Funny Maaneet SS - 'PYAR KE LIYE' (completed)

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ramahesh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

hey really missing u dear...
143 yaar 🤗

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Part 3

through the glass blinds, maan sees geet holding her heart with her eyes closed.

M:(selftalk) geet ko kya hogayi? why is she holding her heart?
suddenly maan's brain overworks and he is agitated.
M:(selftalk) lagta hai, geet ko heart attack hai. jald se kuch karna hi padega.
maan is worried and rushes to geet's cabin
M: geeeeetttt!!!
G:(shocked,opens her eyes&selftalk) hey babaji! why is he shouting? I din do any wrong
Maan doesn't know how to react&save geet & again he shouts in fear: geeeettt!
G:(nervous,still holding heart&selftalk) has he heard what i said a few minutes ago?

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hehehe..confusion confusion😆....do conti soon plz

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Part 4
maan comes outta shock and composes himself and calls adi on intercom.
M:adi
adi: ji sir
M: ambulance ko bulao
adi: kis ke liye sir?
M: geet keliye. jaldi
G:(shocked&selftalk) mere liye ambulance? lekin kyun?
adi: geet ko kya hua sir?
M: adi, sawal math pucho. call the ambulance immediately. it's urgent
maan cuts the call.
geet is so terrified at maan's actions. (hey buddies, this is not that 'ACTION')
G:(selftalk) hey babaji! why is he calling ambulance? is he going to beat me to death? par meri galti kya hai?
geet imagines maan as an old bollywood movie villain.

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kuhu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

All the parts are just awsome 👏 like always

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misschulbuli

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

I was badly missing your funny OS's n FF's! 😊 Gud to c u back in "Action" 😆

Edited by misschulbuli - 14 years ago

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Part 5

maan takes the water glass which geet emptied a few minutes ago
G:(scared&selftalk) hey babaji! why is he taking the empty glass? is he going to hit my head with it? ye amrish puri ka beta ka tarah kyun behave kar rahe hai?
Maan is so worried about geet. so didn't notice the glass is empty. so he brings the glass close to geet's mouth and asks her to drink water from it
M: geet! pani peevo
Geet lowers her head, sees d empty glass
G:(selftalk)kali glass se pani kaise peeloon?
Maan tilts d glass into her mouth
M:peevo
Geet is more terrified by this act and she silently reads his face

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

omg omg omg omg omg u r back............................. 143 tonya............... love u......................

first of all welcome back.............................................................. thanks for writing................. we were missing your action and you at the forum............................... thanks for coming back....................................... life was being dull from loast some days ............. as the writers were leaving the forum and who so ever r here not updating properly on time...........................

Edited by maansee - 14 years ago

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Part 6

M:mera muh kyun dekh rahi ho. peevo
G:(gathers courage and speaks up) empty
M:kya?
G: empty hai
M: kya empty?
G: glass
maan now only notices the empty glass in his hand and he is confused.
M: but geet, you haven't drink the water yet. then how did it become empty?(buddies,i think, in geet's worry MSK's brain has stopped working)
G: sir, ye glass pehle se gali tha
M:nai geet. it was full
G: (selftalk) hey babaji! sirko kya hogaya? has anyone hit his head with glass?
G:nai sir...
M:chup. tumari tabayat teek nai hai. jyada math bolo. mein pani lekarata hun
maan leaves..
G: ufffff

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maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tonyahk
Part 6

M:mera muh kyun dekh rahi ho. peevo
G:(gathers courage and speaks up) empty
M:kya?
G: empty hai
M: kya empty?
G: glass
maan now only notices the empty glass in his hand and he is confused.
M: but geet, you haven't drink the water yet. then how did it become empty?(buddies,i think, in geet's worry MSK's brain has stopped working)
G: sir, ye glass pehle se gali tha
M:nai geet. it was full
G: (selftalk) hey babaji! sirko kya hogaya? has anyone hit his head with glass?
G:nai sir...
M:chup. tumari tabayat teek nai hai. jyada math bolo. mein pani lekarata hun
maan leaves..
G: ufffff