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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

zaalim , beraham thakuraain.
aaj khush to bahut hogi tu...mujhe rula ke...
ruk let me wipe away my tears.
BTW me loving Vicky...loved his and Anu's convo...chalo thank God he knows about maan n geet's past...wanna him to know what happened in hoshiyaarpur as well.ab toh mujhe ek yahi munda samajhdaar lagta hai...😆
that arjun...babu...I wanna see him toota futa...wanna Maan to beat him black and blue...

once he comes to know evrything.
haiii now that 🤬 planning to get engaged to Anu...waise ye iske asli parents hain na...yaaa ye bhi fake hain...😆
thank god dadi called Anu..varna pata nahi kya hota...😡
yaar ye Maan toh has lost all his sanity...angry young man...doesn't even think once before speaking...he crossed all his limits...how could he say all that nasty stuff to her...bahut pachtaayega ye ab.😡
I am glad Geet didn't listen anything silently...loved her in sherni avtaar..👏
I never thought I would ever say this...but I wanna see Maan in tears know...khota kahin ka...😡doesn't even give poor girl chance to speak...😡
wondering how will he react once he learns the fact that Geet's parents are dead and what she went through...bahut papad belne padenge ab ise geet ki manane ke liye😆😆waise thakuraain aur kitne parts rona hai ab...kya agle part mein tujhse kuch umeed rakhoon...😆😆

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@simi91

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

congo congo

with many more

thread dear

that was mean

to talk to someone

yu loved dearly

i know misunderstoond

her he suppose ask

this question first

can his geet do such

thing to him

i'm glad she decide

to live the job

vicky so sweet

cant wait when

to talk to geet

find what happen

to her i hope

she open up

to him yu real know

to write sad parts

well uff i hate

arjun with his

bad intention

love it each part

mindblowing update

pls cont soonnnnnnnn

thanks pm

thank yu dear

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euphoric

@euphoric

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: namita25
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namu main tere baare main hi soch rahi thi😛

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

I want more please!!!!! This was so good! the anticipation of what's gonna happen next is amazing...I love the pace it's going at it...not too fast and not too slow and there's always something new and interesting that transpired!

Her outburst was fantastic and Maan def crossed the line. I would but he's hurting but honestly she's hurting 10 times more!

I love your style of writing a lot and love how vicky's character is turning out/shaping up! But poor Anu and stupid stupid stupid Arjun! I wish Maan finds out soon!!!

Really amazing job....BTW: Please give us pre-caps/spoilers....the wait feels too long!!! And please update soon!!!!!

This is for you (thanks to swati):

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SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Oh really touching felt bad 4 both Geet also n Maan also. Cant say he is wrong or she is wrong. Cant say he has gone through more pain or she has gone. Do waqt ke khel ke or Arjun n Naintara ki gandi shazish k shikar the. But yeah he only bared d pain of losing her where as she bared d pain of losing her parents n den also him, den to she didnt broke down completely. It really show women hav more capacity to bare d emotional pain den men.plz plz plz plz continue soon.
Thanx 4 pm

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Anu

@anuandavi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Nice update Soni. I am a little sad. Little nahi bahut sad, dukhi. Dukhi with what Maan told Geet. How could he? Does he know his love only this much. I know he is in pain thinking that she married someone else, but didn't that idiot think that he should let her talk once. Idiot, gadha, ullu, stupid, kya keh diya usne. How could he say such low words about her. Woh to toot gayi he. Totally shattered. The line " He had ultimately managed to take away the only thing she possessed as her own."

Vicky is too good. Now Vicky and Anu will have to do a too good job to sort out this mess in their Veerji and Geet's life.

Waiting for the next update Soni. Waise when do you plan to do the next update. U know I have grown greedy now.😉