ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 63

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ninooo!! 🤗You're here!! 😃

Originally posted by: ninand

wow.. nice contrast working here.. With Vicky and meera, the narrative takes a calmer tempo(it at least feels so).. Gentler , maybe taking from their characters itself..

Exactly - Maan and Geet are the spitfires and Viky is the more laidback one...Meera?? You'll just have to wait and watch!

With Maan And Geet, and the studio , things are more excitable.. sure, for an activity such as dancing , the place would be rampant with energy.. zeal and passion.. and so would the characters be brimming with it..
Yeah adrenaline's running high!
loved the one line '... You know Nik was a prude." she said as if consoling him🤣

goes to show brilliantly how much shes overcome and still making the effort at it.

super update .. do post the next part soon.

oh, and.. curious about the new entrants.😊


Yeah Nik was indeed quite prude!! ...more on that later???😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Geet is already agitated by the new entry. It would b hilarious to c if she hits on maan and them him teaching her some closely done dance moves :)


Arre but Lyla already knows how to dance naaa...and Maan isn't a dance teacher - he's just running the company - but you've hit the nail on the head with respect to one thing - now sit and figure out what it is! 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --Shika--

Umm I dont generally comment here cuz well umm ur updates leave me tongue tied. I dont say they r awesome super mindblowing. Frankly those adjectives seem shallow n i cant use them 4 something like this. This story believe it or not the one which really came close to my heart n i'll be waiting 4 its update. M glad Geet and Maan r getting well together..n this is happening very naturally. I love it! The reality in this ff makes it all the more adorable. Zakir-Nida scene well haha i can imagine MSK's expression since i'd similar expression on my face. Lolz. Update soon. :D



Shika - had so much fun writing it - and Dont Make Me Blush You!! thanks a load!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Shalve

wonderful update...

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

part 37 ...


awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

beautiful update...
please update soon...




Aww you guys - thank so much yaa...am glad u liked it!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Wow geet is really changing. Laughing on Zakhir & Nida scene. OMG I can imagine MSK's face.😆 Nice update. 😊



Hain naaa...I had so much fun thinking about it in my head!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette

A growing rapport!! And a beautiful one at that. Geet is inclining to her natural self steadily. And what I also like is that Maan draws her out, deals with her and simply is being with her as he naturally would. No sugar-coating of words, no softening of stance. He is not even paying a conscious thought towards it. And his sub-conscious is already accepting her around, keeping him tugged towards her.
Yeah - he's not one into showing affection or affectation! He's just trying to be there for Geet...if she needs him.

They are being themselves with each other and that would probably cement their relationship together as and when it progresses.
Very astute!!Damn!

Don't mind me if I dedicate most of my comments to Maaneet. Specially Geet. They have been there from the very beginning, from Season One to till here. And maybe everytime I take Geet's name I can keep Nik's memory vivid in my mind.
I totally get it - cuz my thoughts automatically veer towards my Geet! And Nik was the jaan - who didn't love him.?!?!

Meera has just arrived on the scene. So maybe the bond with her character is not that deep. I love her ofcourse. But then the bond is through Vicky. And yet to be solely because it Meera I am reading about. But I love Meera too, ofcourse!
I sometimes forget Meera in my haste to write about Geet - and though I love Vicky - i end up doing more justice to Maneet!! But there is more coming about V and M - hold on to the reins! Muah.


Jazzz 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lolz...I love the color combination my comments and your reply has made.😍 It has made me all dreamy. Colors have that effect on me.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzerette


Lolz...I love the color combination my comments and your reply has made.😍 It has made me all dreamy. Colors have that effect on me.😳



Thanks I like it too!! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Geet is already agitated by the new entry. It would b hilarious to c if she hits on maan and them him teaching her some closely done dance moves :)


That mite help Geet to realize her feelings for Maan...that is if she had any...😉
But in the process i do not want to give any more pain to Geet.

She has had her share of pain...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mechantefille


Arre but Lyla already knows how to dance naaa...and Maan isn't a dance teacher - he's just running the company - but you've hit the nail on the head with respect to one thing - now sit and figure out what it is! 😛


I just read this...so commenting again...

Geet should not have any more pain in the process. PERIOD!
I hope I have made myself clear...😆

More comments later...about the update...

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