Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 20

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Posted: 19 years ago
Uff!!! cant stand them!!! 😡 😡 😡 they better not harm the baby!!!!!!!!!!




that was awesome please cont soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
"slaps Suraj and Rahul and ties them up and holds a gun to their heads one wromg move and I'll shoot your brains out" "even thinking of hurting an unborn child, how dare you!" great update! " prepares to hire body guards."
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Posted: 19 years ago
"slaps Suraj and Rahul and ties them up and holds a gun to their heads one wromg move and I'll shoot your brains out" "even thinking of hurting an unborn child, how dare you!" great update! " prepares to hire body guards."
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Posted: 19 years ago
"slaps Suraj and Rahul and ties them up and holds a gun to their heads one wromg move and I'll shoot your brains out" "even thinking of hurting an unborn child, how dare you!" great update! " prepares to hire body guards."
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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 nice work 👏 cont soon plzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
Iam soo sorry everyone...I havent updated this FF in a while...But heres the next part...Hope you like it 😛

Scene 36

At the Raizada parivar

All the guests have left

The entire family is in the living room

Kavita is telling Dhruv to take very good care of Ved

Not to let her do anything

Dhruv nods

Everyones talking

When the doorbell rings

Nih like I'll get it

She goes and opens the door happily

Shes shocked

Nih- (angry) RAHUL!!

Rahuls shocked as well

(cuz nih nd the rest of the family weren't there when Ved nd Dhruv let him stay in the house)

Ved and Dhruv walk up to nih

Ved- nih, its ok, Rahul ko andar aane do

Nih- (even more shoked) Ved yeh tum kya keh rahi ho!

Ved manages to take nih into her room

Dhruv lets rahul in and introduces him to the rest of the family

Kavita and viren seem happy to meet him

Dhruvs like rahul's a friend of mine and he'll be staying here for a while

Virens like ok


On the other hand

Nih and Ved are in nih room

Nih angry

Ved then explains to her that rahuls changed and he's realized his mistake that he made before

Ved tells her everything

Nih still not willing to let him stay in the house

Nih- (serious) Ved, agar mein tumhare jaga par hoti tho mein rahul ko mere aur mere pati ke saath....ek hi ghar mein rehne ki ijazat kabhi nahi dehthi!

Ved- lekin nih, rahul sach me badal gaya hai, voh ab pehle jaisa rahul nahi raha

Nih- kuch bhi ho Ved, muje abhi bhi yahi lagtha hai ki rahul ko iss ghar mein rak kar tum dono bahut bara galthi kar rahe hain....

Ved tries arguing back

Nih- (sighs) teekh hai Ved, agar mein thori dher ke liye yeh maan lethi hoon ki rahul sach much badal gaya hai, tho aisa bhi ho saktha hai ki tumhare aur Dhruv ka pyar dekh kar voh jal ute aur uska iradha badal jaye

Ved keeps persuading nih

Nih finally agrees

Ved happy

She hugs nih happily but nih only gives her a half- hearted hug

Ved says good-nite and leaves

Nih- (thinking to herself) Ved, yeh tumne acha nahi kiya... rahul ko iss ghar mein rak kar tumne acha nahi kiya...chahe tum aur Dhruv uspar kitna bhi vishwas karlo lekin mein rahul par kabhi vishwas nahi karoongi.....voh vishwas ke layek hi nahi..


In dhruVed room

Dhruvs sitting on the bed

When Ved enters the room

She closes the door behind her and sits next to Dhruv

Dhruv- (puts his arms around Ved) kya kaha babhi ne?

Ved- (puts her head on his shoulder) nih keh rahi thi ki humhe rahul par etna bahrosa nahi karna chaiye....Usko lagtha hai ki rahul hum dono ke beech mein aane ki koshish karega.

Dhruv- (smiles) ho saktha hai lekin chaye koi kitna bhi koshish karlen..Ved aur Dhruv kabhi alag nahi honge...humhara pyar humhe saath rakkega.(kisses Ved head) I Love you Ved

Ved- (lifts her head) I love you too Dhruv (hugs him)


In rahuls room

Rahuls angry

He throws things around in his room

Rahul- (talking to himself angrily) Yeh Niharika naam ka musibath pathani kaha se tapak para..(throws a book on the bed) ..nih never trusted me...she didn't trust me then when I was going to marry Ved and she isn't going to now!!!...(throws a vase) SHES NOT GOING TO KEEP ME OUT OF HER SIGHT...MERA HAR HARCATH KA KABAR RAKKEGI VOH!!!!

Rahuls sits on the bed angrily thinking of what he should do now!!

after a few mins, he smiles evilly

Hes thought of a plan


HOPE EVERYONE LIKED THE UPDATE..SORRY, IT WAS SHORT.....I'Ll CONT SOON!!! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
That was sooooo good!!! I can't wait for the next one!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey Everyone,
sorry 😭 I know i havent updated this ff in a while but i'll try posting sooner..i dont know when i'll be able to update next cuz we're changing internet companies and so due to that i wont be able to update for another few days...well, hope you like this update!!😛

Scene 37

Its 4 am in the morning

Dhruv and Ved are sleeping peacefully

Both are cuddled together

Ved wakes up

Shes feeling hungry

She turns to look at Dhruv

Hes sleeping peacefully

Ved doesn't want to disturb him so she slowly moves dhruvs hands away from her and creeps out of bed

She goes downstairs into the kitchen and looks in the refrigerator

Dhruv wakes up shocked to find Ved gone!!!

Ved standing next to the kitchen counter pigging out on samosas

when suddenly she feels a hand on her shoulder

Ved turns around shocked!! Its Dhruv ( she breathes a sigh of relief)

Dhruv- (puts his hands on her shoulder) (whiny) Jaan, samose mere saath nahi share karogi?

Ved smiles as she hands the plate to him

Dhruv and Ved both sit at the table and eat/talk together

After both finish

Ved gets up to clean [Dhruv grabs her hand>

Ved- (looks at him) Dhruv mera haath choro aur muje dishes saaf karne do!

Dhruv- (gets up and stands next to her) nahi, (takes the plate from her hand) mein hoon na!, mein sab kuch saaf kar doonga! (goes to put the plates away and cleans the table)

Ved watches Dhruv smilingly as he cleans

Afterwards both go upstairs to their bedroom

Dhruv lays in bed facing the ceiling

Ved turns off the lights and joins him

Now, neither one of them are tired..

Ved turns towards Dhruv and puts her left hand on his chest and her head near his shoulder

Dhruv puts his hand on hers and wraps his left arm around her as he looks a the ceiling in deep thought

Ved looks at him lovingly..she's like he looks so cute when his serious (leans forward and gives him a kiss on the cheeks)

Dhuv- (looks at Ved happily) woh kisliye?

Ved- no reason..(watches Dhruv as he's smiling at the ceiling) kya soch rahe ho?

Dhruv- (looks at Ved) jaan, mein tho sirf apne hone wale baby boy ke baremein soch raha tha!

Ved- (lifts her eyebrow in curiosity) LADKA!! Agar ladki hogi tho??

Dhruv- (calmly)mmmm, nahi ladka hi hoga kyun ki (touches Ved tummy) iske papa ladka chatha hai!

Ved- NAHI!! Ladki hogi kyun ki (touches her stomach) iski mama ek ladki chathi hai so ladki hi hogi!!! Aur tumhe ladka kyun chaiye?

Dhruv- (smiles innocently) kyun ki ladkon badmaash hote hain aur mein aur mera beta dono mil kar bahut sara masti aur shaithani karengen( smiles listening to him)...tumhe darayenge(scare you)..larkiyon ko cherenge (tease girls)(Ved interrupts)

Ved- (suspiciously) kya kaha tumne, larkiyon ko cherenge???(points her finger at him)..kabardar agar tumne mere bete ko kuch ulta seeda seekaya tho!!! Samje!!

Dhruv - (happily) acha baba, teekh hai,(kisses her forehead) lekin ladka hi hoga!!

Ved- (sighs) teekh hai, ladka hoga..(smiles at Dhruv) lekin naam mein rakkoongi!

Dhruv-(whiny) Nahi, naam bhi mein rakkoonga!!

Ved- (sarcastically) Dhruv, agar sab kaam tum karoge tho mein kya karongi???

Dhruv- (holds her tight) jaan, bache ko mein samaloonga aur tum muje !!!

Ved- (smiles) Dhruv!!!

Dhruv smiles naughtilly!!

Ved and Dhruv soon fall asleep talking about the baby!! 😳 😳
Edited by moderngirl - 19 years ago
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Scene 38

The next morning

Ved eyes open

She looks at the time

She's like OH NO!!! its 7, Dhruv usually leaves the house now but he isn't even awake yet..

Ved gets out of bed and walks over to dhruvs side of the bed and leans over

Ved- (ruffles his hair) Dhruv, uto varna office ke liye dher hojayagi

Dhruv slowly opens his eyes and looks at Ved childishly

Dhruv- nahi jaan, aaj mera chutti hai..thori aur dher sone do na, plz..(closes his eyes again)

Ved smiles and kisses his cheek..."teekh hai"

She quickly takes a shower and goes downstairs

Everyone's sitting at the breakfast table waiting for the two

Kavita-(looks up at Ved) Arre Ved beta aao (gestures her to sit down), Dhruv kahan hai?

Ved- (as she sits in a chair next to Nih) mummyji, voh abhi thak soh raha hai

Kavita smiles

Everyone eats their breakfast happily

Rahuls there too

Nih keeps glaring at him

Rahuls getting nervous knowing nih suspicious of him

Rahul- (thinks to himself)- lagtha hai muje sab se pehle iss nih ka kuch karna parega varna yeh tho mera sara plans par pani fer dengi !!! (rahul looks at nih whos looking at him)

He gives her a fake smile but Nih just gives him the evils and goes back to eating her food

Later on

Everyones in the living room watching home movies of Rudra and Nih wedding

Rudra and Nih stare at each other lovingly as they watch the video

Everyones enjoying the movie when

Dhruv finally walks downstairs in his home clothes

he heads straight for the kitchen

Ved sees him and smiles

She excuses herself from the family and follows Dhruv to the kitchen

Dhruvs sitting in a chair, telling Ramu kaka to get the food

Ramu kaka leaves to get the food and Ved sits next to Dhruv

Dhruv looks at her and smiles

He eats while Ved waits for him

Later both of them go into the living room where the rest of the family is

The grown ups are just talking

Dhruv and Ved go and sit down on the couch next to each other

Tara's like Iam bored, we should play a game!!!

Nih like yeah that should be fun

Ved agrees

Tara's like how about Antakshri

Dhruvs like no!!

Ved like fine, how about truth or dare then??( makes a "What say??" face at dhruv)

The girls agree

Rudra and Dhruv exchange looks and finally say yes!

Kavita and viren watch

Taras like here are the rules

The youngest person should go first..ME!!

I choose who to ask truth or dare to..if you choose truth then you have to asnwer my question truthfully and if you choose dare but cant do what the person dares you to do then you're out!!! The last person sitting is the winner!!

Ok, lets start...any question

Everyone shakes their heads no!!

Tara- ok, my question is to Nih babhi!!truth or dare??

Nih- (thinking) umm, truth!

Tara - (smiles) ok babhi, whats the worst thing about Rudra bhaiya?

Nih- (thinks) the worst thing about Rudra is that he can't sing....every time he tries to sing people think some animals being killed or something!!..like that one time we went to a karaoke party, Rudra and I were asked to sing and I felt so embarrassed cuz everyone covered their ears when he started to sing!!!

Dhruvs the first one to laugh, joined by everyone else

Rudra glares at him

Nih- ok, my turn to ask!!(she thinks then smiles evilly) Ok, my question is to Rahul!(glares at him) T or D?

Rahuls eyes are wide open..he's shocked that Nih asked him!!!!!


Hope the update was good..and sorry if there are too many mistakes...i was writing pretty quickly!😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part kritu...wonder wat shes gonna ask him?? and loved the little baby part btw dhruv and vedika...keep up the awesome work and continue soon!

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