A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
wao so ahm ahm update
Dekha Mujha pehla say pata tha ye hi raz hoga
Hope mayur will meet soon
Thanks for pm
Cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
osom plz pm me when u update it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Hai ALLAH ye kya hogaya?????
ab kya hoga
wanna c my mayur


plz do something

awesome part
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
wonderful update Radhika.
OMG!!!
mayur did a very big mistake!!!
ab kya hoga??
mayank n sheha ki shadi fix?????
nooo
aisa kaise ho sakta hai yaar.
plz update soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey dear beautiful story seems so amazing mayur mad mistake bu they not in senses hope everything goes well loved ther dance n their closeness updates oon n do pme plzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice SS..
and Radhika add me in ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
hey frnds again Radhi here.. i knw sabko lagta hoga na
fir me aa gayiii .. bt sry to disturb u ... bt here
is the new part Of A Mistake Of Our Life..
hope u all like it.. plzzz guys do cmmnt...
n tell me should i continue or nt...
plzz ignore silly mistakes...

PART 3


Mayur went to their respective home...
as soon as Mayank reacdhed home he saw Sneha was very
happy... n Sneha's parents n his parents were laughing
n celebrating bt wat???? n wats dis in Sneha's hand...
Red Shaadi ka joda...????
as Sneha so Mayank she ran to him n hugged...
Mayank didnt knw wats goig there..
SN:congratulations mr.sharma humari shaadi fix ho gayi
haii????
Mayank wanted to be happy bt he didnt knw y he wasnt
happy hearing this.. he always wanted to marry her.
bt today he was socked.. y???
Sneha broke the hug...
SN:mayu tu khush nahi haii kya???
Mayank smiled fakely...
M:bahut khush hu Sneha..
SN:janti thi ki tum bahut khush hoge.. aakhir tum hi
itne utawle ho rahe the is shaadi ke liye kyu???
M:haa.. said in low voice...
SN:are chalo na yaha kyu khade ho??
n held his hand took him to hall...
MD:lo aa gaya mera beta...
Mayank fakely smiled every1 as he was lost sumwhere else
Mayank's mom notice him sumwhere else.. so she put her
hand on his shoulder n she asked him thought her eyes
wat happend bt Mayank shooked his head..
Sneha came to Mayank n whispered into his ear..
SN:Mayank next week humari shaadi haii so main chalti hu
bahut saari shopping karni haiii aur ha tumhari shopping
bhi mein kar lungi kyunki main tumhari wo partener tume
chutti nahi degi... par tum sirf ye soch ke rakhna hai
ki hum honeymoon par kaha jayenge..??? well i want to
go to london ok.. then ur wish ...
n then she went to her parents.. n Mayank was lost in
his thoughts hearing honeymoon n london... she again
reminded the night which he had spent with Nupur in
london... then others were discussinng n Mayank wasnt
paying any attension to them as he was thinking abt that
night n Nupur...
SN:kyu Mayank thik haii na??
Mayank's thought disturbed n saw Sneha was asking
sunthing...
M:ha tumne muje kuch pucha??
N:Mayu tumhara dhyan kaha haii???
M:sry wo bahut tired feel kar raha hu...
SNM:are beta tum jaao rest karo,. .. wese bhi kitna kaam
karte ho.. aaj sunday haii fir bhi...
SN:ya Mayu u should take rest...
Mayank smiled fakely n went to his room... shilpa smalling
sumthing fishy...
Sh:ye Mayank aaj aise behave kyu kar raha tha..disturb
lag raha tha...
then they discussed n Sneha n her parents left..

At Mayank's room
M(in mind):muje khush hona chahiye ki meri shaadi Sneha
ke sath fix ho gayi haii aur wo bhi next week i should
be happy.. bt y m sad.. .. finally i m going to get my
love bt m nt happy y??????aur Sneha wo kitni khush haii
is shaadi se...aur mom dad sab log kitna khush haii..
par mein kyu nahi hu.. kyu baar baar muje wo raat yaad
aa jati haii jo meine Nupur ke sath bitayi thi...aur
kahi na kahi muje ye lag raha haii ki main Sneha ke sath'
dhoka kar raha hu use shaadi karke.. kyunki wo pyar
shaadi ke baad chahti haii wo pyar main Nupur ko de'
chuka hu.. har ladki chahti haii ki uska pati use wo
pyar de shaadi ke baad.. par main wo pyar pehle hi de
chuka hu..har ladki wo hakk rakhti haii apne pati se
par me ye haq Nupur ko de chuka hu... janta hu Sneha
ki tum mujse bahut pyar karti ho.. aur jald se jald hume
ek dusre se jor na chahti ho ek karna chahti ho.. par
Sneha main pehle hi apne aap ko Nupur se jor chuka hu..
mein aur Nupur hum dodo pehle hi ek ho chuke haii...
main uski aatma tak ko chu chuka hu.. use saare hakk sara
pyar.. yaha tak ki khud ko main use de chuka hu...par koi
bat nahi ab humari shaadi ho rahi haii sab thik ho jayega
aur tume kabhi pata nahi chalega...

just them shilpa came n saw him lost in thoughts..
Sh:Mayank...
Mayank saw shilpa sat beside himm...
M:mom aap kab aayi???
Sh:tab jab tu apne khayalo me khoya hua tha...kya baat
hai Mayank jab se aaya haii tab se disturb lag raha haii?
koi problem haii to mujse share kar...
M:mom wo bas koi problem nahi haii.. wo bas mera ek dost
haii uske bareme soch raha tha...
Sh:aur tum kya soch rahe the...
M:wo mera ek dost haii na wo ek company me job karta hai
aur uske sath ek ladki bhi haii jo kaam karti haii dono
dost haii.. par ek baar unke boss ne unhe kaaam ke liye
lonawla bhej diya 2 din ke liye.. par ek raat me unhone
itni drink karli thi ki wo log apna hosh kho chuke the..
or unho ne wo kar diya jo nahi karna chahiye tha...
aur wo kisi aur se pyar kar raha haii is liye usne us
ladki se shaadi karli jise wo pyar karta haii...
Sh:kya Mayank aise kaise koi kar sakta haiii???aur tu
aaj ke baat apne us dost se bilkul nahi milega...
M:par kyu mom un dono se galti ho gayi thi...
Sh:Mayank mein manti hu ki un dono se galti ho gayi par
shaadi usne dusri ladki se karli..chee...
M:kya mom agar us ladki se shaadi nahi karta to usne
apne pyar ko dhoka diya na...
Sh:dhoka .. Mayank tu aisa keise keh sakta haii.. Mayank
us ladki ke bareme to socho jiske sath usne... manti hu'
ki nashe ki haalat mein galti ho gayi par.. kabhi socha
haii ki us ladki ki kya haalat hogi.. wo to ladka haii
us par koi daag nahi lagega par.. ladki .. uski zindgi
barbad ho jayegi.. aur jab is duniya walo ko pata chal
jayega to wo us ladki ko is duniya mein jee ne nahi
'denge.. aur wo aise ghut ghut kar jee ne se marr jana
pasand karegi.. aur us ladki ka khooni tumhara wo kamina
dost hoga...ek to galti ki aur upar se sudhara bhi nahi..
aur pata haii tumhare dost ko kuch nahi kahenge par us
ladki ko nazayas Sambandh rakhne wali kahenge...aur
aise aise shabd kahenge ki wo bichari jee nahi payegi...
aur ab tu apne dost ke bareme sochna bandh kar aur apni
shaadi ki soch...kyunki tumhare dost ne galti to ki par
kisi aur se shaadi karke bahut badi galti ki ek sath
do do zindgi ko tabah kar diya usne.. ab pata nahi us
ladki ka kya hua hoga?? so ab ye sab mat soch thik haii..
M:hmm...
n smiled fakely.. n shilpa went out...
Sh:chal jaldi niche aaja khana lagati hu...
M:mom me khana kha kar aaya hu...
Sh:accha thik haiii ab so ja bahut thak gaya haii na...
n left frm there.. n closed the door...
M(in mimnd):mom sahi keh rahi thi.. us raat meine aur
Nupur ne galti to ki par mein Nupur ko aise nahi
chhod sakta...main to apni life Sneha ke sath beeta bhi
lo par mein use itna to janta hu ki wo kisi or ke sath
nahi jee payegi...

n slept...


n Nupur was sleeping on her bed.. n thinking again
abt their mistake... n crying silently n also slept..


NEXT MORNING...
Mayur in their office...they were discussing sumthing..
they complited their work...
n Nupur saw Mayank was disturbed...
N:Mayank kya hua?
M:nthing.. kyu??
N:disturb lag rahe ho???
M:nahi wo bas aise hi.. ek baat puchu...??
N:oh to Mayank sharma kab se mujse baat karne ke liye
permision lene lage?? aaj tak to nahi lee...
bolo kya baat haii...
M:tum kya kabhi kisi se shaadi karogi...????
Nupur' face turned white...
N:Mayank office me no personal discussion ok.. jara wo
file dena.. n avoided his eyecontect...
M:Nupur baat ko taalo mat jawab do???
N:Mayuat tum jante ho ki office me muje personal baaten
karna pasand nahi haii...
M:to office se bahar chale.????
N:Mayank plzz us contrect ki file do.. wo hume jald hi'
pura karna haii..
M:pehle meri baat ka jawab do?? asked angrily..
N:nahi karungi mein she screamed...
kisi se shaadi nahi karungi..
M:kyu????
N:its my personal metter...
M:no its nt ur matter.. tell me...
N:kyunki mein kal bhi shaadi nahi karna chahti thi aur
na aaj karna chahti hu.. kyunki mein sirf or sirf apne
bhai ke sath rehna chahti hu bas ab khush...
M:nahi dats nt the reason...
N:ok then think watever u want...
she was abt to go bt Mayank held her hand tightly n
pulled her back... his grip was too tight... its hurting
her... bt more then it the truth hurt her...
M:jawab do muje...mayank asked angrily…
N:jawab chahiye tume ... tum jawab jante ho Mayank tum
sab jante ho... n nw she was broken n crying...
reason humari galti haiii A Mistake Of Our Life...
jo humne us raat ki thi... she calmed ..ha us galti ki
wajase... us raat ki wajase jo humne ek dusre ke sath
bitayi thi...us raat ki wajase jab tumne muje aur maine
tume chuaa tha.. us raat ki wajase jab hum ek huye the
Mayank... jab tumne meri aatma ko chuaa tha Mayank...
us raat ki wajase jab maine khud ko tume soup diya tha
us raat ki wajase jab humare jism ek ho gaye the humari
aatma ek ho gayi thi...tum mujme samaa gaye the aur mein
tum me..us raat ki wajase jab humne humare bich ki saari
duriyo ko meeta diya tha...us raat ki wajase jab humne
duniya ka sabse pyara rishta bandh diya tha..us raat ki
wajase jab maine tume apni zindgi soup di...apna jism
tume soup diya tha.. apni izzat ko tume de diya tha...
us raat ki wajase jab humne pyaar ki har had ko tod ke
ek dusre se pyar kiya tha... us raat ki wajase Mayank ..
n slowly sat on the floor... n Mayank too broken this
time coz nw he could feel Nupur's pain... tears were
streaming frm both's eyes... just then Nupur's cell
rang... Nupur wiped her tears n stood up to pick up
her phone... she picked up her phone.. n socked to
hearing the caller... her phone fell frm her hand..
Mayank went to her... her cell was broken...
M:Nupur kya hua kis ka phone haii??
bt Nupur was statue..
M:kya hua Nupur???
N:wo comma me chala gaya??????????????
Mayank was hell socked...
N:humne use maar diya... humne use maar diya...
Mayank held her frm shoulder
M:humne kisi ko nahi maara... ye bolna bandh karo...
wo maraa nahi haii...
n Nupur fainted in Mayank's arm...
M:Nupur Nupur... akhe kholo Nupur.. she patted her
cheek...
then she carry her in his arm.. n took her to the
hospital frm the back door of the office.. as he knew
if any1 see Nupur in dat state... so many questions
will be asked... as they reached to hospital...
he put her on strecher.. as he had already called doctor
when he was in car...nurse took in...
n closed the door.. Mayank was very worried...
after sumtimes nurse came out...
M:nurse Nupur...???
Nurse:aap ko doctor ne andar bulaya haii...
M:ji n he went in his cabin...
Dr:sit...
Mayank sat on chair...
M:doctor Nupur thik to haii na????
dr:yah she is fine.. par aisi haalat me itna stressed
unke liye accha nahi haiii... weise bhi bahut weak haii.
M:aisi haalat matlab..?? Mayank was confused...
Dr:she is pregnant frm 1 week...
Mayank was hell socked...
Dr:n congratulations.. aapko...
bt Mayank was hell socked.. he didnt knw wat to say...
he had mixsed feeling as he was going to be a father...
n he will have a child his child.. on other hand he
was sad too dat he n Nupur hasnt married... n Nupur
was pregnanat of his child... as he again remained
they spended night.. coz of it she was pregnant...
Dr:aap ka name??? bt no response…
hello main aap se puch raha hu...???
Mayank recoved frm his sock...
M:ji Mayank sharma...
Dr;:aur aap ki biwi ka????
M:ji..??
Dr:aap ki wife ka name???
M:mrs.Nupur Mayank Sharma...
Dr:ok.. ab main chalta hu aapki wife ko jab hosh aa jayega
tab aap unhe ghar le ja sakte ho.. aur haa isme mene
prescription di haii wo sab medicine mangwa lena...
aur apni wife ka pura pura dhyan rakhna...
M:ji doctor thank u...
Dr:aur ha jab unhe hosh aa jaye to meri taraf se congrate
bhi keh dena... aur ye good news pehle sunana...
said smilingly...
M:ji ...
Dr:ab main chalta hu.. n doctor left cabin..
n Mayank went out .. n went in her ward...
n saw Nupur was sleeping... Mayank had tears...
he slowly went to her n sat beside her..
M(in mind):ye sab kya se kya ho gaya?? humari zindgi hi
badal gayi sirf ek galti ki wajase... sab kuch Mayubhal
ne ki koshish kar raha tha.. wo sab kuch samet ne ki
koshish kar raha tha jo bikhar gaya tha.. par us galti
ne to humari zindgi hi bikher kar rakhdi... hume us
dohraye par laake khara kar diya jaha jeena or marna dono
muskil ho jaaye... ek aisa faisla lene par majboor kar
diya jisme dono taraf haar humari hi haii...par in
sab ke baad hume jeena hoga... apne liye nahi apne
bacche ke liye... muje Nupur se shaadi karni hogi...
warna humara rishta nazayas kehlayega.. aur humare
bacche ko nazayas kehenge.. muje Nupur ko aur apne
bacche ko bachana hoga... un dono ko unka haq dena hoga..
n tears fell on Nupur's face.. n she opened her eyes..
n saw Mayank was crying...
N:Mayank she said slowly.. n Mayank saw her awake...
M:Nupur tum.. thik to ho na???
N:main thik hu...muje kya hua tha???
M:Nupur wo.. tum... n saw Mayank was crying more...
M:Mayank bolo Mayank...???
N:Nupur tum PREGNNAT ho...
Nupur was hell socked.. n again her mistake...
Nupur sat on bed...
N:Mayank mein pregnanat.. nahi aisa nahi ho sakta hai
na Mayank tum juth bol rahe ho na??? main janti hu
tume majak karne ki aadat haii par me serious hu Mayank..
Mayank plzz...
M:god damn it... mein sach bol raha hu.. u r pregnant
of my child... tum maa banne wali ho... mere bacche ki..
tumhare pet me humara baccha pal raha haii...
Mayank screamed.. as he was really stressed coz he had
so many tensions in his life...
N:aisa kaise ho sakta haii...
M:aisa hua haii Nupur... nw he was calmed...
us raat ki wajase...
N:main maa ban ne wali hu... n she had mixed feelings...
as she was going to be a mother bt she was nt married...
N:Mayank ab hum kya karenge.. humara baccha.. Mayank..
Mayank humari shaadi bhi nahi huyi or humara baccha..
Mayank duniya wale kya kahenge... our child will be
called basterd.. Mayank... ne she was mad...
Mayank held her...n made her hug.. n Nupur cried her
heart out...
M:relax Nupur bahut jald sab thik ho jayega...
N:kuch thik nahi hoga Mayank...
M:is baar sab thik ho jayega... is baar hum kismat ke
aage nahi haarenge... ye waqt bahut jald beet jayega..
aur fir khushiya hi khushiya hogi...
n hugged ger tightly...
n both were crying...


precap:
dont want to tell...wink...wink... wink...



Hope you like the part.. if you like it dont res do comment..
n silent readers hit the like button... m waiting 4 ur comments..
ur comments are precious for me.. so plzzz do comment...
atleast write 1 word...


Love'
Radhi...




Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
hey radhika

it was a really nice part... i kind of expected that nupur would be pregnant, but who is in coma??
eagerly waiting for next part...

thnx for pm

~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice awesome update .👏
i really like the part ⭐️
thanks for pm dear 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovly part.waiting 4 next part.thanks 4 d pm.😊

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