A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36

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Sujata

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Nice cs :-) awesome starting :-) m really curious of mayur past...london trip me kya hua hoga?! Updt soon :-) plz add me in ur pm list.

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hey Radhika
Awesome start dear
really very interesting
what happened b/w mayur--hmmm it was full of mystery
i loved it radhaika
veryyy nice FF- eagerly waiting for next update
plz do update next part soon
thanx 4 PM

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jiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

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nice storyline... i would love to read on

plzz add me to ur pm list

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valliyah

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nice concept...please add me to ur pm list...!!!

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Hey frnds here is the second part plzz ignore silly mistakes plzzz…..
Sry if I hurt any1 of u.. sryyy….

PART 2

mayur were in their respective cabin... n buzy with
their work as they got a new contract... mayank was busy
in his file... just then peon came... n knocked the door
M:come in...
peon entered..
P:sir wo nupur madam ne aap ko apne cabin ne bulaya hai
M:thik haii ... peon left...
Mayank went to her cabin n saw her busy in file...
M:nupur... nupur saw mayank...
N:tum yaha?? kuch kaam tha kya???
M:nupur kaam muje nahi tume tha is liye tumne muje
bulaya haii peon se keh kar...
N:maine to peon ko kuch nahi kaha.. or agar muje tumhara
kaam hota to main tume phone karti...
M:to fir peon me muje kyu bola ki tumne muje apne cabin
main bulaya haiii????
A guy entered n said...
Guy:kyunki use maine bola tha ki tumko dii ke cabin main
bulaye...
both turned n saw benji n both were happy seeing him..
B:so dii main to aap se naraz hu ek to subah subah bina'
mujse mile aap office aa gayi aur fir muje mrng bhi wish
nahi kiya...
N:awww my baby come... benji went her n hugged her..
mayank was smiling ...
B:gud morning...
N:gud morning n kissed him on cheek..
B:aur aap ne nasta bhi nahi kiya...
N:tume kaise pata???
B:muje sab pata haii di...
N:benji wo aaj me late uthi thi is liye.. aur humari
meeting bhi thi... sry said cutely..
B:its ok dii kyunki main khud ghar se le kar aaya hu..
just then nupur's cell rang..
Nupur picked it up n busy with cal...
B:aur mayank kaise ho??
M:fine n u??
B:m ok dude.. n came near him n whisper in his ear...
B:tere wali kya kar rahi haii??
M:benji tuje pata haii na teri dii ko personal baatein
office mein karna pasand nahi haii... hum lunch break
me milenge..
B:ha ha janta hu janta hu ki dii ko tere wali ke bareme
kuch bhi pata nahi haii... as u both are so professional
n just frnds... said in drametical way...
nupur cut the call..
n saw mayank n benji were talking...
N:benji tume college nahi jaana...??
B:nahi diii aaj chutti haiii...
N:kis baat ki chutti?????
B:diii aaj sunday haii aur wo college haii aap ka office
nahi jo sunday ko bhi chalu hota haiii...
N:shut up benji...
B:are diii shut up nahi chalo nasta karte haii..
N:chal beith..
B:chalo na mayank..
S:nahi wo muje kaam haiii...
B:kaam ko maro goli ..aur yaha beitho.. sunday ke din bhi
kaam hota haii kya???
mayank smiled n both sat on sofa.. n benji opened tiffin..
nupur opened a file n busy in it..
B:di chalo na??
N:aa rahi hu...
b:pehle aao di muje bahut bhukh lagi haii...
N:benji tune nasta nahi kiya???
B:kaise karta aap office jo chali aayi haii...
n made sad face... nupur went to them n sat beside him.
N:sry...
B:its ok weise bhi aap janti ho ki main aap se kabhi
naraj nahi hota...
they started to eat paraths...
B:waise diii mayank aap logo ne london me kya kya kiya????
both were socked... n looking at each other..
benji notice them..
B:are aap dono to itne sock ho jaise meine aap dono ko
kisi ka khoon karte dekh liya ho ... n laughed..
nw nupur scared...
N:khoon ?? humne kisi ka khoon nahi kiya haii...
she was totally sockked... n sum flashbacks.. infront of
her eyes... n mayank was even socked seeing nupur's
reaction...nupur was shivering n sweating...
B:are dii main to majak kar raha tha.. n laughed..
M:nupur benji majak kar raha tha.. ye lo paani pee lo..
n gave her water.. n she drank...
B:dii aap ki tabiyat to thik haii na itna paseena.???
N:main thik hu benji..
B:muje nahi lagta dii.. jab se london se aayi ho raat
ko late tak jagti ho..na thik se kuch khaati ho or
ukhdi ukhdi rehti ho...
M:wo kya haii na benji hume london mein best new talent
ka ward milne ke baad na hume itne contract milne lage
haii ki hum itna saara burden manage nahi kar paa rahe
haii.. aur tum to jante ho ki jitna bhi important kaam
hota haii wo hum karte haii kabhi kisi ke bharose par
nahi chodte...
B:dii aap itna kaam mat karo.. aap jo kuch bhi muje dena
chahti haii wo muje aap de chuki haii diii ab muje
kuch nahi chahiye...
N:janti hu benji wo bas main...
n benji got text..
B:sry dii bbye mere basket ball ki practise ka time ho
chuka haii.. n apna dhyan rakhana bbye.. n bbye mayank..
M:bbye n nupur nodded..
benji left n mayank moved to nupur...
n put his hand on her shoulder...
M:nupur apne aap ko sambhalo... agar benji ke mayankne
kuch bol deti to???
Nupur looked at mayank...

N:mayank muje bahut dar lag raha haiii n started to cry..
Mayank put her head on his chest..n nupur put her arms
around him...
M:kuch nahi hoga nupur ... wo bas humne ek galti ki thi.
jiski wajse ye sab hua tha...
N:par galti meri thi...
M:nahi nupur galti hum dono ki.. jitni tumhari galti thi
utni hi meri thi... relax kuch nahi hoga...

nupur broke the hug... as she realised she was hugging
mayank... n again had sum flashbacks.. n got up frm sofa.
n move away frm mayank...n mayank also felt bed ...
she went to window... mayank went near her n stood beside
her...
N:mayank kash ki humne wo galti na ki hoti...
M:wo galti humne jaan buj kar nahi ki thi... aur tum ye
janti ho.. wo bas humse galti ho gayi...
N:galti ho gayi she turned to mayank... mayank us galti
ke baad humari zindgi badal gayi...

Flashback...

MAYUR were in london..
they were in car...
M:nupur m really very happy... ye humare life ki sabse
badi achievement haiii... hume best talent ka award nw
we are on top nupur...
N:ha mayank main bhi aaj bahut khush hu aaj meri life
ka bhi sabse bada din haii.. 2 saalo me humne ye kar
dikhaya...
M:ha nupur par isme sabse bada tumhara hath haiii..
tum ho hi itni strict... na kabhi koi baat karti ho na
muje karne deti ho.. aur in 2yrs me humne jab bhi kabhi
baat ki .. bussiness se related baat ki..
only professional relationship.. said in hard
voice.. n both laughed...
aur jab bhi main office late aata tha muje daant padti
thi...
N:mayank har roj tume daant padti haii... kyunki roj tum
late office aate ho...
M:or jab hum kisi trip pe hote haii tab bhi tum kaam
karti ho dekho abhi bhi kar rahi ho.. nupur laptop
close karo na...
N:mayank hum bussiness tour pe haiii.. remember..
M(in mind):bhul gaya tha ki hum yaha bussiness tour par
haii .. honeymoon mana ne nahi aaye.. khadus kahi ki..
n made sad face.. weise.. honeymoon to mein apni sneha
ke sath manane aaunga yahi london mein... is khadus ke
sath ghumne me kya maza aayega.. itne acche city mein..
khud to kaam karti rehti haii muje bhi sath sath laga
deti haii...
N:mayank tumne kuch kaha???
M:nahi to tumne kuch suna kya???
N:nahi muje laga tumne kuch kaha...
M:nahi nahi nupur ji maine kuch nahi kaha..
N:accha chhodo mayank ye report dekho.. isme jo changes
haii wo maine kar diye haii.. baki jo kuch karna haii
tum dekhlo...
M:ha nupur laao hum to yaha bhi kaam karne hi aaye haii
haii na??? said in fae anger tone...
N:mayank ab kaam karo mein dusri file dekhti hu...
Mayank took laptop frm her...
M:oh god muje aisi bussiness partener kyu di...???
nupur listened wat he said...
N:mayank award milne ke baad yeh bolna ki thnk god muje
aisi bussiness partener di...
mayank smiled with nupur's reply...
M:wo to haii nupur muje iske liye god ko thnk u
bolna chahiye..agar tum meri bussiness partener nahi
hoti to sayad mein aaj yaha nahi hota thnk u nupur...
N:mayank aaj jis jagah par hum haii wo hum humare hard
work ki wajase haii... humare efford ki wajase haii..
humne hamesha ek dusre ko support kiya haii uski wajase
haii..
M:ryt nupur.. warna in 2 yrs me humne jo success hasil
ki haii use log jalte haii aur kai baar hum dono ki tod
ne ki koshish bhi ki thi..
N:par hum nahi toote...
M:aur na kabhi tootenge.. ye company M &N company hi
rahegi...
N:isme se na to kabhi M jayega..
M:aur na kabhi N... both smiled...
they reached to hotel... they both ot keys of their room
n went their respectives rooms... they at evening both
were ready n went to attend function... the biggest
achievement of their life.. they got best new talent evr
award... every1 congratulated them.. as hugging them
n shaking thier hand with them..
mayank was missing sneha.. as want her with him on his
best day of his life...bt its bussiness...
they again went to their room n there was party..
its indian theme... nupur wore black saaree n mayank
in his jeans.. both came out..
M:wow nupur saaree... acchi lag rahi ho??
N:thnks bt india theme haii aur tum jeans...
M:main to yaha jeans hi laya tha..
N:bt m always keep everything with me...
M:i knw miss perfect jo ho.. n laughed..
N:ok lets go we are getting late..
M:yah n both went to party..
they didnt want to dance so they again started to meet
every1 so evry1 meeting them n congratulating them...

Its dinner time...
M:nupur m really very hungry...whispered in nupur's ear
N:m also .. bt mayank Mr.gupta tumse kuch baat kar rahe
haii ... she whispered back...
M:are mr.gupta aap ko bhukh nahi lagi??? hume to bahut
lagi haiii kyu nupur???
Nupur was glaring at him..
MrG:koi baat nahi aap baitho yaha main waiter ko bhejta
hu.. he called waitier.. n dinner was serverd...
both sat on table..
N:mayank ye sab to non veg haii...
M:kya???
N:dekho... mayank saw food...
M:par main to veg hu..
N:main bhi...
M:to ab??? muje to bahut bhukh lagi haii..
N:tum chicken khaaoge..???
M:yup...
N:kabhi khaya haii...??
M:there is always first time... n started to eat...
well its yummy.. want to taste it???
N:nahi ... par kya sach me itna accha haii...??
M:aisa lag raha haii ye nahi taste kiya to kya taste
kiya.. .first n last time...
N:ok .. n she also started to eat...
N:u r ryt.. bt its last time ha...
M:ok..
then they finished their dinner...
they were offering wine...
N:no i dont want..
M:are nupur le lo.. n took another glass...
N:mayank main pee ti nahi hu...
M:to main bhi kaha peeta hu... first time...
N:kya baat haii aaj sab kuch pehli baar wo har chije kar
rahe ho jo aaj tak nahi ki???
M:aaj din hi kuch aisa haii.. aaj maine wo achive kiya
haii jise achive karne me logo ko saalo lag jate haii..
so ek shaam us success ke name... n drank wine...
tum bhi pee o na.
n nupur too drank it...
N:eee kadwa haii...
M:nupur ye juce nahi haii.. n laughed...
N:janti hu par life main aaj pehli baar maza aaya..
M:chalo to aur maza karte haii n for the first time
he held her hand n took her to the baar...
n both were drinking like hell... nw both were totally
drunk...
N:one more please... in drunk state...
she again drank...
M:i also want one more..
guy:sir bahar baris shuru ho gayi haiii.. to baar bandh
ho gaya haiii sab log chale gaye haiii...
N:wow baaris... she ran out side... as she has lost her
sense as she was fully drunk... mayank also came out
n saw her dancing in rain.. her saaree was stuck with
her sexy body..
M:wow looking so hot n sexy... n staring at her n went
to her n pulled her by her waist to him.. both were so
close.. really very close.. n also lost their sense...
both stareted to dance... for the first time nupur was
njoying her life for herself.. otherwise she always busy
in her bussiness... she had never live her life for her
self..n nw today she got wat she wanted n njoying her
life.. nupur stopped dance
[below part in drunk state]
M:dance kyu stop liya?? kitna maza aa raha tha... in drunk state
N:m tired i want to go to room... n made innocent face..
M:chalo andar..
both were walking supporting each other...
they couldnt walk properly...
n reached to mayank's room...
M:mera room aa gaya... n just then light went off..
nupur clutched mayank's arm...
N:muje dar lag raha haiii..
M:are nupur tum mere room mein beitho me tumhare room
me dekhke aata hu ki waha light haii ki nahi???
mayank opened the door... both went in...
M:main dekhke aata hu...
nupur held his hand...
N:nahi yahi raho muje dar lag raha haii...
M:tum daro mat tumhare sath mayank sher haii...
N:tum mayank sher nahi mayank shergill ho...
M:ha nupur u r ryt... as usual... n its heavy raining..

like storm... nupur went to windon n want to shut it..
bt its hard to shut it coz of heavy wind n rain..
mayank went to her n put his arm on her hand n shut the
window... nupur turned n both were so close to each
other..both left the window n again window opened...
but mayur were lost in each other's eyes for the first
time they saw each other so closly... mayank was staring
at her wet face.. wet hair was on her face...mayank
forwarded his hand to her face.. n put her hair behind
her ear... as soon as mayank touched her cheeks..nupur
shivered... n heard voice of thunderstorm ... nupur
scared n hugged mayank... everything was first time..
they were so close fisrt time they touch each other in
that sense for the first time.. bt the reality is they
were drunk. nt in therir sense...nupur's arm around his
back ... n mayank's arm around her wet bare back.. as her
blouse was deep round... mayank started to carresed her
wet bare back...n nupur was feeling his touch..n she too
started to carresed his back... closing their eyes...
n then mayank droped a kiss on her neck... n both were
increasing their grip on each other..first time.. his
lips touch her body.. n then started to kiss her on
her whole neck,, n every kiss was passionate...both
slowly broke the hug... still in each others arm...
staring at eachother.. mayank forwarded his hand n placed
it on her cheek... both were attracting.. like magnet...
n mayank saw her trembling lips... he carresed it with his
thumb.. n it was more trembling ... still rain drops were
on her lips..her wet lips was thirsty... both dont knw
when they came too close..n both's lips were trembling
. lips were want to meet each other.. n at last their
lips met... as they were waiting for this frm so many
births..n nupur hand moved to his hair ..n their lips
were moving with each other so softly.. in rythem...
n then it soon turned into passionate one... for the
first time both kissed sum1.. n slowly they went to bed.
n both slowly sat on bed still kissing...n landed on bed..
bt mayank was on top of nupur.. then they broke the kiss
they were breathing heavily.. mayank droped kiss on her
forhead.. she was feeling his touch.. n then kissed her
eyes cheeks nose. ..n again opn her lips... n then
started to kiss on her neck.. n she remove her saari n
n started to kiss her on he chest.. n nupur was helding
him frm his back.. n then mayank hand moved at her back..
n opened the dori of her blouse.. n opened it..n then
removed his shirt n nw nupur was on him n kissing his
neck.. n chest... n finally she kissed him on his lips..
n still kissing again mayank on top of her...n both
removed clothes.. n mayank coverd them with white bedsheet...
n clutch his hand on nupur' hand.. n lost in their love..

(nw imagine wat ever u want as m blushing nw aap log bhi
kuch accha imagine karna jyada besharm mat ban jana
humare drunk mayur ki tarah lolzzz)

wo raat hum sab kuch bhul gaye the aur...us raat hum ek
dusre ke itne karib aa gaye the ki humne saari limits
cross kar di... humne wo kar diya jo hume kabhi nahi
karna chahiye tha.. humara relation sirf dosti ka tha..
just frnds ka.. hum 2 yrs se sath kaam kar rahe haii..
par na main kabhi tumhare karib aayi na tum mere.. humne
kabhi ek dusre ke liye kuch feel nahi kiya.. par us raat
humne khud ko ek dusre se jor diya... ek aisa rishta
bana liya jiska koi name nai... kya name denge mayank
hum us rishte ko jo london ki hotel me us raat humne
banaya tha... na hum ek dusre se pyar karte haii na aisa
kuch feel karte haii.. par us raat nashe ki haalat mein
maine apna jism tume soup diya mayank... nw m belongs to
you mayank with out any realtion... we did mistake mayank
A MISTAKE OU OUR LIFE...
she was crying badly... n hugged mayank n mayank was
also crying coz he was also responsible for this...

precap:
mayank n sneha's shaadi fixed...

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Love'
Radhi...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago