FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 49

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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 85: Blind fold Update 2: And the FUN continues!!! I was right she knew the power of her beauty like "the back of her hand"….nice one! He's lke her voodoo doll….LOL!!!

"Maan...you have to stop drooling": This is going down in history as one of the most funniest lines out of Geet's mouth…and also an epic one! "Stupor" the word made me think of humming brids…didn't know why, but then I remembered my bio notes and my teacher talking about humming birds and their stupor state…okay that was totally random…IGNORE! LOL!

Now she's going all shy *slaps forehead*…this one is truly something else! Now she remembers their in his bro-in-law's home…how convenient! ARGH!!

Awww! The kissing shuru….how lovely…keep it goin'! She's shivering with his touch…it's already established, but honestly who wouldn't?!😉

Pool-side romance how cute…or garden-side…but still! Sher wants to go "up-stairs"…of course he does!☺️

A brilliant sensual symphony it was, as her senses focused on nothing but his caress on her naked skin.- HOW-DY! Now that would make an awesome pick up line…'hey beautiful, the touch of your skin is like a brilliant sensual symphony'….OMG! I need to focus reading…this is getting to good! I love how to build up the tension to it's highest peak and then bam the climax! Hope you enjoyed that play on words! I know I did!!!!😆

GAME TIME!!! And there's a part 3….kya?! Nearly about to faint!!! AHHH!

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Sweet coco: Right back at you, because you are on a roll...

You are making me crack up here with your random thoughts. I mean that pick up was hilarious, because I was totally imagining the guy getting beaten to a pulp after that. That is coming into reality only if the guy is wasted I guess.

Now symphony, brought this OS back to my mind. I had forgotten than I had even written it to start with.
Did you get a chance to read Churchgate Symphony? The link is in the first page of NY times. Its a very mushy one, but straight forward and no rangeela...deela scenes 😉 (Lord! where did that come from). If you are interested, do check out.

Thanks for stopping by and posting long ones...Given that I'm going on and on with NY times, I have to appreciate your diligent catch up and writing up of individual comments for each update. That is something and a true honor.

Thanks,
Hasini

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Posted: 14 years ago
H!

Guy getting beat up?! Nahin! That line would be 10 times classier than the things I've heard...any more "angel" lines and I'm gonna kill someone!

What can I say you bring out the funny in me! Yes and I'm the QUEEN of random...I don't know how but this one thing I was reading an article about Kevin Bacon and started dreaming about cheese...see most random thoughts in a day award goes to ME!

No I haven't read that...def shall check it out ASAP!!! Man you're writing so much in the past year...maybe you should consider getting it all published and stuff!!! You're fantastic at it...and you know it too!

What no deela stuff...BOO! You know how much my character is dheela...I would enjoy it so much!!! But that's cool...sometimes being seeda is best!!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Luvely prt,hope they act fast before some intruder come to spoil their privacy
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mandymore

Luvely prt,hope they act fast before some intruder come to spoil their privacy



Hi Mandy,
Thanks for stopping by...

@To Mandy and all...
Just to make sure I don't leave you guys too much of a suspense.

It's a gradual night for the two...and NO...absolutely no they will get their space and their much needed intimacy. (hoepfully, IF will not ban me before that...else, dont forget to bookmark my blog, if you want that is 😆)
I wrote this to pixie in a PM and posting the same here.
According to the timelines in the update, Geet landed at around 7.00 PM or so.

Naini and Daadima left at 8.30 AM. (remember she was wondering why Yash and Meera were crashing so soon)

Close to 2 hours have passed by so far. Trust me all, the night is still young. 😉
NY times has a long way to go...if I'm making it a point a write up every scene I had in my mind for this FF (Hopefully it wont bleed my creativity dry for the other FFs)

Hasini
Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great updates!

They are relentless, but am loving the battle. Though they can't help but momentarily drown themselves in the other's proximity, neither of them is giving up. Hope they don't waste all of their time together fighting. Also, am glad Maan did not entirely succeed in getting Geet to give in. Can't wait to know how they resolve this and who makes the first move. Do continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing update again.
Thanks for the shower of updates.
Both of them are not ready to give in.
Maan is being super adamant i felt.
He was trying all the best possible ways to allure her.
Geet is strong on her stand.
Though she was acting as per Maan's wish comforting him.
She made her point clear time and again that no going to bed with him. 😃
So who is going to give in first is the big question
The clock is ticking.
I hope Dadi and Naini come back only in the morning.
So that the love birds can act cold or make it up the whole night.
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
it's a cold war between maneet! want to see who will win? but plz maan should end this not geet this time! he should bend him self further to gain geet!
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Posted: 14 years ago
I have a question for all you NY times readers. Please indulge me by answering my silly poll/question.

Who according you have been more accommodating of the two? Maan or Geet. And why?

I want to know the answer from the reader's perspective and because these characters dwell in my head, I know more of the history and setting that make them who they are and why they do, what they do. But given with what I have revealed so far in the story, it will be helpful to get your responses.

Many of my previous questions have been ignored, and I hope that it will not be the case this time.

Thanks
Hasini

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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet...in fact if seen from the 3rd person's perspective it would be BOTH...

For me its Geet...coz she had a lot of emotional baggage that she carried off with her, some of it was relevant and some just a fiction of her imagination and her fears but then she moved on with it maybe yes definitely not maybe with the help of Maan but still she wouldn't have if she din want too and somewhere shes trying to understand and delve and you know give Maan more space than necessary but then again its similar in Maan's case too, even he's adjusting yet somewhere somewhere I cast my vote to Geet...because I understand her and can connect to her more than I can to Maan...sometimes I'm like why only Geet has to understand and all why can't he once step in her shoes ?? He's reserved I understand and Geet is bubbly even that's acceptable but doesn't mean he will always become grumpy and avoid confrontations and all (resolving fight between the sheets type..) he needs to settle things which he never does.

I know as a reader maybe I'm being more biased towards Geet and against Maan but that's what you've asked readers view haven't you ?? 😃
Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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