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Posted: 14 years ago
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superbbb yaarrr plz update soonnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... nice update ...

thnx 4 d update ...

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Maan surprised

So this is the reason for pari 's behaviour

And if geet knows then she surely hides

I need to find some more information.regarding this

I need to plan carefully without knowing to geet

Just then………………..

He took his phone

And he said something to them…………………………………

it is almost a week

everyday…………………

geet and maan are busy at their work……….

It was Sunday………………..

Maan came in the morning

And he took rohan and pari with him………

As geet is going to ask something

She got a call from hospital

She hurried out…………………………..

As she knows that maan can take care of them

Little of knowledge of maan 's plan…………………

At km………………

Savitri devi is at her chair.

Then suddenly she heard a little girl's giggle.

Along with a boy………………

She surprised to find them in maan's room

She went to them

They both greet ………..savitri devi

They both said that they came to meet their MF……………………

MF surprised

Just then maan entered carrying some bags in his hand…….

He introduced kids to her.

And they start chatting……………………………………

Maan feel better ,,that kids bonding with his dadimaa……………….

While rohan is more attached to dadimaa…………………..

As he is fond of her…………………

He used to ask lot of questions to her.

And she used to answer them politely………………………..

In mean time maan on his mission.

He took pari to his old room.

Which is filled with toys………………….

She is so exicited.

Then they are chatting

And he start conversation.

This is my mom's photo…………………………….

She looked at wide eyes..

As it resembles him………………..

Pari:MF where is she

Maan:she is with god…………………..

Just like my mom……………………….

Yes………………….

She said with sad face……………..

Ok.

Guess who he is

It is his child hood photo

It is u……………….

h……………how do u know.

Ur eyes stupid……..

M :Achaa…………

PAnd tell me whose is my eyes………………. Pari telling her eyes turned………………

In his mind.

The same eyes.which he fall for first time,

He remembered their first meeting………………………….

P: Hello are u there…………..

M :Yaa……………………………

P Accha………………… kaun hay

M:tere pyari maz ka………………………..

P:yaa...

At some more fun talk...

He asked………………………

This is my father photo

The name father changed pari's expression.but she remained silent…………………..

He said he is a good man………….

But he is not………..

How u know………..

Because that night I saw him…………….

What………………..

I saw him killing my mother

Maan shocked………………………..

But how………..

He mix something on the water………………..

That morning.

I got first prize of my drawing.

I went to maasi's room find her sleeping.

I thought of showing to him.as he used to busy in the morning………

I open mydoor ….without making noise

As maasi no r bhayya woke with the sound……………..

And as I about to enter into their bed room.

I saw him mixing some tablets into water………..

And he made drink that forcibly to mom.even she is refusing……………….

Mom is crying and begging to save her………………………….

She is crying horribly……………………

I cannot see…………………..mom crying .

I ran back to……my room……………………

Next morning I and bhayya went to school

At the evening maasi brought me to home…..

I found mama…is at the floor…………..

And maasi informed that god want momma in his room…..so he took mama from us.

Momma is happy with god……………………………………..

I scared tha the may give the same tablets to me,bhayya or maasi.then what

So I didn't told to anyone………………

Maasi used to cry at the night.

She is also scared of that monster………………………………I even saw………………………

He scared maasi also.

The last words………………..stuck maan………………………….

Yes.before the night when…..we are coming to delhi………………………..

He is bad man…………………………..

Will he come here also………………………………….

She start sobbing…….

He hugged her.

He just closed his eyes In pain.

Tha t person is really monster………………

No my princess I will make sure u r all safe…………………………

And no one take my life……………….

And im sure of it………….

He took pari out of the room.

Just then he saw geet entering into the mansion……………………..

He smiled at her………

Pari and rohan hugged her………………..

She shocked to see dadimaa there…………………………………..

Even maan came to know about their meeting at……………………mandir…………..

They chatted…

Savitri devi felt some life is back in their mansion…………………..

She also noticed a unique smile on maan's face when geet is around………………….

She felt great

And sh e also happy that there is some thing in his grandson's eyes…………………..

She secretly thought of her plan..to execute…………………..she smiled…………………………..

At the evening……………..

Maan dropped geet and kids to home.

And he call the person and give some information……………………………..

And.

Now mr dev shergil……………………….

Before reaching ……………..geet and kids.

U need to face me……………………….

Meet ur new rival…………………………………

Maan singh khurana…………….

He said in determination……………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
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finally maan geets to know about dev...great part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good that Maan knows the truth now

continue soon

love
Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d update ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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so finlly maan coming to know about dev now he can do nothing to geet and the kids because geet wold be always there with them
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Posted: 14 years ago
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happy that maan finally knows the truth but not yet that he is after geet yet...
loving all of their bondings...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great part...plzz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow superb. So finally maan came to know about dev. Now dadima wil do plans to bring maan & geet close

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