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Posted: 14 years ago
loved both updates..
ending is hott..
owsme..
thanx 4 d pm..
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Posted: 14 years ago
They are making out in car ...loved it😳

lovely ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was amazing.
loved ur ss very much :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Liz. Thanks for the pm n long detailed updates.⭐️ Read parts 9 to 12 now. Was thinking of ur FF/SS n u updated. It was intense, emotional, passionate n amazing updates. the end was beautiful - Maan n Geet together, all misunderstandings cleared and another baby on the way. U r a wonderful n talented writer!👏 Looking forward to manipulation - do pm wen u do update! Its sad that this has ended. Please write something new as well as there is onlt Seducing Mr Perfect n Manipulation now. Loved the SS. 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...what an amazing update...just awesome!!
Loved the reunion, the ending was great...
thnx for the pm!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Good updates...

And very nicely done.

Even so, I think it would have been better if u had stretched the story by just 1 or 2 more parts.

This FF had lot of passion, emotions, angry sex and making love.

Such things can't be ended abruptly. I mean, yeah, you've made a great ending but it feels very compressed.

Like too much chocolate in a banana split, you know? No, no.. Like gas compression in gas cycllinders or syringe, you know.

I hope I'm making sense and I await more of your FFs and pls update more of SMP.

And don't make a hurried ending but you are more than welcome to make many hurried updates. LOL 😆
Edited by yam29 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Read part 9...such a lame mother...hate geet's mom! UGH!😡

OMG! No wonder she didn't call Maan or pick up his calls (I caught that BTW...lizzy you're such a smartie)!

And he came...he so found them...more angry love making please! Missing that so much!!!

Awww...Anji is a cutie! Okay time to read the next part! Love it!
Edited by sweet coco - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 9
knew it Maan will find his Geet and baby Anjali this time...
oh so when Geet and her mom came to know about Geet's pregnancy, hell broke...
poor Geet...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it...it was an awesome SS...loved how geet fought 4 her child...enjoyed evey part of this ss...thanx 4 the wonderful ss...ur an awesome writer
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 10
what is Maan DOING?
whats wrong with him?
nice part...

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