ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 65

Originally posted by: harshdb

that was an

mind blowing update. So natural dialogues.

The text message between maan and geet was awesome.

Wow Vicky has arranged staff transport. So sweet of him

Maan and geet are getting close to each other' me waiting for it'

The way story is progressing is very natural.

The making out scene between Zakhir n Nida, maaneet conversation afterwards and geet explanation about her and niks relationship are just wow'.

"It was much later that he'd realized that she'd laughed. "

The two new characters are going to be trouble. I m sure your maaneet will handle maturely

the hole update was excellenty written.

"So you know what the characters look like - you can fill in the image for yourself - and what do you think happens next? Any guesses?"

Oh no guess dear in this ff, everything surprises

FOR THE

UPDATE AND PM

allways with beautifull & natural updates .

Originally posted by: rajeev fann

love ur fic...cont soon

Originally posted by: mystique_girl

Sorry, me late in "liking" and "commenting"...read it on cell but cudnt comment since yesterday was an off 😔

yeah I read on the cell too but commenting on it can be a pain.

Well, lovely update...the Vicky Meera track is coming up quite well...it was very thoughtful of Vicky to arrange the office transport - his discussion with Maan on it and Maan's approval just shows how sincere they are to their employees ...lovely character traits of the two brothers😳

jo bhi karenge - 100% achche se karenge!!

Meera's speechlessness and Vicky saying "You're welcome" was real fun

..😃

However much you have Maaneet in your update - it always seems less Loved their crazy banter on the cellphone - they will turn up good chums over time...Maan was so intent on having somebody spl in life because his life was lonely - but now he's just going with life's flow and not qning himself - his priorities have changed - because he's got a purpose through the dance school i guess...

eggjactkly!!

Maan and Geet's experience at the storerroom was too hilarious - Maan's expressions and Geet's explanations - wow !! didnt expect Maan to be so surprised and Geet to blurt out that Nik was a prude..loved it...🥳

that dame - full of surprises, naa!

I hope the new entries strike up some fire...i dont know how you manage to get such unique names ...

yeah - me working on that bit - but it'll take a while.

Loveeed it...🤗

When's the next one? Do I always bother you?😲

not at all - on the contrary I enjoy it! 🤗

Originally posted by: DDbiggestfan

Wow superb update dear. Loved every word of it.
Eagerly waiting 4 d nxt part. Thanks 4 pm.

aaahhh...i loved maan and geet's conversation in the store room👏👏...that was awesome...i love how they are getting closer and closer and how they talk to eachother...uh oh!...the new entries😲...geet does not like and can't stand one of them😲...this is going to get messy...i need to know why geet doesn't like her...did it have to do with nik?????...hmmm...what will happen next?...maybe maan and geet get stuck in the store room and keep up with tradition😉...loved it amru👏👏👏⭐️

Originally posted by: undisclosed

aaahhh...i loved maan and geet's conversation in the store room👏👏...that was awesome...i love how they are getting closer and closer and how they talk to eachother...uh oh!...the new entries😲...geet does not like and can't stand one of them😲...this is going to get messy...i need to know why geet doesn't like her...did it have to do with nik?????...hmmm...what will happen next?...maybe maan and geet get stuck in the store room and keep up with tradition😉...loved it amru⭐️