FF-Ishq Hai Yeh-Maaneet#1 - Page 19

Created

Last reply

Replies

750

Views

302.1k

Users

100

Likes

4.7k

Frequent Posters

teju2292 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago

Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -14

Hi guys I m back with another update….

Sorry for making u all wait…I m bit busy helping my bro in exams….hope u understand…thanks for liking and commenting my ff and plz keep commenting…frns if u want me to PM u plz send me buddy request….

Maan leaves to his cabin but keeps on looking at her for every few minutes while geet on other side completing her design and giving as much as gaaliya she knows to maan continuously while he is enjoying them silently. Even he is unable to listen what she is saying maan likes to see a change in her from before.

The time flew like air but none of them realized. Geet engrosse in work and maan lost in her.

Geet(says exitedly while keeping her pen down on the table and kicking the air behind her with her elbow):YES…..done.

Geet: maan sir I am coming….what do u think of GEET HANDA ha… cant complete it…now u see…

Geet goes to maan's cabin still she dint realize the time. She opens the cabin door and sees maan sleeping on his chair resting his head back on the chair.

Geet stops at the door and keeps on staring sleeping maan.

Geet(whispers): maan sir is looking too cute while sleeping like too innocent….oye geet chup what are u thinking innocent and maan sir no way…while sleeping every one will be innocent…he is never innocent he is dust danav karus akkdu…what not ha…(courtesy : GHSP)

Geet: he is making me work for hours and hours without even a break ….i dint even have lunch today but he…he never care…see how he is sleeping peacefully as if he has nothing else to do than making me busy…he made me so busy this whole week …both secretary work along with this arctic work….i dunno y he is hates me this much…if I work like this for one more week no doubt I should be admitted in the hospital…..geet now its your time you must take revenge…hmm….what to do what to do…ummm

Geet thinks for some time and an idea strikes in her mind when she see the empty water glass on maan's table. She immediately goes to the pantry and comes backs with a full mug of water.

She slowly without making any noise goes beside maan's chair and opens the cap of the mug and pours the whole water above maan's head.

With a sudden fall of water on his head and face maan comes out of his sleep and stands from his chair confused surprised and shocked at the same time.he doesn't understand what happened until he sees geet standing before him with a water mug in his hand.

Geet is trying to control her laugh but unable to control by seeing water dripping down maan's face and she starts to laugh out loudly. By seeing geet laughing maan again goes into trance and is lost in her laugh. Maan is staring at geet and geet is laughing her heart out without even realizing that he is watching her.

Maan comes out of the trance after some time and realizes that geet dropped water on him and shouts on her.

Maan: GEEETTT

Geet stops laughing and looks at maan scared.

Maan:geet…what did u do this?

Geet(innocently): what did I do sir!!!

Geet takes a step towards maan.

Maan: geet don't try to be innocent y did u drop the water on me?

Geet(still innocently): wo sir wo actually….it happened mistakly sir.

Maan: mistake!!!...u droped water on me and saying it as a mistake

Geet: yes sir.

Maan: don't act geet….i know u did it wontedly

Geet: no sir

Maan: geet…why did u do this.

Geet: really sir I dint do it wontedly…..when I came to your cabin I saw u sleeping…so….

Maan: so..?????

Geet: so to wake u up..

Maan: so to wake me up u pour water on me?????GEEETTT

Geet: arey sir why don't u listen to me totally???

Maan: GEEETT

Geet: sir I know my name don't repeat it I don't have short term memory loss.

Geet takes another step towards him and they both dint realize that they r moving close

Maan:what!!!!

Geet: sir I thought to wake u to show my designs so and give u some water I thought u meed them but ur glass is empty so I went to pantry and brought the mug so that I can fill the water in the glass and give it to u…when I came beside ur chair unfortunately my hand shook and all the water dropped on u.

Maan: what a made up story geet.

Geet(fake anger): what!!! Made up story!!!

Geet takes another step towards maan.this time they came so close that their breath are touching one another face yet they dint realize.

Maan: haan…made up…I know its not a mistake.

Geet: how can u say that!!

Maan: glass is not in ur hand.

Geet tries to say something and moves towards maan but this time she trips and falls on maan and maan even lost his balance fall down along with geet.

Maan and geet fell flat on the floosr. Maan's back is touching the floor while geet is resting her body on maan. They both look into each other eyes and are lost in them. Here comes the eye lock of our dear maaneet.

Precap:

New arctic…

Sorry dear I thought to write maaneet fight so new arctic will appear in next part….

Plz press the like button and plz comment…

Ur teja

preethia thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
loved the updatet glad that maan is trying to keep her busy and try to get the old geet back...
loved their cute fight...
uff stopped again in one of their eye locks...
pl cont soon
sb1412 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
hi...love ur ff...sendin u buddy request...plz pm me ...😊😊
lalitha.. thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 90 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 14 years ago
nice update...send me pm 4m next update onwards.i already send u buddy req...thanks...cont soon...
tonyahk thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
hi teja,
very nice and cute update dear.
you know what i did just now...
in my posts, this thread was on top. so i opened it thinking that this is ' Pyaay ya Shaadi FF. i didn't realise that i was reading Ishq Hai Yeh until i finished the first paragraph.
i was hell confused...i was like...what maan leaves for his cabin...ye car mein cabin kahan se aaya?
geet completing the design...design? which design? is she designing the car? but there was nothing of that sort in her Plan 2.
what the hell is happening? why this Teja is confusing my lil brain with such disordered update? finally my lil brain started to work and i decided to check the thread name...and...thud i fainted. OMG!!! for all these time i was reading Ishq hai Yeh thinking that it is Pyaar ya shaadi.
Teja dear, why are you doing this to me? it's all your mistake. since you stopped updating Ishq hai Yeh long time ago, i almost lost my hope that you will update it anytime soon. so when you updated it also, my brain refused to believe it as Ishq hai Yeh update. i was that much hopeless. now brain is malfunctioning. don't dare to do this to me again. just kidding yaar... i know you are busy. so please pardon me for my harsh bak bak
regarding the update...
very nice buddy.
geet is becoming evil in this FF also. she is pouring water on poor maan's head while he in sleep. bechara...if i were in his place i would have killed her for disturbing my sleep. but wo tho maan hena? he will never get angry on his geet. wo geet ke liye kuch bhi bardast karege.
good going dear...please update whenever possible.
all the best for your bro's exams.
143 buddy
Tonya
maaneetsangel thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

continue soon ...
Shalve thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
hey interesting FF... do add me to yr pm list...
ninavi thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago

Part 11 to 14
Thank You

For all beutiful updates🤗



teju2292 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago

Hi guys here is another update…hope u all like it…

Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -15

Maan and geet fell flat on the floosr. Maan's back is touching the floor while geet is resting her body on maan. They both look into each other eyes and are lost in them. Here comes the eye lock of our dear maaneet.

Both stays in that positions for few minutes as if wanting to stop the world at this moment. They finally broke apart realizing their positions and feeling awkward.

Geet stood up followed by maan and they both fell silent for few minutes forgeot about their fight before. Both wondered how to break the silence when finally maan did it.

Maan:hmm…did u complete the design.

Geet:huh…oh yes..yes sir.

Geet forwarded the design and the file to maan. Maan took it from her hand and started reading the file all this while both avoided to look into their eyes.

While maan is involved in looking at the design geet turns towards the wall clock and it is when she realizes the time.

Geet:OMG!!!!!...

Maan looks up from the file worriedly towards geet.

Maan: what?!! What happen!!!!

Geet:wo…time.

Maan:kya?

Geet: its really late…1.30 hogaya.

Maan: so.

Geet: so?????

Maan: haan…so!!!

Geet: so what…what do u think…..how can a girl go out at this time of night?...wo bhi ek akeli ladki…..ghar kaise chalegi?????

Maan: kya…..!!...geet I will drop u.

Geet: aap ke saath to kabhi nahi?

Maan: kya matlab.

Geet: matlab sirf seeda hain sir….aap to dust danav hain na…wo..oops

Geet realizes what she said and bites her tonge and tries to cover it.

Maan: kya kaha tumne.

Geet: kuch nahi…kuch bhi to nahi sir…aap design dekho na.

Maan: geet….dont try it…I heard it…u said dust danav to me.

Geet: then y r u asking again sir?

Maan: kya?!... u r giving galiya to ur boss geet…

Geet: nai to.

Maan: nahi kya..i heard it.

Geet: sir y r u wasting the time its already 1.30 will u finish checking the design I must go home.

Maan(attitude): I know what to do…I don't want u to say me.

Geet: oh then y don't u do it.

Maan checks the file and finally the work is complete. Its 2.00 a.m when they both step out of the office and go to parking lot.

Maan: geet come I will drop u home.

Geet: oh no thanks sir I can go by myself.

Maan: don't behave like a kid geet. Come and sit. Its not safe for u to go alone at this time.

Geet: oh really…u must think about it when u told me to complete the work.

Maan: work is important. And its ur fault u dint complete early.

Geet: oh so its my fault that u gave me extra work.

Maan: geet will u stop fighting with me.

Geet: am I fighting with u?

Maan: ofcourde yes.

Geet: u started it not me.

Maan: I m geeting late what ever I m giving 5 mins come and sit in my car or else I m going to go leaving u here.

Geet(whispers):kharu…dust danav…sadu…

Geet while scholding him under her breeth goes to her scooty strts it and leaves.

Maan stands their looking at geet unable to decide her act.

Maan: yeh ladki sach much pagal hain…she cant understand any thing.

Maan droves after geet and follows her at a safe distance that she cant see him following her. After geet goes to her home parks her scooty and enters her home maan takes a sigh and leaves to KM.

Maan goes to his room and falls flat on the bed while thinking about their close moment a few minutes before, their eye lock, their cute fights…

Maan: geet atlast my trails and plans are working…u r coming back geet but still I find u dull and lost some times trying hard to laugh and avoiding the topic love. I saw u shouting on pinky for bringing flowers to ur cabin. Why geet? What happen that made u hate flowers??? I will know..i will know ur past. I will bring u back to normal…my geet.

Geet is trying to sleep but looked disturbed still thinking of her fight and their eyelock moment.

Geet: why am I behaving like this. Yes he is making me do over time…but its just work..Its my decision to work than y am I angry on him?? y am I behaving like a kid? Y did I fight with him? what happened to me? Y am I behaving like this when he is around. His eyes…still I feel something..this is not the first time….some thing is there in his eyes….what?? y I feel like his eyes are tring to tell some thing to me……geet yeh sab chode…y r u thinking about him….now stop this and sleep….kal office jana hain…sharp 9.00a.m kadus…workaholic….sadu…dust danav..

Next morning: 9.00 a.m

Maan walks in to his cabin in his same usual MSK(with attitude) way. Maan see into geets cabin through the glass but finds empty cabin.

Maan(st): where is this geet…didn't she come to office or did she go to any meeting…but she only attends meeting with me na..

Maan calls adi to his cabin to know about geet.

Adi: excuse me sir.

Maan: yes adi.

Adi: sir u called me!

Maan: haan adi give this file to geet and say her to complete it and return to me in an hour.

Adi: sir but..but..

Maan: What adi?

Adi: but sir she dint come still.

Maan: why?

Adi: I don't know sir.

Maan: did she call?...i mean did she take day off?

Adi: no sir she dint call or said anything about day off .

Maan: ok u go adi. Tell her to meet me when she come.

Adi: yes sir.

Adi leaves maan's cabin and maan lost in geet's thoughts. Maan checks geet cabin for every 5 mins but geet is still not there.

Maan(st): its 1 hr now…y dint she come…where is she? Is she safe?

maan came out of his thoughts when there was a knock on his cabin's door.

Maan:yes come in

A lady with short red dress, open hair and heavy make up dark lip stick , high heels and with modern touch came into his room and wakled towards his table extending her hand towards him for a shake hand.

Girl: hi sir.

Maan shake his hand with her.

Maan: hmm…u!!...rasika?

Precape:

Geet meets rasika.😕

So guys this is it for today…plzzz press the like button and plzzz comment.

Thanks for the ppl who pressed like button and commented..keep commenting…..

Ur teja.

ninavi thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago
👏😊👏

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: WildestDreams

4 months ago

Love-O-Rama’s Frame It With Ishq RESULTS

The wait is over! After an incredible display of creativity and talent with over 40 entries , it’s time to reveal the results of our contest...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: sarveshjoshi42

8 years ago

Rivanya,Ishveer,Swasan and Shivika ff - Ishq wala love

Here are Characters of the Story Ritik : elder brother of Shivaay , Ranveer , Sanskar and love interest of Shivanya Shivanya : elder sister of

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: FFEditors

5 months ago

Love-O-Rama #3: Frame it with Ishq: Closed

Are you ready to turn love into art? Take part in our Valentine's Day graphic challenge Frame it with Ishq. Theme : Love in all its forms!...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".