Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 22

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Posted: 19 years ago

Scene 40

Rahul looks at it evily!!

Rahul- (thinks to himself) yeh (holds up the bottle) ghee mera kaam asaan kar degi...If I "accidently" spill this on the stairs and work according to my plan...Ved has to be the one to slip and fall down those stairs!!!Its a fool proof plan...koi muj par shak bhi nahi karega!!!!

Rahul happily turns around to leave when he sees nih standing in front of him!!

Rahuls shocked

Nih glaring at him

Nih- (loud) rahul tum itne raath ko kitchen mein (takes the bottle from him) iss ghee bottle se kya kar rahe ho!!!!

Rahul- (stuttering) voh.....I ..I..

Nih- (sarcastic) haan haan bolo!!!

Rahul- (brings forth a smile) voh mein kitchen mein pani peene aaya tha (recieves a look from nih) aur mein glass doond raha tha lekin andher(dark) mein kuch dika nahi raha tha tho accidently maine yeh ghee bottle geera diya...bus mein yeh bottle ko cupboard ke andhar rakne hi wala tha jab tum agayi...(smiles fakily)

Nih just stands there in the kitchen looking a rahuls nervous face!!

Rahul leaves..as nih watches him go

he goes back to his room angrily!!!

Rahul (angrily)) ab kya karoon,...iss nih ne tho sara khel par pani pher diya...ab agar Ved kissi bhi halath mein kahin fisal gayi tho nih mujpar hi shak karegi!(has a look of disgust on his face)
Rahul spends the entire night thinking about what to do next!

The next morning

Everyone except Dhruv and Ved are awake

Nih and kavita decide its best to let them sleep

After all it's the weekend!!

In dhruved room

Dhruv and Ved are in bed cuddled together

Dhruv wakes up

He looks at Ved whose still sleeping

He leans over and kisses her cheek

Ved moans as she turns around

Dhruv smiles and he slowly gets out of bed making sure that Ved doesn't wake up

He goes and takes a shower

He comes back out with jeans and a shirt on with wet hair!!

Ved awake..shes sitting on the edge of the bed

Dhruv walks over and sits next to her

Dhruv- (holds her left hand) morning jaan..(kisses her forehead)

Ved- (looks at him with a pale face) morning..

Dhruv- (notices Ved loking weird) jaan, kya hua?? Tum teekh tho ho na?? (feels her forehead)

Ved- (smiles) haan Dhruv mein teekh hoon, sirf thori weak mehsus (feel) kar rahi hoon.

Dhruv- (*Shock**worry*) (hurriedly) weak??? Doctor ke pas jana hai?? (looks up) "hey bhagwan", Mein abhi tablets latha hoon (stands up)

Ved- (pulls him back down ) Dhruv relax, iam fine.(looks at him happily)

Dhruv- you sure???

Ved- (sighs) haan baba!!!

Dhruv- Sach..tum jhoot tho nahi bol rahi ho, na??

Ved-(shakes her head as she laughs at him) Nahi baba, aur mein jhoot kyun bolongi??

Dhruv- (smiles as he puts his arm around her shoulder) sorry jaan, I just get really worried for you!!

Later on at night

Everyones sitting in the living talking

They're all having fun

Rahuls there too

He doesn't say much

Rudra and Dhruv are telling everyone jokes and what no

When suddenly rahuls cell rings

He looks at it

Its suraj!!!

Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
GREAT UPDATE!!! Can't wait till u continue!! Loved the DhruVedika moments!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
fab update!! 😛
can't wait for niharika to bursts Rahul's bubble!
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part! wonder wat suraj is upto now, keep up the great work and continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
Awesome parts, plz continue soon...y duz rahul hav 2 b negative..wish he wz a good person...plz contine soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome job kritika...plz continue soon...m dyin 2 no wot happenz nxt 😃
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Scene 41

Everyone looks at Rahul as he cell rings

Nih looks at him suspiciously

Rahul leaves the room and goes into his room and talks

A while later he comes out and tells everyone he has to go to a friends house and leaves

Later on

Everyone else has dinner and goes back to their rooms

Nih and Ved are in the kitichen

Nih washing the dishes and Ved helps her

Nih- (while washing the dishes) Ved tum janti ho...mein aaj apni dost sanjana se baath kar rahi thi aur uski baath sun kar muje patha chala ki hum dono kitne kismat wali hain ki humhe Rudra aur Dhruv jaisa pati mila!!!

Ved- (as she dries the dishes) kyun, kya kaha Sanjana ne??

Nih- (sad tone) voh keh rahi thi ki usne jis larke(kunal) se shaadi ki woh bewafa nikla....shaadi se pehle usne sanjana se najane kitne vaade ki lekin shaadi ke baad Kunal ne kisi aur ladki ke saath rishta rakha!!Sanjana ko keh kar ki woh apne dost ke saath hain, Har raath kunal kisi na kisi bahane bahar akele jate the... Actually Sanjana ko patha bhi nahi chalta..woh ek din hospital apna check-up karne gayi jab usne Kunal ko kisi aur aurat ke saath dekha..sanjana ne chup ke dono ki baath suni aur thab usko patha chala ki voh aurat Kunal ke bache ki ma banne wali hai!! ....Bechari sanjana tho toot gayi thi..lekin ab woh apne bhai ke saath India chor kar australlia rehne ja rahi hai..I really hope she finds someone worth her love there!!

Ved agrres as she stands there in deep thought

After a while

Both go back to their rooms

Ved enters her room

Dhruvs on the balcony looking out

Ved walks up next to him

Dhruv- (turns around to look at Ved) (whiny) jaan, kitni dher laga di..mein kab se tumhare intezaar kar raha hoon!!

Ved- (worried) sorry Dhruv (hugs him) and thank you!! (hugs him tight)

Dhruv- (hugs her back) (kisses her hair) Jaan, thank you kissliye??

Ved- (unhugs and looks at him lovingly) for loving me and always being by my side!

Dhruv- (serious)(touches Ved shoulders) Ved issme thank you kehne ki kya zaroori hai..mein tumse bahut pyar kartha hoon aur kartha hi rahoonga (hugs her)...mere sansein tho tumse judi huey hai..aur agar tumne mera saath choda tho mein (Ved quickly puts a silencing finger to his mouth)

Ved-(shakes her head) plz Dhruv, aisi baath phir kabhi mat karna (hugs him)

Dhruv- (hugs her) nahi karoonga....I love you Ved (hugs her tighter)

The next morning

Everyones eating at the breakfast table

Viren- Dhruv beta!

Dhruv- (happily) ji papa

Viren- beta, kya tum voh Pune wale project ko finish kar sakthe ho?? Rudra ko Delhi mein meeting attend karna hai tho voh nahi japayega!! Tho tum Rudra ke badle Project finish kar do!! Sirf theen din ki baath hai!

Rahul smiles happily hearing this

Dhruv- Lekin papa..(looks at Ved) mein Ved ko akela kaise chor ke ja saktha hoon!!

Kavita- Dhruv hum sab tho hain yahan Ved ka kayal rakne ke liye.

Dhruv looks at Ved who gives him a "go" look

Dhruvs still hesitant but finally agrees

Viren smiles and thanks him

Later on...DhruVed Room

Both are standing in front of each other

Dhruv intructing ved

Dhruv- (concerned) Ved tum apna kayal rakna aur agar koi problems ho tho muje call kar ke bula dena...aur (touches her stomach) mera bache ka kayal rakna..jab thak mein na ajatha thab thak yeh puri thara se Tumahri Zimmadari hai..(point to her) aur haan..time se khana khaana..time se sona aur bilkul stress mat karna..mein theen din ke andar mein ajaonga..aur (Ved interrupts)

Ved- Dhruuuv!! Mein choti bachi thori hoon..mein apna kayal rak sakthi hoon..Tumhe fikhar karne ki zarrorat nahi..aur agar kuch hua tho nih aur mummyji mere pas honge!!

Dhruv- (smiles) I know jaan but I'll miss you...aur ek aur baath kahoon??? (looks cutely)

Ved- (annoyed) Ab Kya??

Dhruv- (leans close and holds her shoulders) mere aane se pehle delivery mat kardena!!

Ved- DHRUVV!!!!!!

Both laugh

Rahuls room!!!!

Rahul- (thinking) Lagtha hai aaj bhagwan bhi mera saath deh raha hai...(smiles evilly)...Dhruv Pune ja raha hai yeh tho mere liye kushi ki baath hai...kam se kam kuch dino ke liye Ved se koi etna chipat kar tho nahi rahega!!....aur Ved akela aur behsara rahegi..(gives a wicked smile)

Thanks for the comments everyone for the previous update!!! Hopefully this update was ok...wrote it in a bit of a rush 😕

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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG!!!!! THAT WAS SUCH A GREAT UPDATE!!!! I can't wait till u continue!!! I hope Rahul doesn't try to take advantage of Vedika!!!! 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks Meera..heres a mini update... 😛

Scene 42

The next day

Dhruv packs his bags in the car

He comes back inside the house to says bye to everyone

He bows down and takes viren and kavitas blessing

Then says bye to Rudra, Nih and Rahul

Last he goes to Ved who's standing at a corner sadly

Dhruv- (brings forth a smile) Jaan muje gari (car) thak chorne nahi aaogi??

Ved smiles and follows him out to his car

Dhruv opens the door and stands to face Ved

Dhruv- (sad) (hugs her) Bye Jaan (Ved hugs him back)..apna kayal rakhna!

Ved- (unhugs) tum bhi apna kayal rakhna...I'll miss you

Dhruv- I'll miss you too jaan..(gives her a kiss and hugs her )

He sits in the car and drives off as Ved waves to him

She sadly goes back inside the house

nih leaves with Rudra to drop him off at the airport and viren/kavita go to a friends house

Tara and Rahul are the only ones left

Taras busy finishing some schoolwork and rahuls in his room

Ved sits alone on the couch

A little while later tara comes and sits next to her

Tara- Hey babhi

Ved- (looks at her) hey tara..are you done with your schoolwork?

Tara- haan, mein finish kar chuki hoon...

Ved-(smiles) good

Tara- babhi ek baath pochoon??

Ved- haan poocho?

Tara- (excitedly) babhi, kya aap aur Dhruv bhaiya bache keliye koi naam socha hai??

Ved laughs

Both tara and Ved talk a while

Ved forgets her loneliness and pays more attention to tara

Nih soon comes back and the three of them talk and have fun!!

Later on at night

Everyones gone to sleep

Ved still awake in her room

She's feeling lonely

Dhruv used to always talk her to sleep

He never left her side when at home and kept Ved laughing

Ved missing all this

She feels like talking to dhruv

Ved picks up her cell and dials his number

Dhruv picks up his cell

Dhruv- (on phone) hi jaan!

Ved- (happy to hear his voice) hi Dhruv...kya kar rahe the??

Dhruv- (looks out the balcony of his room) bas Tumhe yaad kar raha tha!!! Tum kaisi ho??

Ved- teekh hoon...tumhare yaad bahut arahi hai!!..

Dhruv- muje bhi..aur tum tho janti ho ki tumhare bina muje neend hi kahan atha hai!!

Ved- haan janti hoon...(both talk)

Dhruv and Ved talk each other to sleep 😳



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Posted: 19 years ago
Awwwwwwwwwwww!!! Kritika....that was such a cute update.....I loved the parts with DhruVedika.....Con't soon.......I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!! 👏

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