ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#691

Geet is opening with Maan slowly. Poor girl She has gone through so much in her past. Not easy for her to forget Nik. But still want her to move on.Want old, stubborn geet back. Geet Maan's best friend? Oh yes she is. So cute Maan. Loved to see jealous Maan.😉 Nice update Amu. 😊

Quote

613528

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#692

Eeek! *HUGGIES* 🤗 Finally finished all the chapters phew! I've been read continuously for hours now, this has me completely hooked.

Seasonone was really heart wrenching, my heart goes out for Geet. After recovering, and when she finally found true happiness she lost it again. I loved Nik's characterisation, he really touched me. And Geet's right his essence is still present.

As for season two, it's just as good. It hasn't lost it's essence. Loved how you moved the story forward and Geet's slow recovery. And MG's relation has really grown. From ignorance, to understand and now to a strong friendship. It was so sweet how he declared he can't share her with anyone.

I absolutely loved how you described the dance finale it was absolutely fabulous. I'm a contemporary dancer myself, so really appreciated it.

I've noticed you have really grown as a writer. There is a huge difference between the first chapter and this one. I may have noticed it because I've read it all on one go. Love this story, love your writing and love you hun 🤗 I just wish I would've found this earlier 😆

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#693

Fari!! my boogie boogs.

🤗It's so good to see you here.

Yes yes I know, the earlier bits that I had written weren't that gr8 and at times I feel like editing and changing them, but it's such a bother, cuz I'm gonna feel the same in a few more months down the line. LOL.
Still, I was a novice then, and still am one. I just feel this story a lot - and I probably wont write after this.

Oooh you're a dancer - contemporary at that!! That's so fantastic. Cool do I get tips?? LOL!

I absolutely love having you here -.it's like a party!! tee hee!!

Thanks a load for the stuff you wrote. 😳

love
Amru

Edited by mechantefille - 13 years ago

Quote

jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#694

Updated my comment on page 100...

Quote

mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#695

I wrote up my precious comment and lost it I'll be back soon!

Quote

mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#696

Hello Ji,

i am back...wrote a lot last time and all disappeared 😡

Couldnt comment during weekend yaar, forgot the login pswd to IF and cudnt logon from home laptop

Loooved it so much yaar - specially bcoz there was so much Maaneet 😳

I had expected Mayank to be back and Maan to be dead jealous - but Sid and Raina are back and he seems equally J !! Well, I will say you handled it pretty well with J in friendship first and then ahem ahem...

The wake up call was amazing - they are getting so comfy with each other that now Maan thinks she is her best friend - well those dialogiues were gems - you know - the jealousy ones - and imagine Geet blurting out without even realising what she is saying - you know its their subconscious mind speaking - oooh, so cute - love you for putting this sooo nicely. Loved maan 's exasperation over everyone flocking to Sid-Raina 😆 And, they might find out sooner and just coax Geet into opening up more with Maan😃 Oooh i am so excited abt what is going to happen 😆

Isra and farhan pairing is nice - so we have one more couple to be in love...i hope our favs draw some inspiration from them 😃

La la ... good good... this was one of the best updates ...continue soon...sry again😊

Quote

mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#697

@Millie_maneet

thanks a load babe

@vinaben

Nice to see you. Hi and thanks for the comments.

love.

Quote

mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#698

Originally posted by: CutieTeju
Geet is opening with Maan slowly. Poor girl She has gone through so much in her past. Not easy for her to forget Nik. But still want her to move on.Want old, stubborn geet back. Geet Maan's best friend? Oh yes she is. So cute Maan. Loved to see jealous Maan.😉 Nice update Amu. 😊

Hi Teju

Yes Stubborn Geet might make a comeback. Am not sure, hon.

Quote

mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#699

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Hello Ji,

i am back...wrote a lot last time and all disappeared 😡

Couldnt comment during weekend yaar, forgot the login pswd to IF and cudnt logon from home laptop
heheh
Loooved it so much yaar - specially bcoz there was so much Maaneet 😳

I had expected Mayank to be back and Maan to be dead jealous - but Sid and Raina are back and he seems equally J !! Well, I will say you handled it pretty well with J in friendship first and then ahem ahem...
Everyone loves Mayank - isn't it??? well...so do I , but I've been wondering about a seperate sketch about Mayank later in the future. what say?
The wake up call was amazing - they are getting so comfy with each other that now Maan thinks she is her best friend - well those dialogiues were gems - you know - the jealousy ones - and imagine Geet blurting out without even realising what she is saying - you know its their subconscious mind speaking - oooh, so cute - love you for putting this sooo nicely. Loved maan 's exasperation over everyone flocking to Sid-Raina 😆 And, they might find out sooner and just coax Geet into opening up more with Maan😃 Oooh i am so excited abt what is going to happen 😆
Yeah me too. thanks.
Isra and farhan pairing is nice - so we have one more couple to be in love...i hope our favs draw some inspiration from them 😃

hmmm - lets see.
La la ... good good... this was one of the best updates ...continue soon...sry again😊

Quote

mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
lovely...

MSK n J...loved it...

loving the way geet is slowly coming back to her old self...

i hope her friends also r realizing this...

n it seems she has now begin to trust maan...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Aww thanks Jyo..that was sweet!

love

Quote

1 ... 68 69 70 71 72 ... 98

ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 70

Related Topics

Explore Topics