Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 113

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Posted: 13 years ago
great update...loved the way Maaneet made Shravan understand...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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awesome update dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 43 b
nice part...
poor Khushi but she has started liking Shravan...
and Shravan poor him missing Sachi so much...
hope Shravan and Khushi end up happy together...
cont soon...
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brilliant twist awesome story love it
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Lovely Update
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awesum..
nw shravan shud accept kushi..
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Hi...thanks 4 da pm for parts 42 n 43. Poor Shravan..sachi died. He marrried Khushi! Shravan sed sorry to Khushi...love Maaneet, update soon
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Awww nice updates..
2yrs leap.. hmm cool..
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Love story with a strange twist:Part 44{2nd version}

Khushi sings a lullaby for Sanjana.Shravan watches it.
Suddenly his conversation with Pari comes to his mind:
{Shravan:Pari..why did you introduce Khushi as my wife and Sanju's mom?
Pari:Because Khushi is your wife and she is Sanju's daughter.
He loses his control:No..I don't consider Khushi as my wife.
P:But you can't deny the truth that Khushi is your wife.You married Khushi bhabhi.
Sachi gave birth to Sanju.But Khushi bhabhi is the one who is bringing up Sanju.She is the one who is giving her a mother's love.}
Sanjana is falling into sleep.But when Khushi moves a bit away from her,she holds her hand tigthly.
Shravan thinks:What Pari said is true.Khushi only gives a mother's love to Sanjana.Sanjana is so attached to her that she can't live without Khushi.Khushi is taking care of my daughter.She considers her as her own daughter.Still why do i hurt her?I am supposed to be thankful to her.But what did i do to her?If Maan uncle and Geet badi maa had'nt opened my eyes i would have kept torturing her.
Sanjana has fallen asleep.Accidently Khushi sees Shravan.Shravan becomes conscious.He goes away.
She thinks:I know that you hate me.I won't destroy your piece of mind anymore.
Her tears flow down.

After 2 days Khushi goes to the office to meet Shravan.He does'nt want to look at her face.
Sh:What's the matter Khushi?Why did you come to the office?You could have talked to me at home.
K:I wanted it to be confidential at the moment.Does'nt want it to be an issue.That's why i came to the office.If i talk to you at home it might burst out.

Sh:What are you saying?I can't understand anything.
K:These are divorce papers.I have signed it.

He is shocked.He looks at her.
She gives the paper to him.
K:Please don't tell this to our family members now.They will be upset.Shravanji...atleast now please believe me..i have never tried to take Sachi's position.But unknowingly i became Sanju's mother.I have a request.Please let me continue as her mother.
Tears roll down her cheeks.
He becomes upset seeing her tears.
She gives lunch to him.
K:You forgot to take the lunch box.
She leaves the room wiping the tears.
Shravan's mobile rings.It is Muskaan's call.
Mus:Shravan...Khushi is bringing lunch to you.
Sh:Yes..i know.She brought me lunch.
Mus:I'm happy that my daughter in law is taking care of my son.Even i did'nt notice that you did'nt take the lunch to the office.But Khushi noticed it.You are lucky to have a wife like her.
Her words touch his heart.
Mus:Ok..bye..Take care.
Sh:Bye mom.
Shravan thinks:Why do i feel upset?I'm supposed to be happy to get rid of Khushi.

Evening...
Again Muskaan rings him.
Mus:Shravan...Khushi did'nt reach home yet.
Shravan is shocked.
The phone gets disconnected due to heavy rain.
Shravan thinks:Khushi must have left the house since she signed the divorce papers.But where did she go?She has no place to go.
He feels upset.

Shravan is driving home.He stops the car.
Sh:I feel so weak that i don't feel like driving.Why?I have not felt this before.
He comes out of the car and views the rain.Shravan thinks standing close to the car:
I have always hated Khushi for no reason.I'm supposed to be happy about the divorce.Still why i'm upset?Where did Khushi go?
Surprisingly he sees Khushi standing in the rain.
He runs towards her.
She can't believe her eyes.
Sh:Why are you standing here?That also when it is raining heavily?

She has no answer.
Sh:I know why.You don't know where to go.Right?
She does'nt say anything.She keeps looking at his face.

Sh:I will tell you where to go.You come with me.All are waiting for you.They are upset about you not returning home.
She looks at him carefully as she can't believe that Shravan is calling her back.
Sh:Can't you hear what i said?Come with me.
Unknowingly they share an eyelock.

Shravan keeps his arm on her shoulder:Come with me Khushi.

She can't believe that he touched her.He touched her softly for the first time.She looks at his arm on her shoulder.


He becomes conscious.He removes his arm from her shoulder.
Sh:Come..we will go together.
They walk together.He looks at her in between.
They get inside the car.
They don't talk anything.
They reach home.Everyone comes to the verandah.
Geet:Khushi...where were you?
Muskaan:Are you fine Khushi?
Khushi does'nt know what to say.
Sh:Actually we were with each other.
Mus:What?
Sh:When you called me she was with me.But the phone got disconnected.So i could'nt tell you that she was with me.
Karthi:Why are you both drenched?You will catch cold.
Sh:We both love rain.So we spent time in the rain.
All are relieved.
Dev and Muskaan smile.
Muskaan whispers to Dev:See...our son is having rain romance.He is so romantic.Dev..why are you not taking me out when it is raining?
Dev and Muskaan giggle.

Maan and Geet in their room.
G:Maan...I'm sure that Shravan and Khushi were not enjoying in the rain.We know how their relationship is.Right?Some problem is there.
M:Ya.But there is some change in Shravan's attitude towards Khushi.I noticed it.
G:Ya..i also think so.But still i'm worried about them.I can't understand where their life is going to.
M:Geet..don't think about unnecessary things.Everything will be alright.I'm sure.

Geet does'nt say anything.

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