Sindoor Tere Naam Ka- Ek Pyara Sa Rishta - Page 18

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Posted: 19 years ago
its better than that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She's pregnant!!!!!

But get out of their lives and let them be!!



Please cont soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx 4 cont 😊
story is going great 👏 awsome work
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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESOME FAN FIC KRITIKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOT A SCENE!!!!!!!!! PLZ CONTINUE SOON 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
Thanks everyone for your comments..i'll try and cont soon, maybe tonite or tomorrow 😛
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Scene 33

Just then Dhruv walks up to rahul

Dhruv- (smiling) arre rahul, kaise ho tum?

Rahul- (a little nervous) teekh hoon.

Ved comes up from behind Dhruv

Ved- arre rahul tumne itne der kyun ki, job mil gaya?

Rahul- (lying) haan Ved muje nokri(job) mil gayi

Dhruv- oh, congats (both shake hands)

ved congrajulates him as well

Rahul- thanks... Dhruv nokri tho muje mili hai lekin tum dono etni kush kyun dik rahe ho?

Ved looks down as Dhruv looks at her

Dhruv- actually rahul, we have some good new to share too

Rahul-(worried, as they're good new is bad news foor him) good news??? Kaisa news

Dhruv- (puts his arm around Ved) vedika ma banne wali hai

Rahuls shocked at first

He cant believe what he just heard

Rahul: sach????

Dhruv nods

Rahul- (gives a fake smiles) congrajulations you two

He hugs both of them

All of them then eat dinner together

rahul(thinking)- yeh kya hua, ved wasnt supposed to get pregnant.(frustrated).sara plan mein pani phir gaya...crap!!! ab naya plans banana hoga lekin kuch bhi ho dhruv aur ved ko mein alag kar ke hi rahoonga...

dhruv- (loooks at rahul) arre rahul kya soch rahe ho?

rauhl- (comes out of his world) oh, kuch kas nahi

Ved and Dhruv ask rahul questions about his job

Rahul lies and says that hes got his job a little ways from where hes staying

After that all sit in the living room

They talk a while when rahul says hes feeling sleepy and goes to his room

Dhruv and Ved go upstairs to their room

Ved goes to the bathroom

Dhruvs cell rings

Dhruv- (on his cell) hello

Guy- hey Dhruv!!

Dhruv- hey Sachin, How are you?

Sachin- good, how're you?

Dhruv- iam fine, so why'd you call

Sachin- oh, I just wanted to remind you about my birthday party tomorrow nite

Dhruv- oh sorry yaar, I totally forgot about that. But don't worry I'll be there

Sachin- ok bye Dhruv

Dhruv puts the phone down

Ved comes out and sits next to dhruv

Ved- kiska phone tha

Dhruv- (looks at her) mera ek bahut acha dost sachin ka. Uska birthday party kal hai.

Ved- oh ok, so are you going

Dhruv- yep with you (hugs her)

Ved smiles

Both go to sleep

The next moring

Ved wakes up very early

Its 6.00

She turns around to see Dhruv fast asleep

She slowly gets up making sure Dhruv doesn't wake up

Ved goes and takes a shower

Dhruvs still asleep when she comes out

Ved sits next to him

She strokes his hair and smiles as she stares at him

Dhruv slowly opens his eyes

He smiles

dhruv- (smiles) morning jaan

ved- morning(kisses him on the cheek) than goes and puts on her earings and acessories

dhruvs watching her

he suddenly remembers something

Dhruv- (thinking) Shit!! maine bhaiya ko phone karna bhool gaya...muje raath ko batha dena chaiye tha...lekin pathani kaise bhool gaya..(gets mad at himself) dhruv, how could you be so stupid, agar sab ko bathaya nahi tho voh sab ghar time se kaise a payenge..aur agar nahi aya tho mera sara mehnath (hard work) pe pani phir jayaga..(thinking) ab kya karoon, ved samne tho phone kar nahi sakthe varna usko mera plan ke baremain sakh ho jayaga...(thinks of something)

Dhruv- (cutesy) jaan

Ved turns around and smiles- hmmm

Dhruv- kya tum mere liye ek kaam kar sakthi ho?

Ved- kaam??? Kaisa kaam?

Dhruv- Ved, muje bahut bhook lagi hai, dil kar raha hai pancakes khane ka

Ved- pancakes...abhi???

Dhruv- plz jaanu, bahut mann kar raha hai pancakes khane ka

Ved- (laughs) Dhruv, pregnant mein ho ya tum??

Dhruv gives ved a cute puppy eye look

Ved agrees and goes downstairs

Dhruv quickly gets out of bed and takes his cell phone

He calls someone

You can see him making calls and talking but you cant hear what his saying

Dhruv puts the phone down and smiles

hes like YEss!! ved gonna be soo happy when she finds out!

He takes a shower and goes downstairs humming happily

Ved almost done with the pancakes

Dhruv enters the kitchen

Ved just finished making a few pancakes

She gives them to Dhruv

Dhruv feels bad to have had Ved make pancakes during her pregnancy

Dhruv- (sad) sory jaan, maine tumhe pareshaan kiya

Ved- (smiles) isme sorry kehne ki kya baath hai, mein tumhare kushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakthi hoon

Dhruv smiles

Both hug

Dhruv eats his pancakes

Dhruv and vedika are in the living room talking

Its early in the morning

Just then rahul wakes up and joins them

They talk a while and rahul says he has to go to work so he leaves

Its afternoon

Sachins party will be starting soon

Dhruv and Ved are getting dressed

Dhruvs got his sherwani on looking as cute as ever

ved has a rani colored sari

kinda like this one


She looking as gorgous as ever

dhruv just stares at her

Ved- (twirls around to show Dhruv her sari) kaise lag rahi hoon

Dhruv- (stares at her) bahut khoobsurat lag rahi ho?

Ved smiles

he walks over and gives her a kiss on the cheek

ved blushes

dhruv looks at his watch his like "oh no!! i have to get ved out of the house...they'll be coming soon"

Both get in the car and drive off

dhruv tells ved about Sachin

how they met and what a nice person he is

ved like i cant wait to meet him

before they know it they've arrived at the hall

Sorry everyone😭 😭 hopefully this update wasnt too boring
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww soo cute!!


please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DNT TEL ME THT VEDIKA N SACHIN WILL NO EACH OVA 4RM B4...LOL..PLZ CONTINUE SOON M DYIN 2 NO WOT DHRUV'S SURPRISE IZ..BTW THT SCENE WZ NT BORIN..IT WZ WELL CUTE I WZ SMILIN THROUGH IT..PLZ CONTINUE SOON..UR SCENES ALWZY ROCK...KEEP IT UP!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
plz continue soon kritika..m dyin 2 no wot happenz nxt 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Yuvika_15

plz continue soon kritika..m dyin 2 no wot happenz nxt 👏



Noe worries 😃 Iam continuing tonite 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
Wow!!! I started reading ur fanfic yesterday, and I finally caught up!!! It is SOOOOO good!!! Can't wait till u continue!!

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