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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 14 years ago

#821

terrible..wonder how will Geet cope with this

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#822

@niddzzz :

(geet couldnt take all that and fainted...much more to cum baby...!!!😉 😭)

Your absolutely right!!

(now i m wondering...in devs work...whatever he is doin...where does geet fit...??😕

why did he marry her ???😕 i mean she is a simple , innocent naive gal...but may with all her characteristics she landed up here ...but what will dev get in marrying her...i mean wer she fits in the puzzle wich dev has created...!!! )

Ahem !! Sorry,can't answer all these now😳

(i m gonna virtually kill him...believe me tanya even u wont b able to save him then...!!!) 😡 😡 😡 😡

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(i hope maan keeps sahil wid him...and geet demands to meet him and maan makes her meet the little boy ...i would love to see their bonding...!!!) 😳 😛

Not fair!! How did you find this out?? I've written something in similar lines in the next part..(Pouts!!)..wait a sec..are you spying on me???😲😲😲..kaho ho tum??? (Looks around frantically!!!)..koi mujhe bachao...

(i want to see geets reaction after she meets dev after the entire past is disclosed to her...!!!)

That'll surely happen..but I'll have to work hard to make it explosive !!

(all said and done...me is loving THE STRANGER more and more wid each update...!!! 😳 😳 😛

thank u so much tanya 4 bringing such a beautiful story 4 us...!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

u r a ROCK ⭐️)

Thank you dear..having people like you around me, surely makes me feel special..love you😊

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#823

Originally posted by: bangalores
was feeling so bored and thinking of putting a post on GF that it's becoming dull...
when i switched on the comp to do that here u were!!
thank for the wonderful update!! wow Maan is really good, but then i had no problems with this Maan, any time😊

Thanks dear..happy to note that I managed to drive away your boredom😊

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#824

awesome!

thankgod sunil helped maan to get out of the trap!...

glad to see that geet is believing to what maan is saying!...

continue soon!

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Tanya

@tanya_vi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#825

@sindu555 : I cant keep myself from suspecting Sunil too ...

Dev can easily be manipulated given his impulsive and angry nature coupled with the sensitivity of his brother's arrest...

Arrey, when did my sweet Sana become like 'Jugnu maama' ?? Sunil pe bhi shaque?? Kya baat hai!! lage raho...😉.

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Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#826

Originally posted by: --Shika--
me first! me first!! yayayayayay!!
did i tell you i love this Geet?
she's innocent, cute and adorable and i missed her in previous parts as it was Maan's monologue but am glad she's here!!
They say innocence is a bliss..and it is true! We can be another RATAN TATA if we want but we can't be an INNOCENT KID. i'm telling you this coz u said u like Geet of my SS-Finishing School n u called your Geet dumb remember?
she'd not Dumb! She's naive and i love her ...😳
And then coming to the story, First Geet fainting and Maan scooping her up and caressing her was dreamy! You may feel am sick to call it dreamy in such a serious track but it is indeed dreamy! 😆
And the past was beautifully explained..always keeps me on edge..
Sunil is a master mind..love him for this..
i'm glad Budhu Maan didn't call up sri this time..
and am glad he is saved!
uff
*wiping sweat off face*
ANd the last part..the kid's plight was heart wrenching..
Maan carrying him and helping him was so adorable..
And Sri calls him emotional fool?
isn't this very emotional fool saved him going against all rules?
isn't this very emotional fool tried to rescue him, protect him, console him and be a support in each and every phase of his life?
well what should i say? the one we love the most will be the ones to hurt us! that's a bitter truth!
I liked Maan's words in the last paragraph..
While alive,all her efforts to make me believe her had failed...only

her death could convince me, I thought bitterly... .
those are very powerful words..
am glad he made a decision finally!!
Really looking forward to know what happened next.
PS:
You dedicated this to me?😃
REVA.. are you watching??😆
PPS: Me first again!!😆

shikha sweety...u said it all...u echoed my feelings and sentiments...

it seems muski's atma has got into u shikha...u blabbering...are u really 20 or 2...

tanya...u r genius when it comes to dishing out such marvelous updates...

i felt so sorry for the child...and seriously feel like kicking sri...

BTW...tanya...r u a south indian...just being curious...😆

reva