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Posted: 14 years ago

The next day adi came back from the tour.

\he greeted geet and kids………………………………

She is happy……..

But she is worried……………………………she know s that adi had a fear of his boss…………………..

She don't want to create problem for adi………

He is such a nice person…………………..

Adi came and asked…………..geet.are u alright……….

Any problem.

No nothing………

As theyabout to come……………………………

A car enter into the place

Geet shocked to find the car driver

The driver open the car and said that dadimaa wants to meet her…………………..so she..send him the driver…………….

Adi surprised dadimaa…………….

Then geet explained ofcourse not maneet moments…………………..

His thought………….dadimaa.and geet.she is such a good lady……….and geet ur good…………………………and always be…………………

He woke up from the bed.smiled he is goingto office he could see her…..

He is so happy.

He came down in happy mood………………

Smiling…

The servant shocked……………the other

As dadimaa knows what is going on.

She smiled……………………………

Chalo plan A………………….

Dadi:Maan beta…………………

Maan is in his lala.land…………………

Dadi :Maan beta..


Maan: Je dadimaa…………

Dadi:Kaha ko gayee hay aap…………………….

M:Jee dadimaa kuch nahii woh nayee Project ke baaremein Soc. Raha hoo

Project ha life Project…….he already imagined..geet in bridal dress and he in sherwani…………………………………

Dadimaa………………beta…actually muje apke ghaadi ke jarorat hay..aap aaj kuch aur ghaadi mein office chale jaana….

Maan in his dream world………imagining his shaadi mandap.and all……………

Said yes.without listening to her………………………..

She smiled……………………

And he brushed and went to his office………….

He sit in the car

To find geet in driver dress…………….

He smiled….

Ramesh got dumb strucked…………………….

He turned…………

Maan came back…………………

He enter the office…………………………

He surprised as the day is different for him.

Her smile………………………

Her fragnance……………

He saw her at pinky table.

Forget to breathe to find her in white dress……………………..smiling and greeting………….good morning sir.

Good morning geet………………

Turned to find pinky..

As pinky got heart attack.to find his DD.smiling ather…………………….

She felt like a dream.

Pinky:tune aaj breakfast mein kya khayaa….kuch jyada khayaa.is liye………ajeeb ajeeb sapna dekh rahee hay……………………..

He crossed……………….

She saw.her setting flowers………..giving to him.

It is adi.giving him file………………………………

He took with a smile…………

Flowers

Sir.file…………

Ha ha ha..his trade mark style……………………………

He got angry.

And he enter the cabin.to find geet.in maroon………setting.flowers………………………………….

na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai

tera na hona jane, kyun hona hi hai

tum se hi din hota hai, surmaiye shaam aati, tumse hi, tumse hi

har ghadi saans aati hai, zindagi kehlati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi

na hai yeh pana, na khona hi hai

tera na hona jane, kyun hona hi hai

aankhon mein ankhein teri, bahoon mein baahein teri

mera na mujhmein kuch raha, hua kya

baaton mein baatein teri, raatein saugatein teri

kyun tera sab yeh ho gaya, hua kya

main kahin bhi jata hoon, tumse hi mil jata hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi

shoor mein khamoshi hai, thodi si behoshi hai, tum se hi, tum se hi

aadha sa wada kabhi, aadhe se jayada kabhi

jee chaahe kar lu is tarah wafa ka

chhode na chhoote kabhi, tode na tute kabhi

jo dhaga tumse jud gaya wafa ka

main tera sarmaya hoon, jo main ban paya hoon, tumse hi, tumse hi

raaste mil jaate hai, manzile mil jaati hai, tumse hi, tumse hi

na hai yeh paana, na khona hi hai

tera na hona jaane kyun hona hi hai

he smiled

yeh ladki muje pagal kardegeee.

Yeh sach much mein already pagal hogayaa hoo.

Geet yeh kya kiya hay tum ne……………

Na dekhu toh chain nahii.

He looked at her cabin find her empty………………………………..

On the other hand.

Geet met dadimaa.

She took her to shopping.

Geet is worried.

As she didn't informed him..

What if he gets angry………………..

Oh no his mood.

Yeh babaji badi mushkil say aaj kal unka mood gussa se badal gayaa.

Aur yeh dadimaa……………….koinkaar bhi nahii kar sakthe………ab mein kya karoon

Dadimaa watching geet restlessness.

First I need to find out what is going on between maan and geet………………..

I know this time my grand son biting his nails in furious.or banging at everyone…………or sitting idle in his seat………..in frustuation………….or else pulling his hair…………………

Aur yeha geet bhi……………………………….nervous hay………………………..

If he scold geet…………………………………..i need to think plan b

If he didn't scold…………that means.he loves geet…….my plan a works………..

Weldone savitri.ur the best………………………………..

She smiled…………………………..

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

add me to ur pm list ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely part...people r shocked that he is smiling
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice one...
so dadi ma playing cupid..
lets c whether dadi's plan succeeds
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Posted: 14 years ago
What happened yar. When u wil update it yar. Hamesha 2 din mein update karti thi ab kya hua? Do continue soon cant wait.
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Posted: 14 years ago

First fall sorry guys.

For delay in update

So enjoy…………….

Geet is not in her mood

Suddenly she saw a person……………….

She just rooted on seeing the person

A scream escaped……..

Saying DEV

He is DEV SHERGIL…………………..

She got scared…………..

She don't know what to do

Mean time dadimaa wondered what's wrong with geet.

She is pale.

Her face turn s white…………….at that time.

Suddenly phone rings

It is from maan…………………

Geet looked at the number……………………………………

She picked the number……………..

Sir………….

Maan :geet

Sir……………..

She said no words……………………….

Suddenly maan felt something bad……………..

He just drove to the mall.

He just came to dadimaa……

Dadi where is geet…………………..

Beta she is in the mall………………….

On the otherhand.geet is hiding behind………..a pile of dresses.to avoid the person………….

Maan looked at her…………………

She came and hug him.

Its ok geet.lets us go from here…………….

He just took her from the place……………….

He just wonder who is the person……………………….

He dropped dadimaa.to the mansion.

Dadimaa worried suddenly what happened to geet…………………..

Maan told that there is a problem………………………..

They droved to their flat.

Geet sat in the sofa……………

Maan held….her hand………….

And she hugged him…………..

I saw him………….she wisphered……………

What.

I saw him…………………………….

I saw dev…..

He came .to find me……………..and children………

He will take away……………….and even he will reach………………………bauji also……………….i need to meet bauji

Soon………………..

It s ok geet bauji is fine….

He made her to sleep………………….

And he touched her forehead with his hands………………………..

That is sure that dev is here…………………….

He need to find the details.

He find geet in sleep……………….

He called the detective…………………

At that time………………………………….geet holding his hand tightly

Geet.its a promise.he never come near to u.don't worry…………………

Everything will be alright………….

And now I want to shift to u a safe place…….

He then call adi………………….

Adi reached home…………………………..

First shocked to find msk in his house………………………

Sir aap mere ghar pe……

Tumara ghar.

Yes sir.geet is like sister……………………..

I mean distant relative to me sir.

And he saw geet on the sofa……………

Sir.what happened togeet.

No she is not in unconscious………………………….

Adi.don't ask any questions now.i want to shift geet and kids to km.right now……………………….

I will answer your questions later……..

Now do what I say.

With that he called his driver and gave some instructons………..

And he also called dadimaa.and told her that for some reasons geet and kids are going to…stay at km.

Wah mera pota yeh to badi fast nikala.muje jyada mehenat karne ke jarorat nahii aur bahu ko…..ghar le arara…………….hay

Oh babaji…………………mein aaj bahut khush hoo…………………

And she called……………nakul and given some instructions…………………….

Next day…….

Geet woke up and find her in km…….

It is a large room.

And she shocked.

Mein yeha kya kar rahee hoo………….

Khurana mansion.

She looked at the time……………….

It is 10 :30

Itne jya da sogayee mein

Ho.rohan aur pari kaha hay

To find maan and dadimaa……..looking at her.

Sir.thank u for saving me.but I need to go to home………………….

Its ok.geet.

Geet is worrying…………….

He is in delhi.

What if he reaches them…………

She came down to find rohan is very much busy with dadimaa….in questioning her regarding something.

But where as maan is working in his laptop………and pari lying on sofa playing with a new bunny in her hand………smiling.

Where maan is also smiling at her….

Dadimaa:are geet beta kaise hoo aap.ab apke tabiyat kaise hay……………….

Beta tum kamjoor hoo.lo yeh juice peeloo…………

Sir.we need togo home………………………..

But he is not listening.

What is wrong with him.I need togo from here..he is here..

He then turn tofind..adi looking at her

Bhayaa……………………aap yeha

Geet don't worry it is better u nee dto stay here…………

Ur and kids cloths are here…………….

Its is ok.

Calm down.

Please

Geet is shocked………….

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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update. Do continue soon n plz dont be late
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... loved d update ...

thnx 4 d update ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...now geet and the children r in km...dadi is so happy
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
but u didnt pm me
so i m reading it today

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