Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 23

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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part kritu, loved the little scene at the end, it was cho chweet!!! lol anyways keep up the AMAZING, WONDERFUL, AWESOME job and continue soon!! luv ya
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww...that was a sweet part! 😛
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Scene 43

The next morning

Ved asleep in bed..she slowly turns around to put her arm on Dhruv but her hand falls on the surface of the bed....Ved opens her eyes and realizes Dhruvs not there..*sighs*

She sadly gets up out of bed and goes to the bathroom to take a shower

Afterwards she comes out and starts drying her hair when her cell rings..Ved walks over and picks it up without looking at whos calling!!

Ved-(on phone) hello

Dhruv- (romantically) good morning sunshine!!!

Ved-(happy) Dhruv!!!

Dhruv- kaisi ho jaan aur humhara bacha kaisa hai?

Ved- (sits on the bed) hum dono teekh hain, tum kaise ho..kya tum waqt par khana kathe ho??? Aur Zyada stress tho nahi karthe na?

Dhruv- (smiles) haan jaan mein time se khana katha hoon aur bilkul stress nahi kartha..but I miss you alot!!..

Ved- (sadly) mein bhi..bas tum Jaldi kaam nipta kar vapas ajao!!(Ved looks up as nih enters the room)

Dhruv- don't worry jaan, mein jald se jald vapas ajaonga..tumhare bager mein zyada din door thori reh saktha

Ved- (watches nih walk towards her) acha Dhruv mein rakthi hoon

Dhruv- ok jaan..apna kayal rakna...mein shyam ko call karoonga...I love you!!

Ved-..love you too...(cuts the line)

Nih sits next to Ved

Nih- (puts her hand on Ved shoulder) Dhruv se baath kar rahi thi??

Ved nods

Nih tells Ved she should come downstairs for breakfast..everyones waiting for her!

Ved agrees and goes downstairs

All have breakfast

Viren goes to work as nih, Ved, tara and rahul sit in the living room!!

The girls talk about shopping and what not but Ved seems lost..she's not paying attention...her thoughts keep going back to Dhruv and how he's doing..

Nih- (turns to Ved) what do you think Ved???...Ved???

Ved- ( comes out of her world-- huh!!

Nih- (sweetly) arre Ved, kya soch rahi thi??

Ved- voh.. kuch nahi (forces a smiles)

Nih smiles knowing Ved lying

The girls talk and joke to make Ved laugh

They do each others nails and have a good time

Kavita goes and makes a health drink for Ved

She just finishes making it when her pot of food almost boils over..

She decides to let Rahul take the drink to Ved since the other girls are busy talking

Rauhl comes and happily takes the tray ..he smiles to himself

Rahul tries to stealthily walk towards his room when out of nowhere Nih stands in front of him and stops his way..

Nih- (stern) Kya Yeh Ved kehliye hai???

Rahul nervously nods."yes"

Nih- (forcefully takes the tray and glares at him) tho mein usse yeh Dehdoongi..Tumhe uske baremein fikar karne ki koi zarrori nahi..hum sab yahan hain uski kayal rakne kehliye..!!!

Rahul- (softly) lekin Nih tum galat samaj rahi ho..mein..(nih interrupts)

Nih- (angry) Muje kuch nahi sunna!!! Iss ghar mein chaiye sab tum par kitna hi vishwas karle lekin Nih tum par kabhi vishwas nahi karegi!!! Iss dohke mein mat rehna ki mein tumhare baathon mein bahay kar tumpar vishwas karne lagoongi!!! (she turns and leaves in a huff!!)

Rahul stands there angrily watching nih go

Later on

Virens comes back home

The entire family has dinner but Rudra and Dhruv are missed...dinners not the same without them!!

After eating Ved, Nih and Tara go back to their rooms

Nih taking a shower as Ved sits on the bed waiting Dhruvs call!

Kavita is in the kitchen

Rahul walks in the kitchen and sees her making some juice

Rahul- arre auntiji yeh kiske liye??

Kaita- (happily) beta maine yeh Ved keh liye banayi hai..isse uske bacha healthy hoga!! (smiles and cont stirring)

Rahul- (thinks to himself) agar yeh bacha duniya mein aya thab na!!(smiles evily)..
Kavita turns to leave with the glass..

Rahul- Arre auntiji...(kavita turns to face him) aap kyun taqleef kar rahi hain..mein Ved ko juice dehdoonga!! (takes the tray)

Kavita- (smiles) teekh hai beta

Rahuls smirks and leaves the kitchen as kavita stands there thinking how sweet he is!!


He manages to sneak back in his room...He smiles to himself as he takes out a medicine bottle out of his drawer...rahul takes out a pill and mixes it in the drink!! He smiles evilly as thinks to himself.."ab mein dektha hoon ki Ved aur Dhruv ki pyar ke nishani iss uniya mein kaise atha hai.....laughs evilly😡).......

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx 4 cont 👏 GREAT PART 👏 plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
THAT WAS A GREAT UPDATE!!! I hope Rahul doesn't harm the baby!!! 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part kritu!! i loved it, hope rahul doesnt do anything stupid now,or hopefully someone catches him, anyways one question...where did rudra go???
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part...please post the next part soon
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Scene 44

Ved in her room talking to Dhruv

Dhruv- (cutely) jaan bas sirf do din baaki hai aur phir mein vapas ajaonga!

Ved- (sarcastically) Don't worry Dhruv, you can stay there as long as you feel like...Iam being treated so well..(gets an idea)..actually Rahul mere saath etna waqt guzartha hai,.woh mera etna kayal raktha hai ..mujse itna baathen kartha hai.(dhruvs getting jealous)...aur kehta hai ki "Dhruvs so lucky to have a wife like me"..Dhruv woh mera saath itna rehtha hai ki I barely miss you anymore!!! (laughs a little)

Dhruv-(shocked) Kya kaha tumne!!!...(imitating her)"you can stay as long as you feel like" "I barely miss you" !! (threateningly) Ved you better miss me varna..

Ved- (happily) varna?? varna kya??

Dhruv- (annoyed) varna mein uss Rahul ko ghar se dakke mar kar nikaldoonga!!! Nahi, uske murder kardoonga!..mere biwi ke saath etna waqt guzartha hi..what does he think fo himself???

Ved- (laughs)itna pyar karte ho mujse ki kisika khoon bhi kar sakthe ho???

Dhruv- aur nahi tho kya!! Sirf yeh sochthe huey ki tum kisi aur mard ke saath waqt beethathi ho, mera khoon kahol (boils) jata hai!!

Ved- (aww) Dhruv Tumhe fikar karne ki koi zaroori nahi...mein tumhare saath sirf mazak kar rahi thi!! Rahul ke saath waqt guzarne ki baath choro mein usse baath thak nahi karti!!!

Dhruv- (happy) good!! Acha ab batao ki tum yahan se kya chathi ho???

Ved- matlab??

Dhruv- matlab, gifts, accesories...you know they sell a lot of good sarees here...I could buy you a few!!.. What colors do you want???

Ved- (laughs) Dhruv mujhe koi gift wift nahi chaiye..tum sirf jald vapas ajao !!

Dhruv- (smiles) ok jaan,..acha mein raktha hoon, mera ek call aya hai!

Ved- ok bye, apna kayal rakhna..love you

Dhruv- tum bhi..apna aur mera bacha ka kayal rakhna..Luv you (blows a kiss thru phone)

Ved cuts the line

She sits on her bed...when someone knocks on her door

She gets up and opens the door

Ved- arre rahul tum!

Rahul- (walks in the room with a tray) haan Ved actually auntiji ne kaha ki mein Tumhe yeh juice dehdoon..

Ved- (smiles as she takes the glass) thanks rahul (walks over and puts the glass on the table) lekin abhi mera mann nahi kar raha peene kehliye...mein baad mein peeloongi!

Rahul- (surprised) lekin Ved aunti ne kaha ki tum sone se pehle yeh peelo!!

Ved- (hesitant) rahul mein baad me peeloongi...issme itna Jaldi kya hai!

Rahul- (thinks to himself) agar issne peene se mana kiya tho mera plan par firse pani phir jayenga!! Ab kya karoon..

Ved-(sees him in deep thought) rahul??? Kya soch rahe ho??

Rahul- (comes out of his thought) huh, oh kuch nahi!!

Ved- (sighs) acha teekh hai, agar tum itna chathe ho ki mein juice peeloon tho teekh hai (take the glass of juice as rahul gets a weird smile on his face)

Ved drinks the glass of juice as Rahul smiles evilly

Ved-(looks at rahul) ab teekh?..

Rahul-(nods) goodnite!

Ved goes and changes into her gown after he leaves

She soon goes to sleep

Everyone else goes to sleep too

Its midnite

Nih and tara are the only ones awake since they don't feel the least bit sleepy!!

Both are in Nih room talking

In Ved room

Ved suddenly wakes up when she get a serious stomach ache and feels giddy

She sits on the bed and feels her forehead which is covered with sweat!!

Ved decides to go downstairs and get nih

She stands up and almost falls over but quickly grabs the end of the table

She walks out of her room with the help of her bed and the wall..

Ved slowly walks down the stairs..one hand on the railing and the other on her forehead....she cant think..her stomach and heads hurting too much!!..she's almost halfway down..when her feet catches the bottom of her gown and she trips falling.."AAAHHHH"

Nih and tara quickly walk out hearing the scream

While Ved winces in pain holding her stomach as she landed on it...with tears flowing down her eyes!!!!..


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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG!!!! That update was sooo full of cuteness and sadness at the same time!!! I really hope Dhruv's baby is okay!!!! Con't soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome update! Hope nothing goes wrong though

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