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Posted: 13 years ago

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amru!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11...the above was my favorite dialogue from the entire update...ufff!!!!!!!!!!!...why did you stop just when if was going to get juicy? (at least inmy imagination😉)...omg what an update...it was dreamy...maan just admitted that geet is his best friend...and that he is jealous of having to share her!!!!...i love jealous maan😍...i love how their friendship has evolved to so much closenesss...he carried her to his car...😲...please don't torture me and update fast!!!!!!!!!!!!



Was it gettting juicy? Well I dunno.
Yeah I love jealous Maan too. i'll try Syl...i'm super busy with work and you'll just have to excuse me this month - it's annual day n I'm making the sets. Sorry!!


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Muah! Loved the update! Maaneet were awesome! Ooh, jealousy. Haha that was an awesome update!



Aww thanks so much

@saibo

thank you and welcome aboard.

@DDBiggest fan - thanks girl. Nice to read ur comment.

@shah10
merci beaucoup. appreciate it.

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille

Fari!! my boogie boogs.

🤗It's so good to see you here. Thank you hun 😳

Yes yes I know, the earlier bits that I had written weren't that gr8 and at times I feel like editing and changing them, but it's such a bother, cuz I'm gonna feel the same in a few more months down the line. LOL.I guess we're always learning, and it's a good thing because you can never know enough!
Still, I was a novice then, and still am one. I just feel this story a lot - and I probably wont write after this. Same to same, writing is definitely not my forte. I have a continued FF/SS 😆 I'm writing an SS but will only post it if I completely all the chapters so I don't disappoint readers by ending this one too.

Oooh you're a dancer - contemporary at that!! That's so fantastic. Cool do I get tips?? LOL! LMAO. Yes, I was a competitive dancer but now I've stepped down from the contests, I only do performances for either fun or money now. Tips? LOOL!

I absolutely love having you here -.it's like a party!! tee hee!! Haha, let's get this party started, WOOT WOOT!!

Thanks a load for the stuff you wrote. 😳 No problem hun!

love
Amru

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Good to see Maan already knows the ins and outs of that female... whats-her-name Lyla!!🤔 And absolutely loved Farhan's jab at her!!😆

You seem to be the only one who noticed the jab, Jaz...or rather commented on it.

And so Geet and Nida have bonded further with common animosity towards that female...we girls are pretty quick to that...seen it right through my school and hostel days an it never changes...women group together pretty quickly...draw line and maintain that distance.😈
LOL - we neva change do we - it's like a bit of tradition the world hands down to a girl, every time she steps in the world.
Loved their bonding over Isra's new found affections. I wanted to jump in and say I saw it too!! I saw it too!!😆
hehehe!!
Ah Maan is jealous!! As a friend ofcourse, he is yet to recognize the call of his subconscious. But that was a heavy duty statement from him!!
Of course she did - she's a pathological back-answerer - geez is that even a word/term!!😆
And surprise surprise!! Geet delivered quite a bottom line too!!

Man I wanted to write so much more, but the exam has left me brain -dead🥱
Nafrat hain mujhe tumhaare har exam se, jo tumhe comment karne se rok de. - see filmy, huh?!!! lol

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Posted: 13 years ago

TEASER:


''Why is it that, whenever you walk into my office and demand a 'file' from me, I can only imagine a whip in your hands??''

Meera stared, going pink in the face, as he realized the innuendo in his words.

He cleared his throat, embarrassed ...''I mean, you make me feel like an inexperienced boy''. She raised an eyebrow.

Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

love the teaser👏...thats juicy😉

Posted: 13 years ago
Lol! Maan knows how to wake up Geet and make her come with him. 😆
Lyla...she is simply too much. 🤢 But I loved this line of Farhan about her '...who the hell is Aphrodite?? As good as saying; ''Hello, I'm a narcissist''...🤣 Nice that Geet and Nida are getting together against Lyla.
Sid and Raina became the most annoying persons for Maan. Poor him! 😆 Everywhere he went it was all about Sid and Raina. Geet figuring out he was jealous and him confessing was interesting. Did not expect Maan to admit what he felt. A bit of surprise. But I wonder what his answer to Geet will be about his other friends.
All in all great update!
OMG the teaser! ☺️🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
HEY...NICE TEASER...SO WE ARE GETTING MORE OF VICKY - MEERA UPDATE IN THE NEXT ONE, EH? WELL, NO PROBS, LOVE THEM TOO...

BUT PLS PLS PLS INCLUDE MAANEET MOMENTS AS WELL... I AM SURE YOU WOULD ALSO FEEL THAT UR UPDATE IS INCOMPLETE IF YOU DONT WRITE ABT THEM 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved the concept and the way u write...do continue soon...do pm me when u update next pls...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lolz...I am pretty tuned to Lyla...to see what she is doing, how much damage she may inflict, how much damage control will it entail. If you had to redeem this character, then ideally Farhan makes a perfect match for her. His no-nonsense attitude the factor that would tame her. But then I want good things to happen to Isra...not Lyla.

Back-answerer!!🤣

@Teaser - yeh teaser dhasu tha...*Dharmendra style* Is mein action hai, drama hai, romance hai or suspense bhi hai!!😆
Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago

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