ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 64

Originally posted by: Water.

I just read this...so commenting again...

Geet should not have any more pain in the process. PERIOD!

I hope I have made myself clear...😆

More comments later...about the update...

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Wow Vicky has arranged staff transport. So sweet of him

Maan and geet are getting close to each other… me waiting for it…

The way story is progressing is very natural.

The making out scene between Zakhir n Nida, maaneet conversation afterwards and geet explanation about her and niks relationship are just wow….

The two new characters are going to be trouble. I m sure your maaneet will handle maturely

the hole update was excellenty written.

"So you know what the characters look like - you can fill in the image for yourself - and what do you think happens next? Any guesses?"

Oh no guess dear in this ff, everything surprises

FOR THE

UPDATE AND PM

allways with beautifull & natural updates .

Amazing update.

Loved it v much.

The list for Geet's hobbies was juss great...loved it...haha facebook page...

Aaj kal kaun survive karta hai begar facebook ke...

their relationship went further than the chat messages...

she would talk more, grumble more, listen to him...sit on the carpet in his room with a tinge of sadness...but that was fading away now...cus the determination to live her life was much more stronger...😃

Geet taking him on a drive..loved it...

I too have been in the driver seat most of my life and trust me it feels wonderful to juss sit in the passenger seat sometimes n juss relax, looking at the trees, sun clouds...a great feeling...

Maan I know exactly how u feel...

Zakir n Nida...lolz...poor Maan got a shock...

Nik a prude...wow...well can understand him being traditional n all...

Geet saying the word B****👏, love u for that babes...

Cat fight...would love to see those...

Lrya getting the worse of it off course😉

Lyra throwing herself at Maan...hmm...not sure if I will like it at all...even though it mite cause Geet to realize her feelings for Maan...

I juss hate B*****...juss so that u know...

Meera and Vicky...

Meera has a painful past...she still cannot overcome the shock that Vicky got office transport after the incident...

ooo she flinched when he used the word ladies and safe...

I guess she has trust issues...she needs to trust life..yes there are good guys out there Meera...without any hidden agendas...

U better reply to my long long long comment...😳😡

last time u had not...

Originally posted by: Water.

AA gayi meri nautanki??Dekh jawab likh rahi hoon - no pudakking! 😛

Amazing update.

Loved it v much.

The list for Geet's hobbies was juss great...loved it...haha facebook page...

Aaj kal kaun survive karta hai begar facebook ke...

their relationship went further than the chat messages...

Me - i ...I ..I do - I 'm not very FB crazy!

she would talk more, grumble more, listen to him...sit on the carpet in his room with a tinge of sadness...but that was fading away now...cus the determination to live her life was much more stronger...😃

Maan is inspiring her - but then again she doesn't realize it!

Geet taking him on a drive..loved it...

I too have been in the driver seat most of my life and trust me it feels wonderful to juss sit in the passenger seat sometimes n juss relax, looking at the trees, sun clouds...a great feeling...

Maan I know exactly how u feel...

Zakir n Nida...lolz...poor Maan got a shock...

Nik a prude...wow...well can understand him being traditional n all...

Geet saying the word B****👏, love u for that babes...

Really I hate her for her foul mouth! P.S . _ I am a prude!😉

Cat fight...would love to see those...

hmmm...a lot of u guys want it!

Lrya getting the worse of it off course😉

Lyra throwing herself at Maan...hmm...not sure if I will like it at all...even though it mite cause Geet to realize her feelings for Maan...

Hint - that's all she ever does!

I juss hate B*****...juss so that u know...

Meera and Vicky...

Meera has a painful past...she still cannot overcome the shock that Vicky got office transport after the incident...

Does she??

ooo she flinched when he used the word ladies and safe...

More like remembers the incident n winces!

I guess she has trust issues...she needs to trust life..yes there are good guys out there Meera...without any hidden agendas...

U better reply to my long long long comment...😳😡

last time u had not...

Replied - chal no gimme a hug , my drama queen!🤗

Originally posted by: rahmona_pakswe

Oh my days! You wrote mulling and I read 'muli'. B2B has screwed my brain for sure. 🤣

OMG me too - at times I giggle all to myself, when the world around me is clueless... I blame Mish...she's my partner in crime.

Amru dear, it's always difficult to give a proper comment to your updates. Sometimes it takes me half an hour to come up with something really stupid. Your write so amazingly...and saying only one word like 'great' doesn't do justice to your mindblowing updates.

Awww - thanks that's why I love reading them , hon.

Really liked this part. We can see how Geet is slowly slowly trying to move forward in her life and how she is opening more up to Maan.

The store room scene? 🤣 I can literally imagine Maan's face.🤣

How wonderful of Vicky to organise staff transport and Meera is slowly warming up to him. 😳

Two new entries and I'm already annoyed by one of them. But uff Maan's reaction when they all couldn't get along with that (annoying) girl. Uff, Maan roared like a lion.

The annoying girl - hmmm...U hate her already??!!! Ahah!

Btw I always always always read your replies.

Phew!!

Originally posted by: ruslana

mindblowing update