Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 30

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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 NICE WORK 👏 HOPE DHRUV ND VED HEARD EVERYTHING PLZZ CONT SOON
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Posted: 19 years ago
Sooo Sorry for the dealy everyone !! I'll be posting the next part sometime today!!! 😛

Luv Kritika 😛
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Scene 55

Nih hurriedly walks toward the couple

Nih (in hope they didn't hear anything) *normal voice* Dhruv,Ved! Tum dono kab aaye, tum tho kal aane wale the na???

Dhruv gives a look to nih as he walks to rahul

Ved follows him

Rahul looks at DhruVed with a shocked look

Dhruvs face to face with rahul now

Dhruv (angrily) Tho yeh sab tumne kiya???

Rahul (stuuters) Dhruv mein (gets interrupted)

Dhruv (bloods boiling) Tum itne gatiya harkath kaise kar sakthe ho!! Aur woh bhi hamare saath, Jisne Tumhe ek chath diya!!Rahul maine Tumhe aur Rudra bhaiya mein koi fark nahi kiya lekin iske badle tumne humhe kya diya!!!!!

Rahul (looks on the floor) Dhruv Iam sorry!

Dhruv (puts his hand up in disguts) bas!!! Mujhe kuch nahi sunna!! Maafi ek bar diya jata hai, bar bar nahi! (looks furiously at rahul) iss ghar mein Suraj ka koi bhi dost keliye jaga nahi hai!!!! (points towards the door) NIKAL JAO!!!!!!

Rahul (folds his hands) mere baath tho sun lo!!!

Rudra (takes rahuls collars and turns him around) Shayed Tumhe sunai nahi diya!!! Humne kaha iss ghar se nikal jao!!!!! (Lets go of his collar as rahul looks blankly at Rudra)

Rudra grabs his hand and pulls him towards the door.

Rahuls pleading with everyone and his being pulled!!

Rahul (passes by Dhruv) Dhruv please, mein (Dhruv looks away)

Rahul (looks at Ved who was standing next to Dhruv) Ved tum tho mera baath sun lo!!!

SLLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPp

Ved gives him a hard slap

Rahuls shcoked

Rudra kicks rahul out of the house!

He comes back to where Dhruv and Ved are standing

Dhruv (to Rudra) bhaiya, yeh sab kya ho gaya?? Yeh suraj phir se kahan se agaya??

Rudra shakes his head as he tells Dhruv about everything he and nih heard

Ved breaks down and starts crying

Kavita and nih comfort her

Dhruv and Ved go upstairs and rest for a while

After a bit..everyones a little settled

Its 7.00pm now

Dhruvs in the study with Rudra and viren

They're discussing some company issues

There have been a few losses in Dhruvs absence

Dhruv and the rest are thinking of new ways to profit

While in the living room

Ved, tara, nih and kavita are talking

Kavita tells Ved how much she was missed

Nih asks about shimla

Ved tells them how beautiful shimla was

The shopping centers and all

She shows some pics of sites there

They take turns looking at the photos

Tara (looks at one photo) WOW babhi, you look relly nice in that sari!!!

Ved (looks at the photo and laughs) haan, yeh sari Dhruv ka pasand tha!!

Tara (looks at Ved face) tho phir aap aise kyon muskura rahi hai!!

Ved remembers the salesman incident and tells everyone about it

They laugh

Just then Dhruv and the guys walk into the living room

Dhruv (walks up behind Ved) arre, aap sab aise kyon hass rahe hain??

Tara (laughs) bhaiya, I didn't know you would get so jealous at a salesman!!

Dhruv gives a cute look at Ved as she smiles

Dhruv (sits next to Ved) I wasn't jealous!!! Tum sab tho jante ho ki Ved kitna jhoot bolthi hai!!

Nih (laughs) haan, yeh tho sach hai!!

Ved laughs along!!

Viren and Rudra sit down

Tara (looks at Dhruv) bhaiya! Kya aapne mere liye koi gifts nahi layen???

Dhruv (looks at them staring at him) tara, tum yeh sawal mujse kyon pooch rahi ho!! Apne babhi se Poocho!! (looks at Ved)

Tara (shakes her head) nahi!! Maine gifts aap se maangi..ab do!!!(puts her hand out)

Dhruv (looks at Ved) tum dono mujhe bankrupt karne ka plan kar rahe ho kya??

Ved (laughs) Dhruv, shut up and get the gifts!!

Dhruv (whines) Ved mein thak gaya hoon, tum jahke lao na!!

Ved (shakes her haed) nahi, mein kahin nahi jaoongi!! Tum jao!!

Dhruv- but..

Rudra (smiles) Dhruv, mere saali ko tum itna thang kyon kar rahe ho..

Dhruv (gets up) bhaiya aap bhi Ved ki side hai!!! Teekh ahi, jata hoon!!!!!! (looks at kavita) mama, dehka apne, ved mujhse saare kaam Karwathi hain!!!

Kavita laughs as Dhruv goes and gets the gifts

He comes back down and gives tara her gift

Tara excitedly opens her gift!!!

Tara (looks at iy) WOW bhaiya, that's a really nice bracelet!!

Ved (smiles) you know tara, it was my choice!!


Tara (smiles) thanks babhi!!

Dhruv (smirks) acha!!tho babhi ko thanks karti ho..it was my money!!

Tara (hugs Dhruv ) thanks bhaiya, you're the best!! I love you!!

Dhruv (smiles) You're welcome !!(kisses her forehead)

Ved smiles at how much love there is between the two

Nih (looks at him) Dhruv, mera gift kahan hai??

Dhruv (makes a face) margaya!!
😆

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
i loved the part. specially the whole gift things. i love dhruvs line where he says he'll go bankrupt and when nih asks him where her gift is. great job, keep up the good work and continue soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks for the comments everyone 😛 !!!
I tried to add a bit of comedy in there. which might not have worked too well!! 😆
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Scene 56

The next morning

Everyones up early

Rudra and Dhruv get dressed for work

While Ved and Nih get the food ready

After a while everyone comes downstairs

They all have a fun filled breakfast

Dhruv, Rudra and viren leave for work

Tara goes to college

Ved, nih, titli and kavita sit in the living room and talk

Ved (happily) Iam so happy Iam back home!! Mujhe aap sab ki bahut yaad arahi thi!!

Nih (smiles) Ved tumhare bina tho yeh ghar bilkul suna lagtha tha!

Titli (in her way) haan puttar, tumhare bina tho iss ghar ki tho death hi hogayi thi!!

Ved smiles

While back at Raizada Company

Dhruvs working hard to make up the work he missed

He looks at his watch and realizes its time for his meeting

Dhruv quickly finishes doing some calculations and leaves for his meeting

While in Rudra's office

He can't concentrate on work

He keeps thinking about nih

He tries focusing on his work but his attentions not there

Rudra finally gives in and calls nih

She picks up the phone

Nih (happily) hello

Rudra (romantically) kaisi ho jaan??

Nih (makes a face) mein tho teekh hoon lekin tum iss waqt kyon call kar rahe ho??

Rudra (looks out his window) bas tumhara yaad araha tha issliye socha call karloon.

Nih (smiles) Rudra, don't you have any work to do!!

Rudra (turns towards the door) nih you're the only work I have!! (sees viren walking down the hall towards his office) *shit*

Nih (hears him) kya hua??

Rudra (hurriedly) jaan, I goota go!! Papa's here!! (puts the phone down)

Nih giggles at him as she goes back to cleaning

Later on

In virens office

Someone calls him

He picks up the phone

His face changes color when he hears the other person talk

You cant hear what the other person says but you hear what viren says

Viren (composed) dehko maine kaha na ki mein apna kaam kar doonga, aur iss tara muhje phone mat karte raho!!!! (the other person talks) Nahi nahi, tum mere ghar mein hargeez nahi aaogi!! (the other person say something)

Viren (responds) teekh hai!! Mein Tumhe kal shyam miloonga, where we always meet!! (he puts the phone down looking nervous and perspering)

While Back at the Raizada house

Rudra returns from work right on time for dinner

Nih goes and hugs him

Rudra tells her how much he missed her and goes to freshen up

Afterwards

They all sit down and have dinner except Vedika

Nih (looks at Ved) arre Ved, tum nahi khaogi??

Ved (smiles) nahi, mein Dhruv ke saath khaloongi!!

Nih nods and cont eating as Ved serves the food

Later on

The family sits in the living room and talks a bit

Tara talks about her college day and all

Kavita smiles at her daughter

And soon one by one everyone goes to bed

At last its only nih and Ved left

Ved still waiting for Dhruv

He's still at work

Nih (taps Ved shoulder) Ved chalo hum dono bhi soh(sleep) jate hain!!

Ved (looks at nih) nahi nih, mein Dhruv ka intezaar karoongi!! Tum jao, Rudra bhaiya tumhara intezaar kar rahe honge!!I'll be fine!!

Nih (concerned) are you sure ??

Ved nods

Nih says goodnite and leaves

Ved waits for Dhruv

She waits and waits and eventually falls asleep on the couch

A while later

Dhruv walks into the house extremely worn out

Only the staircase lights are on, so its pretty dim

He's about to head upstairs when he notices Ved asleep on the couch

Dhruv quietly walks over and sits next to her

Dhruv (softly) Vedika (slides his hand down her hair)

Ved slowly open her eyes and looks at him

Ved (sleepy tone) Dhruv!!

Dhruv (smiles) jaan maine kaha tha na ki mera intezaar mat karna!! Dehko tum kitna thak gayi ho!!

Ved (holds his hand) haan lekin tum mujhse bhi zyada thak gaye hoge, aur waise bhi jab thak mein tumhe nahi dekh lehthi mujhe chain hi nahi miltha!!

Dhruv (laughs) teekh hai, tho tum hum dono keliye dinner laga do while I go freshen up!!

Ved (looks at him) Tumhe kaise patha ki maine dinner nahi ki??

Dhruv (kisses her forehead) jaan mein Tumhe achi tara se jaanta hoon. (gets up)

Ved sets the table while Dhruv freshens up

Both enjoy a cute dinner together at midnite 😆

They tell each other about their day and what not

Then later on

Both go up to their room and fall asleep in each other arms

Scene slowly fades

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part kritu! i loved it. the dhruv and ved part was sooo sweet. keep up the great work and continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
oooooooohhhhhhhh...thats SOOO CUTE 😳
LOVED THE RUDRA-NIHARIKA PART 😳 😳
PLEASE Continue Soon 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Aww, thanks you two, glad you liked it 😛

😆 😆 hey i pleased both of you!! zhasan with rudra-nih parts and shereen with DhruVed parts 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
Kritika that was just such a sweet part!!! I loved both the Niharika-Rudra parts and the DhruVed parts!!! Continue soon!!!

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