Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 112

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Posted: 14 years ago
matlab????????????????sanchi is no more???????????
another twist😉...interesting...looking fwd..
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 42 b
nice part...
oh no Sachi...
Khushi is married to shravan?
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thnx 4 pm awesome part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesum part..
so sachi s no more...so bad..
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 42b ... awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
but sachi died 😭
n sharavan n khushi married
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
wowww 2 year leap
glad sachi is okaiii
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Love story with a strange twist:Part 43{2nd version}

Pari:Here comes Khushi bhabhi and Sanju...Mom and baby have come.Let's start the celebration.
Shravan takes Sanjana from Khushi.
He blows the candle for Sanjana.Everyone sings the birthday song.
He holds Sanjana's hand to cut the cake.
Muskaan:Shravan..Khushi..you both hold Sanjana together and cut the cake.
Shravan is irritated.
Khushi holds Sanjana hand.Her hand touches Shravan's hand.He stares at her.
Khushi and Shravan feed her cake.
Everyone smiles.
The photographer takes their snaps.
He:Can the father,mother and the birthday girl stand together for a snap?
Muskaan:Nice idea.
Sh:Take our phto fast.We are standing together.
He:Khushiji..please stand closer to Shravanji.That would be better.
Shravan stares at Khushi.She comes and stands close to Shravan.He is irritated.
Sanjana extends her arms towards Khushi.
Geet:I think Sanju wants to go with Khushi.
Shravan is irritated.He gives her to Khushi.
He goes near Pari.
Sh:Pari..why did you introduce Khushi as my wife and Sanju's mom?
P:Because Khushi is your wife and she is Sanju's daughter.
He loses his control:No..I don't consider Khushi as my wife.
P:But you can't deny the truth that Khushi is your wife.You married Khushi bhabhi.
Sh:When Sachi left us after her delivery,everyone forced me to marry her.
P:So finally you admitted that you married Khushi bhabhi.
Sh:Yes.But she can't be Sanju's mother.Sachi is Sanju's mother.
P:Sachi gave birth to Sanju.But Khushi bhabhi is the one who is bringing up Sanju.She is the one who is giving her a mother's love.
Shravan closes his eyes for a moment to suppress his anger.
Then he rushes to Khushi.
Sh:Khushi..can you come out?I want to talk to you.
Mus:Is everything alright Shravan?
Sh:Yes mom.
Muskaan smiles.Muskaan takes Sanjana in her arms.
Khushi and Shravan go to another room.
Sh:Do you know that we were forced to get married?

Khushi looks at his face.

Sh:Everyone forced us to get married as they wanted Sanju to have a mother.That's the only reason i married you.But don't try to be my wife.I can never accept you as my wife.You can never be my wife.
Khushi feels that her heart is pricked.

Sh:The only reason i'm tolerating you is for my Sanju.She loves you very much and you are also taking care of her.But one thing...don't try to take over Sachi's position.
Shravan goes away.Tears roll down her cheeks.
Maan and Geet were watching it with pain.
Seeing them with a shock she wipes her tears.

They go near her.
M:Was Shravan always rude to you?
Khushi bends her eyelashes.
G:I can't believe that Shravan can be so angry..After Sachi's death,he is totally changed.
K:He can't be blamed.He loves Sachi very much.It's not easy to forget the person we love.I'm not sad about Shravanji's behaviour.
G:Then why were you crying?
K:I did'nt cry.
Khushi can't control anymore.Tears flow from her eyes.

M:Khushi..you don't have to hide anything from us.
K:I don't know why..i feel sad when Shravanji svolds me.I feel upset when he ignores me.I don't know why.
G:That's because you love Shravan.
Khushi can't believe it:Geet aunty?

G:I'm a woman.I can read your feelings.You are confused Khushi.You don't know what you feel for Shravan.But unknowingly you have started loving Shravan.
Khushi does'nt know how to react.
Maan smiles:If you are still confused close your eyes.
She closes her eyes.She sees Shravan's face.
She opens her eyes immediately.
M:Did you see Shravan?
Khushi keeps silent.
Maan and Geet smile.
G:Don't worry..Shravan will accept you.But you need to wait for some more time.
Maan and Geet go away.
Khushi is numb.

Maan and Geet go near Shravan.
M:Shravan!Did you shout at Khushi?
Shravan does'nt open his mouth.He is shocked to know that they came to know about that.
M:We overheard everything.Are you not ashamed to talk to a lady like this?She takes care of your baby like her own daughter.Still you...very bad.
G:Even though you shouted at her she did'nt say anything back.
Shravan feels upset.
Sh:Maan uncle...i just could'nt control myself.I don't know why..i'm not able to soft with Khushi.
Shravan regrets hurting Khushi.
G:You should apologize to Khushi.
Sh:Badi maa...
G:Won't you do that?
Sh:I will do whatever you say.You asked me to marry Khushi.I did that.You are asking me to apologize to Khushi.I will do that also.
G:Shravan..don't apologize to her just because i asked you to do so.Don't you feel that you have done something wrong?If you are a human being..you will feel guilty for hurting your wife.
He thinks about scholding Khushi.He feels upset.
Sh:Yes.I was blind.So i could'nt control myself.I can't justify myself.I will apologize to her.
Maan and Geet smile.
He goes near Khushi.She is nervous.
Sh:Don't get scared.I did'nt come here to shout at you.

Sh:I came here to say sorry to you.I'm sorry..
Khushi can't believe her ears.First time he is talking to her softly.She looks at him unbelievingly.

Maan and Geet watch it with a smile.

The photographer comes near them:Can i take a snap?
G:The stars of the party are Shravan,Khushi and Sanjana.Did you take their photos?
He:Yes,i took everyone's photos.Now you both are left.
M:Ok..then..take our photo also.
Maan and Geet smile and pose for the photograph.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey brilliant twist yaar...
maaneet r still look like young couples😃...am just kidding...i loved it...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved da twist
interesting
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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