Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 33

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Posted: 19 years ago
Scene 60

The next morning

Dhruv wakes up

Ved not on the bed

Dhruv gets up and takes a shower

He gets ready and walks downstairs

Rudra's sitting in the living room reading some files

Dhruv walks upto him

Dhruv (smiles) morning bhaiya!!

Rudra (stands up as he looks at Dhruv) Arre Dhruv! Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?? You're supposed to be resting na??

Dhruv (makes a face) but bhaiya, mein rest karte karte thak gaya hoon!!

Rudra (pats his shoulder) I understand. How are you feeling??

Dhruv (smiles) much better, issliye mein aaj office jaoonga!

Rudra (laughs) Dhruv, mujhe nahi lagtha ki tumhare babhi aur Ved Tumhe aaj kahin jaane dehga!!

Dhruv (laughs with him) don't worry bhaiya, aap ho na..aap Ved aur Babhi ko mana lena!!

Rudra (makes a face) acha, tho tum mujhe apne babhi se marwana chathe ho!!

Dhruv laughs as Kavita walks out of the kitchen

Kavita (sweetly) Dhruv tum yahan kya kar rahe ho??

Dhruv (childishly) mama mein bhaiya se baath kar raha hoon!!

Kavita (smiles) acha, (walks up to him) ab kaise feel kar rahe ho??

Dhruv (makes a face) mama mein bilkul teekh hoon!!

Kavita nods and walks away

Later on

Everyone has breakfast together

After breakfast

Rudra gets his briefcase and is about to leave

Dhruv follows him and both talk secretly

Ved watches them

Rudra nods as Dhruv walks upstairs

Ved follows him

Dhruv goes in his room and get his files

He turns around to leave when he sees Ved standing in front of him

Shes got her hands folded as she looks at him

Ved (strictly) Dhruv, tum kahan ja rahe ho??

Dhruv (makes a face) voh jaan, mein office jaa raha hoon!!

Ved (sighs) nahi, doc ne Tumhe rest karne keliye!! Tum kahin nahi jaoge!!

Dhruv (pleads) jaan plz, Mein bilkul teekh hoon aur aaj apna pura khayal rakhoonga!!

Ved (knows he wont stay back) fine!!

Dhruv (smiles) thanks jaan, Bye (kisses her forehead) bhaiya mera intezaar kar raha hai!! (leaves the room hurriedly!)

Both bros leave for work

Ved comes downstairs

Nih sitting on the couch

Ved joins her

Nih (looks at Ved) Ved, mujhe aaj apni dost Vandana ke ghar jaana hai. She just had a baby boy!! Tum mere saath chalogi??

Ved agrees

Both sis get ready and leave

On their way they stop by the flower shop for some roses

Both are by the stand looking at some flowers

Nih decides on the purple ones

Ved agrees

Both wait in the line to pay

Nih looks around when she suddenly spots someone standing in front of the line talking to the cashier

Shes shocked as she drops the bouquet

Nih (nervously) Ved, chalo yahan se!!

Ved (confused) kyon??

Nih (forcefully) maine kaha na chalo!!(pulls her away from the line)

Both quickly walk into their car

Nih feeling very nervous

Ved (looks at nih) nih kya hua!!

Nih points her finger to the guy whose talking to the cashier

Ved shocked

Its Akash!!




hydrogurl001 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome job!!! 👏 whys akash coming up everywhere? he'd better not make problems 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was a great part Kritika!!! Please continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Scene 61

Both Nih and Ved drive home

Ved feeling worried

Nih scared

Both sit on the couch

Nih (looks at Ved) Ved, mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai!! Agar Akash ne mujhe kahin dekh liya tho kya hoga!!

Ved (looks worried) nih, mujhe lagtha hai ki baath bigadne se pehle Tumhe Rudra bhaiya se baath kar lena chaiye! Agar tumne usse sab kuch sach sach batadiya tho voh kuch nahi kahega. Lekin agar Akash ne Tumhe dhoond liya tho musibath kadi ho jayenge!!

Nih (feels a bit relaxed) shayed tum teekh keh rahi ho! Aaj mein Rudra se baath karoongi. Usko sab kuch bathadoongi!!

Ved smiles

While back in the office

Rudra and Dhruv are studying bank files from a few months back

Dhruv looks at a statement paper

He notices something

Dhruv (shows paper to Rudra) look bhaiya!! Someones been taking money out of our accounts for years now!!

Rudra looks at the papers

He's shocked

Rudra (looks at the papers and then at Dhruv) haan, someones been taking money out of our accounts for years now. But its always been little amounts!!

Both brothers are confused

While back at the Raizada house

Kavita and titli go out to a friends house

While nih and Ved cook dinner

Both sis go to their rooms and do a bit of cleaning

When Dhruv comes home

He walks upstairs t their room

Ved sees him enter but conts folding clothes

Dhruv sits on the bed and thinks

He hasn't said a word to Ved yet

Ved looks at Dhruv as she walks over and sits next to him

Ved (softly) Dhruv, kya hua?? Tum itne chup kyon ho??

Dhruv looks at Ved

Dhruv (smiles but his eyes defy him) voh kuch nahi Ved. Mein sirf thak gaya hoon!

Ved (holds his hand as she looks at him) Dhruv, tum mujhe bataoge???

Dhruv looks at Ved

He tells her everything that happened in office today

Ved shocked as she looks at Dhruv who seems very troubled

Ved (smiles as she changes the topic) Dhruv, ab kaam ke baath choro. Chalo, tum ja kar fresh hojao thab thak mein khana laga dethi hoon!!

Dhruv smiles as he heads to the bathroom

Ved sees him go in

She thinks about what Dhruv told her

Ved looks sad as she goes and sets the table

Dhruv comes down and both eat

Ved (as she eats) Dhruv, kya tumne aaj lunch khaya??

Dhruv (smiles at Ved) yep.

Ved smiles

Both talk as they eat

While Rudra comes home

He goes straight to his room

Nih sitting there in deep thought

She sees him

Rudra sits on the bed

Ved can tell Rudra's mood is off

Nih (sweetly) Rudra, kya hua??

Rudra tells nih about the problems in office

Nih tensed

Rudra's thinking about who could be taking the money

Nih worried

Nih (thinks) mein iss waqt Rudra se Akash ke baremein kuch nahi keh sakthi. Rudra tho already pareshaan hai

Nih looks sad

Rudra looks out the window thoughtfully

Both look tense

Hope the update was ok 😊

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Posted: 19 years ago
great part!! 👏 👏
Plz continue soon 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Soooo sorry for the delay everyone!! I had guests over and than almost all last week I was sick. Well, heres the next part

Scene 62

The next morning

Nih and Rudra wake up

Nih takes out Rudras clothes as he takes a shower

Nih then goes to the kitchen and sets the table for Rudra

She looks lost in thoughts though

While back in the room

Rudra's worries about their office work

He comes out to the kitchen

Nih walks up to him

Nih (sweetly) chalo Rudra, nashta karlo

Rudra (looks dejectedly at nih) nahi nih, bhook nahi lag raha hai, mein office me kuch khaloonga!!

Nih quiet

Rudra leans over and kisses her cheek as he leaves

While in DhruVed room

Dhruvs worrying about work

Ved thinks of someway to get his mind off of work

She looks at Dhruv whose looking through some files

Ved walks over to him and kisses his cheek

Ved (whiny) Dhruv, Tumhe tho meri koi parva nahi!!!

Dhruv (looks away from the file to Ved) Ved, yeh kya keh rahi ho tum!

Ved (looks away from him) sach hi tho keh rahi hoon. Aaj kal tho tum sirf apne kaam par concentrate karte ho. Mere baremein tho bhool hi gaye ho!! (folds her arms)

Dhruv (stansd up) iam sorry jaan, Its just that theres so much tension at work!! (rests his chin on her shoulder) Tho batao, tum kya chathi ho??

Ved (turns around and looks cheekily at Dhruv as she puts her hands on his shoulder) Mujhe iss ghar ke sab se handsome ladka ke saath ek romantic candlelight dinner chaiye!

Dhruv (smiles but looks shocked) KYA! Tum Rudra bhaiya ke saath ek candlelight dinner chathi ho!!

Ved (hits him) DHRUUUVVV, mein tumhare baath kar rahi thi!

Dhruv (smiles) ok baba, aaj shyam ko mein office se Jaldi Ajaoonga aur apni pyari si patni ko ek romantic dinner pe lehjaoonga!!!

Ved (smiles) good!!

Dhruv looks at his watch

He gives Ved a kiss and leaves

While at work both brothers talk

Dhruv tells Rudra he'll leave office early to take Ved out to dinner

Rudra agrees

Rudra (makes a plan) Dhruv, you take Ved to dinner today and I'll take Nih to dinner tomorrow. We barely have time to talk anymore. And at the same, our office work will get done too!!

Dhruv agrees as he gets to work

Later in the afternoon

Ved and nih sit down in the living room

Ved (looks at nih) nih kya tumne Rudra bhaiya ko Akash ke baremein kuch bataya?

Nih (looks sadly at Ved) nahi Ved, kal raath voh itne pareshaan the ki mein usko yeh baath nahi bata sakhi. And anyways, all this happened long back, I don't think it will affect Rudra and my relationship now!!Afterall we're married!! (nih smiles)

Ved agrees

Ved (sofly) lekin jaise iss ghar ki mahaul teekh hojaye, mujhe lagtha hai ki Tumhe bhaiya ko sab kuch bata dena chaiye!

Nih agrees
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Scene 63

Later on

Ved looks at the time

She decides to get ready as Dhruv will be coming soon to pick her up

She goes upstairs

She finds a nice dress to wear..
It's a dress like this


Ved gets ready and heads downstairs when the doorbell rings

Ved goes and opens it

Theres a bouquet of roses in front of her as Dhruv removes them and his face is revealed

Dhruv gives the roses to Ved as he looks at her

Dhruv (walks close to Ved) jaan, tum bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho (leans over and kisses her cheek)

Ved (blushes) thanks

Dhruv holds her hand as they walk to the car

Dhruv takes Ved to a very nice restaurant

Both enjoy a cute dinner together

Dhruv forgets about his tension as they talk

Ved smiles seeing Dhruv so happy

Both enjoy their time together

Later on

Dhruv takes Ved to the beach

The scene looks lovely

The sun is just setting

Dhruv and Ved holds hands as they walk down the beach. Both their feet partially in water

Ved holds dhruvs arm as she rests her head on his shoulder

Both talk

Dhruv stops and looks at the sunset

He hears a girls voice come from the side and turns that way

A girl wearing a strapless very short dress with barely no backing walks by

Dhruv glances at Ved and sees her watching him

Dhruv pretends to find the girl hot

He keeps staring at her knowing Ved watching him

Ved looks at the girl herself and feels jealous

Ved (a bit loud) DHRUV, aise kya dekh rahe ho??

Dhruv (smiles at her jealousy) jaan, usse dekh kar tho aisa lagtha hai ki mein aasman mein ud(fly) raha hoon. (looks dazed towards the ocean)

Ved (arms folded) acha!!! Itni khoobsurat thi voh!!

Dhruv (smiles at her but conts pretending) haan, usse dekh kar tho meri saansen (breath) jaise rukh gayi !

Ved (mumbles to herself angrily) Tumhe lagtha hai aasman mein ho!!! Mein Tumhe aasman dikhathi hoon (Ved gives Dhruv a push )

Dhruv unexpectedly looses his balance and grabs Ved waist as they both fall in the water

Ved screams

Dhruvs shocked as he gets up wet!!

Dhruv (loud) Ved, what was that for!

Ved (gets out of the water as she turns back and aweetly says) jaanu, mein tho sirf Tumhe yeh ehsaas karana chathi thi ki tum zameen pe ho, asmaan mein nahi!!! (walks over to the other side)

Dhruv looks angry as he runs after her

Ved makes a run for it

She heads towards their car

Ved gets tired and stops as she leans against their car

Dhruv gets there and sees her

He's anger fades as he sees her by the car

He gives a smile as he shakes his hair and walks over to Ved

Ved sees him and makes a face hoping his not angry

Dhruv (smiles as he holds her waist) Ved, tum itni jalti kyon ho!!! do you really think I found that girl hot?? (looks into her eyes as Ved looks at him) And anyways, (lets go of her) what was the need to push me!! (looks at himself) iam all wet now!!

Ved (looks at him) sorry Dhruv,lekin tum tho jante ho ki mujhe bilkul pasand nahi jab tum mere alawa kissi aur ladki ke taraf dekhthe ho!!

Dhruv (smiles) jaan, I was just teasing you! Kyon ki jab tum mujhe kissi aur ladki ke taraf dekhthe huey jalti ho tho mujhe bahut acha lagtha hai! (holds her waist as he brings her closer to him)

Ved (looks into is eyes ) So should I be calm while you stare at other girls!!

Dhruv (shakes his head) mm hmmm, maine yeh tho nahi kaha na??

Ved just looks at him

Dhruv slowly leans over and kisses her cheek and neck

Scene slowly fades

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Posted: 19 years ago
Sorry guys, I don't know when I'll cont the next part to this since my classes have started and I tend to be pretty busy. I'll post the next part as soon as Iam free. take care.
Luv Y'all 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome Parts Kritika!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
great job kritika and it doesn't mattwer wen u continue ...i guess every1 is busy with skool or lyk me with work

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