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Posted: 14 years ago
hi Teja,
i'm eagerly waiting for Maaneet Marathon Championship to start...
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hi Teja,
Today i come across to your FF &read all 10 parts
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Posted: 14 years ago

Ishq Hai Yeh

Part -11

Hi frns,

Sorry for the late update yaar'actually I m a bit busy becoz of the relatives coming to my house, shopping with them then the continuous marriages and functions'no time even to eat aome times'.uff'now I got some time for me again 2mmorrow I have to attened to another function..i don't feel like I m having holidays yaar'hmm its better when I have college I will be free the whole evening..but now'.omg'

Anyways thanks for u comments guys'plz keep commenting and press like button'thanks for waiting patiently for me'.

may be this week I wont be able to post more than two updates'.plz understand me'

hope u like it'plzzz don't forget to press like button.plzzz

Its nearly more than a week now from the day of her presentation. She is so sincere in her work which attracted maan more now. He kept on observing her every task, every move, every smile, every talk and every look but he felt like something is missing. Actually everything her look her talk her smile nothing is same as before. She made adi, pari. Romeo, pinky, sanju as her friends literally jined in adi gang, but he observed that she never disscused any of her personal things with them except work, no outings together, she smiles to their jokes but it never reached her eyes, he felt like that smile is not from her heart.

She is running from him. She never spoke a single word with him other than work. She selected her words mostly single lines. She never argued with him like the way she used to argue with her friend if she not likes their ideas. May be he thought he is not her friend. She just obeyed him,

Geet entered into maan's cabin.

Maan:haan geet..i m going to a meeting now,I thinki will be late. As sanjana is in a meeting now after she comes give her thes files and ask her to check them, it will be better if u give a glance to them.

Geet:yes sir.

Maan:hmm.

Geet:anything else sir?

Maan:nothing.

Geet:can I leave sir?

Maan:hmm.

Geet leaves his cabin and maan stares at her leaving. And then maan leaves to the lunch meeting which was fixed in a 5 star restaurant with his clients.

Geet went to her cabin and started reading the file. After nearly an hour geet's cabin door opened with a bang and meera entered in.

Geet:tum'wat r u doing here?

Meera:wat do u think geet ha? Do u know how many days passed since I m staying in ur house?

Geet:oh meera..wat happened now?

Meera:wat happened?!!..u r asking wat happen'geet u never did luch with me till now not even dinner and not even a single breakfast.

Geet: meera'at the time I leave for my office u will be still sleeping and at the time of dinner u will be still in parties with ur so called bf dev. So wat should I do?

Meera:geet then wat about lunch?

Geet:I will do my lunch daily in here..office.

Meera: whatever'.now u r coming out with me for lunch.

Geet:no meera I have work y don't u carry on with dev?..i know u like it.

Meera:haan geet I like to have luch with dev but its not that I m going to leave my friend for that. Today only u and I are going for lunch. And I don't want to listen any excuses now come on, I know its lunch time for u now.

Geet and meera went to the same restaurant where maan is.

Maan is in the meeting with his clients when he felt the presence of geet and turned to see her entering into the restaurant along with meera. Maan know meera before as her childhood friend and now as dev's gf.

Geet sat at the table which at an angle of maan's table such that her back faces maan's back and meera sat opposite to her. Even meera can't see maan as his back is facing them.

Meera and geet ordered their food and meera started the conversation.

Meera:hey geet u know wat yesterday dev bought me a gift.

Geet:hmm

Meera: its go nice one. He even presented me a dress and asked me to wear it for tonight party.

Geet:hmm

Meera: what geet u r just saying hmm. Am I boring?

Geet: no nothing like that.

Meera: ok geet leave mine. Now tell me about urs.

Maan starts linstening to their conversation keenly after listening to meera's question. Literally he is waiting for her answer.

Maan(st):come on geet'tell

Geet: wat mine?

Meera: ur love. Did u find any one?

Maan now leaned completely back in his chair and waited for her answer.

Geet:no

Maan(dt):uff'.

Meera: what no. dint u find ur dream man till no.

Geet: meera plz leave that topic.

Meera: kyun? Y should I? tell na geet. I still remember how u used to tell us about ur dream man. The prince story. I know u believe a lot in those stories.

Maan is still listening to them. He knows that geet belives in such stories. Even he listened her dreams about her man which she told to her friend in her childhood.

Geet: no more.

Meera: no more!!!!!

Geet: I no more believe in those stories meera. They don't come true. They r just fake. I hate those stories. No prince no princess nothing is true.

Maan(st): now she is behaving as a lady not girl. That's cool. But still I like her before way'.filled with innocence.

Meera: geet what r u saying. Ok ok I got it. Now u r grown up so u don't believe in them. But u still belive in love na. I m sure some one will be there for u. like made in heven. Ur love '.who can neglect u! u r such a darling.

Maan(st): yeah right meera'she is such a darling..(a smile crept on his face which went unnoticed by every one.)

Meera: I don't trust in feelings like love.

Maan and meera are shocked to the core after listening her words.

Maan(st): what she don't trust love!!!!..is this my geet?!

Meera:..u don't trust love?!!!!...r u alright geet? I don't belive that I m listening this words from ur mouth. U always told us that u will wait for the person who loves u the most'

Geet: I told u meera'I don't like that now. Love happens only in movies and stories,'.they will never happen in real life..even if happens its never true'.its never true meera'.love will never happen'.never.

Meera: geet'what happened to u? u sounds like something is happened in ur life? Tell me gee twat is it?

Maan is shocked by meera's words.

Maan(st): is really some thing happen in these years to geet??? May be meera is right.

Geet:'.(keeps silent)

Meera: geet plz tell me. After I came here I saw many changes in you but I thought that r because u r no more a kid'u grown up'a woman..but I m wrong I think. Some thing is there that u kept away from me. Wat is that geet. What happen. After our 12th u went to mumbia for ur graduation and I know u lost ur mom and sisters when u r in ur 2nd year. But even after that I spoke to u u sounded normal. But not now. Whats that geet? Y did u stop sharing things with me? Y r u not smiling from ur heart as before?

Geet: no meera'nothing like that. Nothing happened.plz leave it. Plz'

Meera: no geet'u r avoiding me from the day of my return. U wontedly making urself busy. U r changed. M,y geet is not like this. She never wants to work in her holidays. But u started to work from the next day of ur return from Mumbai. U changed geet.

Geet stood up from the table and almost shouted at her.

Geet: I m not changed meera. U r just imagining things'.i like to wrk that's all. Now my lunch time is over and I have no time for this stupid talks'I m going I have so much work to do.

Geet left from there without even turning back for once.

Maan and meera are still in shock by her words.

Maan(st):yes now its confirmed geet is changed'meera is right. She is hiding some thing'some thing is happened'may be in her graduation time. I must find it'I will'.i promise to u geet'I will bring u back..i will bring my old geet back..i will do any thing to bring that smile back to u'.

Meera(st): I know geet u r angry on me for asking about ur past. May be u don't want to share but I will not leave'u r my friend geet I know u well'I know u r suppressing so much pain in ur heart and I promise that I m going to make u spill the pain at me'

Plz click the like button and plz comment'


part 12

Edited by teju2292 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow yaar...awsome one !!!do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
so our bubbly geet is lost & msk has resolved to bring it back...dreamy
update sooonnn
thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update
Meera is so sweet... true friend
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update luved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg kya hua geet ke saat...
that she has changed so much...
i am sure both maan and meera will get her out of this pain...
i am shocked along with maan and meera...
its getting very interesting now...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awsome update.
love it.
wht happen to geet?

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