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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#811

Shikha honey,thanks for the lovely comments..I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it.😊.Maan's monologue is getting longer than I had expected..should do something about it...otherwise I'll be forced to convert my SS into a FF...nahiii..too tiresome..kya kare??? Any ideas??

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#812

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
Shikha honey,thanks for the lovely comments..I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it.😊.Maan's monologue is getting longer than I had expected..should do something about it...otherwise I'll be forced to convert my SS into a FF...nahiii..too tiresome..kya kare??? Any ideas??

Meine to shuru mein hi hi kaha tha convert kar do

Mera baat koi suntahi nahi 😒 😆

Ok , jokes apart . Why you don't wanna convert it ??

Is it because you don't wanna open a new thread or what ? 😕 😕

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#813

Originally posted by: drashsree100
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Meine to shuru mein hi hi kaha tha convert kar do
Mera baat koi suntahi nahi 😒 😆

Ok , jokes apart . Why you don't wanna convert it ??
Is it because you don't wanna open a new thread or what ? 😕 😕

Nahi Priya..Short Stories are supposed to be 'short'..!! But in my case,I need to write many more parts before the climax, toh short story long story ban jaayega!! Anyways, I don't care,as long as you guys are interested..isliye chaddo!!

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29priya

@29priya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#814

superb update...
loved it...
thnx 4 d pm...

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#815

loved the update ... Sahil's plight was heart wrenchng .. i got goose bumps imagining a little cute fella going thru all that ... I hope Maan was able to keep Sahil safe ...

though u've not yet officially confirmed Dev's involvment in all this but considering his temperament and extreme nature ... he is more than likely to be invovlved ... and now may be Maan and Sunil are trying to prove it unofficially since the case has been closed and they cant reopen it with out any solid proof ... but I cant keep myself from suspecting Sunil too ...

Dev can easily be manipulated given his impulsive and angry nature coupled with the sensitivity of his brother's arrest...

thanks alot for the update again

cant wait for the next update

love

Sana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
Shikha honey,thanks for the lovely comments..I'm glad that you enjoyed reading it.😊.Maan's monologue is getting longer than I had expected..should do something about it...otherwise I'll be forced to convert my SS into a FF...nahiii..too tiresome..kya kare??? Any ideas??

nah..i like the pace..let it flow..kya faraq padtha hain even it is a FF or SS until ur readers enjoy it?
😃 U need not rush things..the pace is good..
dont get panic by the name FF... you can do it tanya and am here to encourage you and make you forget ur stress by my stupid talks😆

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kahkashansakina

@kahkashansakina

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+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#817

Brilliant part🤗

loved it

geet very comfortable with maan

i feeling dev is not her husband

maan is the one only her husband

lpls cont soon

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Durga

@mrk-1

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#818

wow awsome one yaar...loved it !!!do continue soon pls

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bindu

@bangalores

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#819

was feeling so bored and thinking of putting a post on GF that it's becoming dull...
when i switched on the comp to do that here u were!!
thank for the wonderful update!! wow Maan is really good, but then i had no problems with this Maan, any time😊

Edited by bangalores - 14 years ago