Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 25

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Posted: 19 years ago
GREAT PARTS!!! But I feel sooo bad for DhruVed!! I feel like killing Suraj and Rahul 😔 But con't soon!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks everyone..hope you like the next part! šŸ˜›

Scene 4

The next morning

Dhruv and Ved wake up

Both take a shower and get dressed

They walk downstairs

Everyones waiting for them at the breakfast table

Both join

Everyone acts cheery..they all avoid any topics that might make Ved sad!

Ved quiet

She doesn't say anything

just eats her breakfast blankly

Dhruv notices

After breakfast

Ved quietly walks back to their room

Dhruv follows behind her

He stands by the door and watches her

Ved opens her closet and takes out some lil booties that Dhruv and her had bought

She holds them to herself and cries

Dhruv teary eyed turns around and closes his eyes

He thinks a little and walks over to kavitas room

Kavitas sitting on a chair rocking back and forth

Dhruv comes and kneels next to her

Dhriv- (softly) mama

Kavita-hmm (looks at Dhruv) bolo beta kya baath hai..

Dhruv- mama mein aap se Ved ke baremain kuch poochna chatha tha

Kavita- (saddens) haan bolo??

Dhruv- (stands up)mama muje lagtha hai ki kyun na mein Ved ko kuch dino keliye, yahan se kahin dhoor lejaoon!

Kavita- (stands up surprised) yahan se dhoor, lekin kyun?? (faces him) beta mein janti hoon ki Ved iss waqt kiss daur se guzar rahi hain lekin uske liye bethar yahi hoga ki voh yahin sab ke saath rahe!!

Dhruv- (with hope) janta hoon mama lekin iss ghar mein reh kar Ved unn karvi (bitter) yaadein ko nahi bhool payegi! Issliye mein soch raha tha ki hum dono kuch dino keliye kahin dhoor chalenjaye..issi bahana uska mood bhi fresh ho jayega!

Kavita- (smiles) teekh hai Dhruv! Jaisa tum teekh samjho.. Mein tum dono ke liye tickets book karva dehthi hoon!

Dhruv (hugs kavita) thanks mama

Kavita smiles

Later on

Dhruv goes into their room but when he walks in Ved not there

He looks around the room but cant find her

Dhruv decides to look downstairs and is walking past Rudras room when he notices Ved inside with Nih

Dhruv stands by the door and watches Ved happily

Nih and Ved are talking and smiling while looking at some clothes

Dhruv smiles happily

It's the first time he's seen Ved smile like that ever since she came back from the hospital...

In dhruVed room

Ved walks into the room a while later and smiles as she sees Dhruv laying in bed halfway

She walks over and sits next to him

Dhruv looks at her and smiles

Dhruv- (puts his arms around her) agayi??

Ved- (holds his hand) hmm

Dhruv- Ved mein kuch soch raha tha!

Ved- (looks at him) kya?

Dhruv- (smiles at her) mein soch raha tha ki kyun na hum dono thore din kelie shimla chalen! Kuch dino se humne waqt saath nahi guzara aur yahi moka hum shimla ghoom bhi lehnge!

Ved- (hesitant) lekin Dhruv...hum achanak shimla kaise ja sakthe hein..sab kya sochenge!

Dhruv- (holds her face) jaan Tumhe voh sab baathon ki chinta karne ki zaroori nahi...mein hoon na!(sees that ved looks very hesitant) Come on jaan...(smiles) mere liye!

After some thought Ved agrees

Dhruv smiles

The next morning

Everyones having breakfast together

Rahuls there too

Taras making conversation with rahul

Virens discussing buisiness work with Rudra

While nih talks to Ved as Dhruv listens in

Just then kavita silences them all

Everyone looks at her

Kavita announces to everyone that Dhruv and Ved are going to Shimla for some time

She hands Dhruv the tickets

Eveyone looks at the couple shocked at the news!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part!!! hope rahul doesnt come in the way now. i loved it. keep up the great work and plz continue soon
luv ya 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was a really sad but cute update!!!šŸ‘ Con't soon!! Rahul better not come in the way!!! 😔
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thaks everyone!! šŸ˜› I'll try cont soon... 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
Scene 48

Dhruv happily takes the tickets

Ved gives him a look

She didn't know he'd get the tickets already

Nih looks at Ved happily

Everyones got smiles on their faces hearing the news

But then everyone else start talking about other things

Rahul though looks at the couple disgustingly

Later on

Dhruv is talking to Rudra concerning work

Rudras like no problem, I'll handle everything while you're gone

Dhruv smiles

rudra-(straight face) but you have to promise me something!!

dhruv- (curiously) kya??

rudra- (happily) you have to promise me that you and ved will have fun!! NO WORRIES NO NOTHING....JUST A RELAXFUL TIME IN SHIMLA!!

dhruv- (smiles) DONE!!!

both laugh

In dhruved room

Ved sitting on the bed thinking when nih enters the room

She comes and sits next to Ved

Ved smiles at her

Ved- arre nih tum?

Nih- (turns her face away from Ved) (stern way) Ved aaj mein tumse bahut naraaz hoon!!

Ved- (confused look) naraaz?? Lekin maine kiya kya??

Nih- (looks at Ved) tumne muje pehle kyon nahi bataya ki tum aur Dhruv shimla jarahe ho??

Ved- nih Dhruv ne muje kal raath ko hi bataya tha..muje kya patha tha ki voh itni jald tickets book karva lehga!

Nih smiles

Nih- well, iam very happy for you Ved....tum dono ko kuch waqt saath mil jayenge!!

Ved smiles

nih walks back towards the door

nih-(turns her face towards ved) AND hAVE FUN!!

ved smiles and gets to work on the packing

In rahuls room

Rahuls sitting on the bed angrily

Rahul-(thinks) ab kya hoga?? Yeh Dhruv ne tho sara pasa palath diya!! Ab mein suraj se kya kahoon! Mein tho kuch kar bhi nahi saktha!! Flight aaj shyam hai!! *shit* (hit's the bed angrily)

Later in the afternoon

Dhruv and Ved are done packing and both are ready

Dhruvs wearing a dark brown suit and Ved wearing a rose colored sari

Its about time for them to leave

Dhruv carries the bags downstairs

Everyones waiting for them

Both take viren ans kavitas ashirwad

Then say bye to everyone else

Tara hugs both her bhaiya and babhi

Tara- don't forget my presents!!!

Dhruved smile

Ved hugs nih as Dhruv says bye to rahul

They leave

A while later they arrive at the airport

Dhruv and Ved walk to the checkstand hand in hand

They give the lady their tickets and walk in the plane

Both sit in the first class section..Ved by the window

The plane takes off!!!

dhruv keeps staring at ved

ved doesnt notice..shes loking out the window

Dhruv leans towards ved cheek

He tries kissing her but Ved pushes him off

ved- (looks at him) kya kar rahe ho!! sab dekh rahe hain!!

Dhruv sighs

Ved soon falls asleep on dhruvs shoulder and Dhruv stays awake the entire time as he keeps checking Ved

A few hours later

At 6

The plane arrives in shimla

Dhruv wakes Ved up

Ved wakes up looking tired

Both catch a cab to their hotel

Dhruv barges into their room...throws the bags on the floor and jumps on the bed backwards!!

Ved looks out their window!!

Ved- (looking out) wow its so pretty here

Dhruv-(eyes closed on the bed) yeah, shimlas very nice!!

Ved cont looking out

Dhruv- (opens his eyes and looks at Ved) jaan muje bahut bhook lagi hai..kyun na hum kahin khana khane chalen??

Ved like ok

Both get dressed and go out to dinner

Dhruv keeps Ved entertained as they eat

Later on both go for a walk in the park

On the other hand

The Raizada house seems pretty empty without the two

Nih missing Ved

Shes got no girl to talk to

Taras at her friends house and kavitas busy

Nih decides to go in the garden

While in rahuls room

Rahuls talking to suraj

He tells him about dhruved leaving

Suraj- (ANGRY) KYA?? Tumne un dono ko rokha kyun nahi???

Rahul- mein roktha tho kaise??? Muje tho pata bhi nahi tha ki voh dono aaj shyam ko hi shimla jarahe hain!!!

At this point nih is almost near rahuls room...(you have to pass his room to get to the garden)

Suraj- ( FURIOUS) MUJE KOI BAHANA NAHI CHAIYE!!! Ab hum kya karenge???

Rahuls (hit's the table in anger) MUJE KYA PATHA!!!! Iss Dhruv ne tho mera sara plan par pani pher diya!!

nih right by his room now!!

Rahul- ( angry and in a loud voice) AB THO INTEZAAR KARNE KI ALAWA HUM KUCH KAR BHI NAHI SAKTHE!!! (sighs as he turns around to find nih standing by the door)

Rahuls shocked

Nih stands there with a weird look on her face!!



- --jaan.vi* thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
o0o0o0o0 nice update...really liked it ... now update soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
I can't beleive I missed ur update!!! 😭 Anyway....It was soooo awesome!! I really hope the Nih heard the conversation!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
THANKS SOOO MUCH EVERYONE FOR THOSE *SWEET* COMMENTS!! šŸ˜› šŸ˜›

I'll cont tomorrow!!! Sorry for the delay! šŸ˜•

Luv Kritika šŸ˜›
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey..well I had some spare time so I thought I'd post a part now!! šŸ˜› Hope you like it!

Scene 49

Rahul drops the phone and looks at nih

Nih- (suspicious) kisse baath kar rahe the rahul?(walks completely in the room)

Rahul- (gulps) voh..mera ek dost jiske saath mein kaam kartha hoon..(looks away from nih nervously)

Nih- (finds it weird) (sarcastically) DOST?? Rahul agar voh tumhare dost tha tho tum Dhruv ke baremein kya keh rahe the??

Rahul turns around as his heart drops

Rahul-(NERVOUS as ever) voh..voh..maine Dhruv ke baremein kuch nahi kaha..Tumhe shayed sunne mein koi galthi huey hogi!!(statters)

Nih- (looks directly at him) NAHI!! Rahul shayed Tumhe kehne mein koi glathi hogaya hoga lekin Niharika (refering to herself) se sunne mein kabhi koi glathi nahi ho sakthi!!!

Rahul looks nervous

Nih glares at him waiting for an explanation

Rahul- (thinks of something) (barely audible) oh haan..ab muje yaad aya/(interrupted)

Nih- (heard what he sad)(stern) kya kaha tumne...I didn't hear you!!

Rahul- (gets his voice back) voh mujse hi glathi huey thi.mein apne dost se keh raha tha ki Dhruv ne muje iss ghar emin rakha!

Nih- (points her index finger at him) rahul!(gets interrupted)

Rudra- (shouts) Niharika!!!! KAHAN HO TUM!!

Nih looks at the door..gives a glare to rahul and leaves the room

She goes into Rudras room

Hes waiting for her

Radra- (sees her walking in the room) kahan thi tum!!

Nih- vo, kuch nahi! I was in the garden!

Rudra- (walks up and hugs her) well jaan, tum tho janti ho ki jab mein kaam par se vapas atha hoon tho sab se pehle Tumhe dekhna chatha hon..(kisses her forehead and hugs her tight)

Scene zooms out and you see nih stern face in deep thought....

In the other room rahuls like yesss!! That was close but Nih didn't hear anything...he tells himself to be careful next time....and smiles again

On the other hand

Dhruv and Ved are enjoying themselves

Both are at the beach enjoying the warm breeze and the sunset

Dhruvs in a very romantic mood

He tries to kiss Ved but she pushes him off

He tries getting close to her again and gets a glare and a push this time

He finally gives up and settles with having his arms around Ved as they walk down the beach barefoot....stepping on inch deep water as they go

Ved relaxed

Dhruv- (holds her tight) jaan (looks at Ved who seems to be in deep thought) jaan!!

Ved- (comes out of her thoughts) huh! Kuch bola tumne??

Dhruv ( takes her to a nearby bench and both sit) jaan kya hua..tum kya soch rahi ho?

Ved- (looks serious) Dhruv..you know meri miscarrige se pehle..

Dhruv 9a little shocked) haan

Ved (looks at him) well, I know ki mein stairs se geeri (fell) lekin mein yeh nahi samaj pa rahi hoon ki usse pehle mera sar(head) itna heavy kyon lag raha tha aur muje aisa kyon lag raha tha ki I will blackout!!

Dhruv (sighs sadly) arre Ved..jo hogaya so hogaya. Ab unn sab baton ko cher kar hum apne aap ko taqleef kyon de!!

Ved (manages to smile) I guess

Dhruv smiles as he leans over and gives her a kiss

Ved blushes

While in Mumbai

You see suraj in the doctors offices talking

Theres dialogues but you cant hear

Then you see suraj sign some contracts

He gets up and smiels evilly

Suraj- (evil voice) ab dekhna Dhruv!!! Mein apna pyar Ved ko kaise tumse dhoor aur mera kareeb le atha hoon!!

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago

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