Ripped Apart ~4~ (Maaneet) prt29 updtd - Page 108

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Originally posted by: jnawaz

hello sonia *jaz waves*...get buckled in because this may turn into a super long comment...i apologize ahead of time for my nonsense, my bak-bak, and my general craziness 😉...

Hieee... i m phinally here😛😆 Sowiee for the dealy... and i'm all set to re-read ur bak bak... not tht i mind... needless to say i love it... *holding out the box* some chocolate cookies?😆 thts accompanying me right now😛

let me start by saying...im a huge fan of your OS's...at first when i started getting PM's for Ripped Apart...i ignored them w/out even seeing who sent the PM...only cuz i was like...oh i dont read it so ill ignore it...and that what i did for a long time...but then one day, i saw it was you...so im was like...hmm...interesting 😆...

I can perfectly understand... at times its not the person or matter its the time u r pressed for tht u can't read evrything even if u so want to... I m humbled tht u like my OS... the sentiments r certainly mutual... me ur pankha too😳😆

then i asked my friend (cuz she reads pretty much ALL the ff's on Maneet) ...and she was like...oh ya jaz, you should read it...she writes the way you like...now...im particular in what i read...not to say that i dont appreciate all the writers who are putting their work and creativity out there...but...im a girl of detail...you've read some of my OS's and stuff so you see how detailed i get..its my pet peeve i guess...i like things with substance...you just get a feel for the story and characters more...im not a fan of stories that are just like one sentence then another...but rather something that is organized...played out...and when thought is put into the story...which i know you do...any way...when she told me...i was like ok...ill read it...so i've kept one of your PM's marked as "unread" for weeks...no actually, i think it was months......i kept saying...when i have some down time ill read it...but that never came...usually im on my laptop and thanks to youtube and hulu...i barely did anything else...but...my laptop died a few weeks ago...so no more watching videos at work...

Hmm so tht means ur lappy dying was blessing in disguise for me😉😆 *ok i m ducking here*😆...just kidding... i know the stories u write r nothing less than awesome... its the detailed crafting and scripting i absolutely love about your work. It gives u tht feel and emotions... for i know ur stories have made me cry... brought a smile... made me laugh at times...

tell me one thing... i m really curious... do u at times cry when u create some heart-wrenching episodes of ur masterpieces? coz reading ur stuff has definitely given me tht punch more than once😊

what i used to do was take my laptop to work and watch things...but with my laptop dead...i was utterly bored at work...i do admissions at a hospital so if i dont have admissions the time is mine and im free to do what i want...any way...so Sunday...i was like...hmm...i have time...let me read Sonia's story...it was 29 parts...i figured i'd finish by the end of the day...boy was i WRONG 😲...because you write so beautifully...i took in every word, every detail and all that...add to it the fact that your updates are long (i am NOT complaining at all 😉) ...i started reading it at 1130am...i had a few admissions but not many...a few emergencies i had to deal with...but when i left at 530pm...i had only read the first 19 parts...i was like 😲😲😲😲...so...i came home...did some family things and then...at night...once everyone went to bed...i used my brothers computer (which is thanfully in MY room ) to read...i had to turn of the lights or else mom would be after me...so then i read the rest of the story and didnt finish til 330am! 😕...time flew and i didnt even realize it!! ...

here's one thing common... i have this habit of reading after putting the lights off so as to not attract mumma's unwarranted anger😆 i take torch under my cover and read but my smart move fails when the next morning mumma finds both the book and the torch under the cover and i m done😆

thanks a bunch for takin out tht much of time pretty... i hope u didn't have difficult time waking up the other day... oh... btw u work on Sundays as well... i barely open my eyes on sundays until noon😆

so...now...to the story...it is ...AMAZING!! to say the very least...i loved how you've built it up...mixing the past with the present...i've always loved that style of story telling...and the "flash back" and "back to present" part...i was like..hmm..familiar...lol...im glad you made the distinction because some stories dont make that change...you kind of have to figure it out...and sometimes you get lost...or at least i do ...

though tht distinction was for myself too😆 i know its easy to get lost and then i knew the updates were going to be long so thot of making tht distinction... but i was so scared initially during the intersection... Thank God i managed to blend it well.

what i loved...LOVED about this story isnt necessarily maneet...its Anu and Geet's bond!! my friends are my life...my best friend...i'd do anything for her...and to see that same bond with Geet and Anu...wow!! 👏..i loved that no matter what i looked like...Anu believes that something terrible happened...because no way would Geet agree to marry another man...no way Geet would hurt Maan...she believes what Maan saw...but she knows theres more to the story...and in the past...the cute bond was amazing...many times i chuckled at Anu's antics...like when she over heard Geet and Maan when Geet runs into him...and says "haath chodiyeh" and he says "nahin chodunga toh?" ..before the confession and all...Anu falls off the bed 😆...

Friends r the best part of anyones life and God has been very kind to me that i have been surrounded by people whom i can genuinely call friends... and though in the beginning i wasn't very sure How Anu and Geet would turn up but the bond became beautiful... Thanks for appreciating Angee😳😆... but i wish and pray everyone shud have atleast one friend like Anu in their lives😳😆

the bond between Maan and Anu is good too...and Maan and Dadi...but Anu and Geet is my favorite relationship here...and now i like the new characters...Vicky, Adi, Pinky, Sasha (😲) and even Pammi...they are all supporting Geet and its awesome!! i loved how you built not only Maaneets relationship...but also the respective relationships with their families...Geet's parents know of Maan...Maan's family at least knows and likes Geet...of course...the cutie Rohan is adorable 😆...

Ahh Rohan... he sure was adorable... but wud u like to take Maan's opinion on the little chap😉😆... hmm i'll get him back in the story at sometime... atleast once😆

by gtting the other characters i was just trying to create the balance in the story... life is full of surprises... if there's Brij... there's Adi😊 Maan ko chod ke baake sab thoda dimag use kar rahe the😆

you stayed true to Maan's character in the show where for everyone he is MSK...but for Geet he is simply Maan...amazing!! of course...i dont have to say it...but im not liking the way Maan is treating her...ok she hurt you...i get that...you are mad...but to disrespect her like that...that is inexcusable!! 😡...he loved her once...so how can he talk to her like that now...i mean...how can he not see how broken she is...how defeated she is...and when he finally did take in her appearance...he turned a blind eye towards her...😭...he's said such horrible things...especially when he said if she was done with her husband and ready to move on (something along those lines) ...this time i nearly fell off of my chair...i wanted to just smack him...itna gussa aur itni nafrat aapne Geet se...when the truth is out...yeh Maan toh aapne muh ke bal girega! and i for one cannot wait!!!

the angry young man that he has been refused to see wht was so obvious... he's a man who has acted blind after having his vision... and such people can't really be helped... coz u can never show things to a person who has shut his/her eyes on truth!

His every word was however was instilling a fresh wound on her already wounded heart... his anger was his way of venting out his sorrow but he ended up saying things that were not at all acceptable... well he'll need to roll out a lot more papads now after he knows tht she didn't marry any other guy😈

the bond that Geet had with her parents was awesome...i loved how they cared for her as their own even though she wasnt..i think its a big desi thing...about...aapna aapna hota hai...aur praya paraya...i dont think like that...i agree with what Geet's mother said...its not about the blood that runs in your veins that determines a relationship...its the love that you give that makes it last and makes it real...👏...i loved how they fought for her against Darji and that kamina Brij!! i loved how Geet stood up for herself at all times...and then stood up and saved Maan when it came down to it...and i have to give her props for still being able to jhelofy MSK with his super mean attitude...shes ever tried to explain things to him but yeh gahda hai ke kuch sunta hi nahin 😡...baad mein itna pachtayega...itna pachtayega..ke he will hate himself for what he did to his Geet!!

hehehe... right now the realization bit is coming down on him... hating and being angry with himself will follow😆

i agree to wht u said... its sad when ppl say tht about apna and paraya. Even in this age there r people who just can't fathom to consider adoption... and their excuse his equally sickening, "pata nahi kiska khoon hai"🤢... the truth is the relationshio u build up and the right values that are being instilled in the child... and standing up and fighting for what you know is right

now to the drama bit...the bro-sis duo of Chudailtara and Arjun...he seemed so sweet when he first came in...and how he hated NT regardless that she was his brother...that was awesome...thats why when you made the revelation that Arjun is the one in love with Geet...like psycho stalker wala in love...i was shocked!! 😲...that time i think i did fall out of my chair...i was so shocked...i STOPPED reading...logged onto FB and messaged that friend (who told me to read this story)...i was like..OMG! its ARJUN!!!! she kept telling me that there was a big thing that happened and that it was a huge twist...i didnt it was this!! well done!! 👏👏👏👏 ...it took me back to the convo Arjun had with Anu about obsession and possessiveness...and he was like...i'll show you who is obsessive...i didnt he was gonna be like this with Geet... jaab Maan ko pata chalega ke yeh bhai behen ki jodi ne kya kiya...inki toh kher nahin!!! i hope he makes them suffer...

Thanks buddy... tht was the major turning point of the story... i knew it was to come out as a shocker but keepin in mind if u read the story u'll easily see the loops in it... Arjun never liked NT but in tht case he himself was never a man true to his face... tht obsession wala line was an indicator to the dark facet of his personality

He knows well NT is a weakling and doesn't know to play the game she thinks she's pro at... and so he had even rebuffed her when Maan had overheard her saying nasty things to Geet...

oopss... i hope fallin out of ur chair u didn't hurt urself😳😆 i m glad tht the shocker came out as i desired it to have come😃

and then i hope Geet makes Maan suffer...he had better apologize like no tomorrow or else...i mean...it just wont be fair if she forgives him just like that...she's been the bigger person here...from the get go...even in the present...she thinks he's engaged to Sameera...yet she doesnt wish him ill...she wants him to be happy and protected...he clearly doesnt want the same for her...he wants her to suffer...so i would love to see Geet holding out on Maan...at least for a while...i never could stand the stories (FF and on TV) when the ladka...suspects the girl...treats her like crap...then saach jaan samne aata hai...he says "mujeh maaf kardo...i love you" once and the girl is at his beck and call and in his arms again...im like...where did the self respect go? actually...come to think of it...i kind of want everyone to go at it with Maan...i want Adi, and Vicky, Pinky and even maybe Pammi to give it to him for the way he's been treating her...usse toh yeh bhi pata nahin ke Geet lost her parents right? oh its gonna be good when he finds out...

I know its irritating when they make a mole out of nothign and underplay what needs to be dealt with... i don't think its particularly humane to just forget and let go and behave as if nothing happened... wow! i think things would have been just easier if that was the case... With Geet she knows and understands his stand well... she's hurt and upset too for he moved on so easily as she thinks... and then he didn't listen to her... but he has been unleashing his anger on her to remove his own frustrations and was attempting to hurt her... self destruction!

and to begin with Pinky is giving him a hard time😉😆

oh dear...will you look at the length of this comment 😲...sorry ...i tend to get carried away...*kaan pakering*...cant wait for the next update...you're fabulous...just fabulous!! ⭐️...hope my comment didnt overwhelm you

sorry kyun? I loved every word of it😳

JAZ