Funny Maaneet SS - 'PYAR KE LIYE' (completed)

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Part 7

G: acha hua. he has gone.
suddenly a scene from a horror movie that she watched in her childhood pops into her mind
G:(selftalk)mujhe yaad aagayi.in tht movie before killing d heroine,d hero would do d same things whatever maan sir did just now. i think maan sir would have also watched that movie.tht means maan he is going to kill me. hey na babaji? ab mein kya karu? geet! darye math.if u use ur brain for once, u can save your life. decide for yourself. brain ya jaan. kuch socho geet.what would the hero do next in that movie. instead of water he would bring blood in the glass.....,

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

lovely... why ur part so small.. like 3 lines...
can't we have big one...

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 8
G:(sekftalk) if maan sir also brings blood in the glass, then it is confirmed that he is going to kill me.
geet closes her eyes tightly in fear and prays babaji. her cabin door opens slowly. geet's heart beats speed up

M: (calls softly)geet
G:....
M:geet, aankhein kholo
G:nai
M:maine kaha tha na? aankhein kholo aur pani peevo
Geet is shivering.she opens her eyes slowly and sees the glass.it is full of blood.geet is shocked to death and screams in fear
G: khoon,khoon
geet pushes the glass from maan's hand and it is scattered on the files on geet's table.
pinky:geet,pagal hogayi kya?

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Part 3,4,5,6,7 & 8 were fantastic,

loved it!!!!

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Part 9
pinky shakes geet's shoulders.
pinky: geeeeettttt! wake up! wake up
Geet instantly wakes up from her sleep and looks around the room and checks the watch. it was 2 am.
pinky: geet!
G: haan pinky
pinky: kya hua geet?
G: wo sapna...
pinky: uff. today also u had tht horror dream?
G:haan
pinky:acha! wht happened in ur dream today? has maan sir murdered you or not?
G: not yet. may be tomorrow
pinky: let him murder you soon
G:tum yesa kyun bol rahi ho pinky?
pinky: because, then only i can sleep peacefully.
G:sorry pinky. everynight maan sir comes in my dream. is mein meri galti kya hai?

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

i m smiling while readding all the parts................ part 1 to part 9 all r superub

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Part 10
pinky: geet! it's all your fault only
G: kya?
pinky:haan. tu sach mein maan sir se pyar karti hu hena?
G:haan pinky
Pinky: then y are you always having horror dreams about him. before going to sleep imagine something romantic about him yaar. then you will have hot hot romantic dreams
G: i've already tried it
pinky:acha. wo sapna kaise tha?
G:pucho math pinky.the more i imagine romantically about maan sir, the more he becomes horror in my dreams. mein kya karu?
pinky:ye tho bohat buri bath hai. par geet yesa kyun hotha hai?
G:kyunki sach mein maan sir uthna bada dust danav hai

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

loved the updates ... God these two are defo from the circus ... 😆 ...

instead of seeing romantic dreams .. she is imaginign her murder ....

🤣

am loving it

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syedah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

welcome back and congrats....

love the way you write..

add me to ur PM please and keep writing,..

thanks

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 11
pinky: geet! if u keep on getting scarry dreams about maan sir, then how will u marry him and what will happen in your Suhaag raat
G: pinki! tumari gandhe gandhe imagination ban karo. hamare suhaag rat mein bhi wohi hoga jo sab logon ko suhaag raat mein ho raha hai. samji tum. ab sojao
pinki: par ek bath pakka geet
G:kya?
pinki: everyday if you are dreaming like this you are not going to confess your feelings for him in the first place. then you will become a famous horror story writer like J.K.Rowling. but with one difference instead of "Harry Potter" u 'll write "Maan Monster"