don't stop
plllsss con't
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Posted: 13 years ago
PLZZ DON'T QUIT
PLZZ PLZZ CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
Neelu dont quit its a nice fic cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
heyyy yaaar kya pagalpan hai yeh??aisa kisne kaha that u can't write?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey neelu pm me when you update this plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 25

Few days pass and they are back to their normal routine.

Sujal had just come back from his office and Kashish was cutting vegetables in the kitchen...silently...lost in her thoughts

She gasps as someone touches her hand

She finds Sujal at her side, tightly holding her hand as she was accidently going to chop her finger

She was alarmed but looks down as the actual situation sinks in

Her grip loosens and the knife falls on the slab, Sujal also releases her hand satisfied that she was safe

s-emm...

He didn't know what to say...he didn't mean to touch her or hold her...but it was important or else she would have injured herself

She glances away and busies herslelf in some other kitchen work

s-emm...can I help you chop the veggies?

At next istant; Sujal was provided with some tomatoes and was asked to cut them

While Kashish was making chapattis

Sujal, who never ever in his life had cooked was wondering how to steady the damn round tomato and cut it as it kept on sliding

Sujal at last after some minutes of thinking and counter thinking, holds the tomato tight and...

VOOOSHHH !

...stabs it hard, dripping every drop of pulp inside it on the floor

Kashish glances at his mis-adventure and raises an eyebrow...Sujal smiles foolishly in response

s-emm...oops !

He says moving his hand over his hair

s-emm...it just...its so pulpy...its...

She again raises her eyebrow , almost her brows disappearing in her hairline

He quickly bends down to clean the mess

She folds her arms to her chest, not able to control her amused expression, she says-

k-You were supposed to cut the tomato, not stab it !

She takes the knife and shows him

k-and, first of all stop holding the knife as if you are gonna murder the poor tomato

He imitates her and slowly succeeds in successfully cutting s tomato

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It was night

Sujal and Kashish were laid down on their bed

It was late night, when they hear someone ring the door bell

Kashish gets up with a start hearing someone at the door at the wee hours

She checks the click, and it ticked 12

Sujal also gets up, seeing Kashish get with a start like that

Abhi kaun ho sakta hai...he wonders

He wears his slippers and gets up to open the door

He looks at Kashish reassuringly

s-tum, yahin ruko. Main dekhta hoon

She nods, feeling a little relieved by his silent assurance

He walks to the past the drawing room and opens the main door

Kashish who was sitting on the bed clutching the bed sheet, hears the clunk of the door as Sujal opens it

Then she hears a roaring "HAPPY BIRTHDAY , SUJAAALLL!!!!!!!!"

She gets up and peeps from behind the wall

Over dozen of his friends and their girlfriend's had come to wish him, carrying a hugeee chocolate cake

She could see Yash in front carrying a champagne bottle

As Sujal opens the door everybody come inside and start hugging and wishing Sujal

Sujal, who had himself forgotten that it was his birthday was quite taken aback

Yash-Happy Birthday ! saale!

s-thanks yaar! Thanks a lot!

Yash-kya ye...formal kya ho raha hai? Dekh tere liyesab ye chocolate cake aur ye best champagne laye hain...aur tu hai ki andar bhi nahi bula raha

s-emm...wo...haan..wo..yaar wo...Kashish actually..itne saare log...uska adaat

yash-please man...just stop it!...uski wajah se kitne mahino se ek party tak nahi ki tune, hamari nazro se to gayab hi rehta hai...aur ab uski wajah se, apna birthday bhi celebrate karne ka haq nahi hai kya tujhe?...jiski tu itni parwah kar raha hai, usko to yaad bhi nahi hai ki tera birthday hai...stop doing this to yourself , Sujal !

The friends come in and cut the cake and all

Sing the birthday song again, feed Sujal

Yash-yooo! Champagne time !

s-emm..no..please guys...its really late..and no champagne and stuff please...please guys understand

Everybody retaliates...and boos Sujal for being a spoil sport

Sujal jaise taise karke sab ko nikaalta hai

He just the door after them and turns to head to the bedroom

But finds himself face to face with Kashish

k-Happy Birthday !

She gives her little exotic smile

He looks down at her hand which are holding a cake

She answers seeing the question in his eyes

k-Choclate cake. I baked it for you

A foolish pleasant smile comes on his lips

s-for me?

He repeats

She looks down as her cheeks acquire slight colour

s-emm...so let's cut it then

k-emm..no..emm...nahi..wo...ye itna acha nahi hai

She looks at the half eaten cake laying on the table that his friends got from the best bakery

s-emm...let's cut it

He takes the cake from her hand and places it on the table to cut it

He cuts it quickly, and holds a piece undecided what to with it...should he feed her...or should he just

He grabs a plate and keeps the piece on the plate, and hands it over to Kashish

Before he could understand, Kashish takes a piece and feeds him also splurging some cream on his cheek

k-Happy Birthday !

Her lips again move and turn into a smile

And his eyes are just lost in her and he is just lost in the moment when she touched him

Edited by storywriter - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh I luv u luv u luv u luv u...ur d best...u actually updated it...when i saw it in my inboz i was like...s***...that just cnt be happening...!!!!!
ur d best u knw...i dont know tujhe kya sujhi updt krne ki...bt sum part of me says...u m8 hv jus considered my requests that i was making all the while 😳😳😳...chal jo bhi reason hai...plz ab rehularly karna yr...plz plz plz...
it was shuch a shweet part...aww...sujal ka bday...and his sweets frnds come to wish him in a splendid way...aur ye kya...aise time par bhi hes thinking of her...OMG...hes an alien i tell...is duniya ka to hai hi nhi...🤣...yash got angry with him...hona bhi chahiye...sab frnds ko bhi to hurt kiya na usne...'kaise taise sabko bahar nikala...😆😆...and then what a surprise...kashish baked a cake for him...she did know abt his bday...yash uu😡...but she was feeling akward looking at the huge and 'best bakery' cake...😕..poorr girl...but sujal hai na...he cut tht happily...obviously his bhondu smile said that was the best cake on earth...hehehe...thn he didnt feed her directly...gv in a plate...ohh...his consideration makes me dizzy..😲...but surprise again...kashish gave him d piece and even put it on his cheeks...😳..and he was lost in the touch...😳...😃...beautiful...😊
and tomato scene was 🤣...he didnt knw how to steady tht damn round tomato...lol...but eventually kashish taught him...though i do wonder who eventually cleaned the kitchen..😕😆
i guess now i can understand better why i got so attached to this fic...coz of the way u had put ti up...kashish char...after the incident...her innocency and fear..tht lead to tht innocent and sweet behaviour...i dnt knw but sumhow i cud see it in and out...even in this part...when she simply peeps from behind the wall to have a look at his frnds..giving him all his space and not intruding..😊..and understand and accept every emotion that both of them go through...even sujal...hes sucha sweetheart...hes jus thr for her without expecting anything in return.😊
ab regularly updt krna ha...warna...err 😡😡
luv yaa 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi
so finally my darling u have up the part
the up is good
so sujal and kashish is getting back to their normal life
sujal wants to help kashish in her cooking
but he who had no exprerience in it stab a tomato instead of cutting it
he really created a mess oh poor kashish she have to clean this mess also
but it was really a sweet gesture from him
but yaar today is suajl's b day and all his friend including yash came to his house to celebrate his b day
but sujal who started avoiding parties and social gathering after that incident some how send his friend back
but when he came back to his bedroom he saw kashish holding a b day cake
wow
plz cont soona nd pm me

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