Funny Maaneet SS - 'PYAR KE LIYE' (completed)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Omg... he said ILU to pinky 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 17
pinky: kya???
maan comes 2 his senses
M:(selftalk) ye maine kya keh diya? has pinky heard it?
Pinky:sir...
M:tumne suna nai maine kya kaha?
pinky:suna sir
maan closes his eyes in frustration.
M:kya kaha?
pinky: I Love you pinky
M:(angry) i said " i'll call u later". but ur ears have heard something else. kaam par dhyan rako. i want decipline in my office. samji tum?
maan cuts d call immediately and smirks.
pinky is super duper confused.
pinky: has he said ILU or not?
geet comes and overhears pinky's murmer
G: pinky who said ILU to u?
pinky: maan sir
Geet blasts into laughter

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Part 18
G:pinky! kaam par dhyan rakho.
geet leaves.
pinky: has maan sir said it or not?

finally maan comes to KC
G:(selftalk) geet beta! ye tumari akri mauka hai. ab jakar maan sir ko sab kuch bata do

geet comes in2 maan's cabin and he is working on his laptop. he doesn't notice geet. geet clears her throat. maan raises his head and sees geet. maaneet hearts jump seeing each other and eyelock. after some time both come outta trance.
M: bolo geet
she doesn't know hw 2 start. so she remains silent.he again revert back to his laptop.
geet again clears her throat. maan senses d something....

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Part 19

maan senses d something something with geet and decides to play with her for some time.
M:geet! zara kareeb aao
G:(selftalk) why is he calling me closer? is he going to confess now?
M:geet! jaldi aao
geet is so excited and comes close to maan. She is so shy to look into his eyes and lowers her gaze.
M:geet! meri taraf dekho
Geet is too shy n she shakes her head in denial.
Maan smiles and comes still closer to geet.
geet's heart skips a beat
M: geet, sirf ek bar mera ankhon mein dekho
Geet again nodes her head in denial.
M:ok. tumari haath dekhao
G:(selftalk) wht is he going 2 do?

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Monali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

All 19 parts r awesome... continue soon

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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Awwwwww Tonya ..you are back...n that too with a bang.
me too happy to see you here...you can't imagine how much I missed you n your dhamakedaar updates.
a big jhappi to you from my side.....🤗
me loving this FF....me having gala time as usual reading the updates.....😳
continue soon...buddy.😳

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 20
G:(selftalk) is he going to propose me now?
M: geet, tumari aankhein ban karo
geet closes her eyes and smiles.
G:(selftalk)hey babaji! i thought confession is very difficult. but maan sir is making it very simple. shukriya babaji. dust danav. had he proposed me 10 months back itself, atleast i could have saved myself from those scary dreams
M:(calls softly)geet!
geet is lost in her own world
M:geet
G:...
M:(selftalk)has she slept?
M:geeeetttt
G:ji sir
M:aankhein math kholo. now i'm going 2 give u onething
Geet starts to breath heavily. maan enjoys geet's restlessness and smiles

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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

haila wonderful part..wondering what will Maan tell her

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Part 21
G:(selftalk)this is d most important event in my life. shukriya babaji!
Maan places a "Vicks" cough tablet on her palm
geet mistakes that for wedding ring and becomes emotional.
G:maan sir! i have been looking for this day for d past 10 months. thanks
Maan understands what she is saying
M:(selftalk) mein jantha hu geet. tum mujse kitna pyar karthi ho. i love you geet
geet opens her eyes and sees d "Vicks" in her palm. geet couldn't believe her own eyes
G:(selftalk)shayad ye bhi sapna hai.
M:(selftalk)geet! bus.sirf 3 din intezzar karo. tereliye mein diamond ring doonga.

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Part 22
Geet pinches her hand n feels d pain.
G:(selftalk) ye tho sach hai
Maan smiles
now geet pinches maan's hand
M:ouch. geet's why did u pinch me?
G:dard horah hai kya?
M:bohat
G:iska matlab, ye sach hai
M:haan geet, sach mein mujhe dard horah hai
G:wo nai. sach mein apne mujhe ye "Vicks" diya. right?
M:haan
G:(disoppinted&selftalk) dust danav. here i'm expecting a wedding ring. par ye tho vicks company ka brand ambassador banakar mujse khel rahe hai.ab geet ki kaam dekhiye sir
M:geet! tum kya soch rahi ho?
G:kuch nai. waise be, ye kya hai?
M:geet! ise vicks kehte hai
G:ji